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~The Incomplete Love Story~Pg76 10/3 End (Page 54)

blah_blah IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 July 2006 at 9:58am | IP Logged
awesome part!!!! Clap Clap

prakriti IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 July 2006 at 10:41am | IP Logged
i finally caught up! awesum updates! do continue! Smile LOL
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Posted: 10 July 2006 at 11:09am | IP Logged

Originally posted by geeri

please don't seprate them and please make the next part nice or cute and they get back together

lol. Hang in there. And I'll continue soon!

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Originally posted by Mehandikhan

great plz cont soon. Clap


Thank you! Keep reading! 

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great soo like when r u posting the next part and al??!!??

luv hina
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Posted: 10 July 2006 at 5:52pm | IP Logged
Really gd fanfic - gd portrayal of wedded life - its not always lovey dovey = it can b hard to make it work especially if ur stubborn like those two!

lol! Grt part!

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hey g8t prt!!!hope they stop fighting sooon!!! btw is tha picture thing still a mystey or chapter closed???
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~Incomplete Love Story~

Angad got rid of his cretches, for he could walk on his own two feet now. He got dressed one morning, he had to turn in his latest article. His articles had gotten a huge response. He never signed his articles with his real name, instead he signed them with "Zaib." The whole city wanted to know who he was, but no one had a clue, besides the editor.

Kripa's business was making money as she spoke. Kripa was dealing with the finest business men of the time. Everyone wanted to deal with her, but only the lucky did. Prithvi and Kripa stayed in close contact, Prithvi took care of legal matters for her even in India.

As for Angad and Kripa they still had coldness between them. Angad wanted to tell Kripa the truth, but he wanted Kripa to find out only when she herself wanted to. Kripa didn't want to hear anything from Angad. They rarely spoke to each other. Even with living under the same roof, they both lived like strangers.

Today Angad and Kripa were both happy. Both their faces were glowing, for Aryan was coming back from his camp. They both anxiously wanted for the bus to come drop him off. Seconds turned into minutes, and minutes turned into hours, but there wasn't any sign of Aryan or the bus.

Angad- What time was he supposed to be here?
Kripa- Two thirty, but wait let me check again
Kripa took out the papers which had the information about the camp
K- It says arrival time for Aryan would be 2:30
A- ****! Why isn't he here yet? Here give me the number I'll call them------

Angad picked up the phone.
A- Hello
- Sir this is the bus company speaking. Aryan Khaana was riding our bus back from summer camp---
A- Yes, wheres he? He was supposed to be home by 2:30, where is he?
-Sir calm down, I'm trying to tell you the bus had an accident.
A- What! Is Aryan okay? Where is he?
- We don't know whose okay yet and whose not, we're still trying to take the students out of the bus, if you could come to the site where it happened than---
A- I'm coming, where?
- Off of the 71 highway.
A- Okay thanks

K- What happened Angad? Wheres Aryan? Is he okay?
A- I'll tell you on the way, come on lets go
Kripa could tell Angad was tensed. So she did as he said without asking questions. In the car Angad was speeding. Kripa couldn't take it anymore, she decided to ask him.
K- At least now tell me, wheres Aryan?
A- The bus had an accident, thats where we're going
K- What? Do you if hes okay
A- No they didn't know
Kripa was crying.
A- Calm down Kripa, he'll be okay
Kripa wasn't satisfied by Angad' words. She wouldn't believe Aryans okay until she saw him with her own eyes. Angad was scared too, but he tried to stay strong.

Kripa and Angad reached the site. The bus was flipped on its back. Police and ambulances were everywhere. Parents were with their kids.
Angad and Kripa ran to a police man.
A- Aryan, Aryan Khaana where is he?
P- One second
The police man went to another police officer and they looked at a list.

Angad hugged a crying Kripa. Kripa hugged him back, they were both scared.
K- He'll be okay right Angad
A- Of coarse he will

The officer came back to them.
P- He was one of them few kids that was taken to the hospital---
A- Which one?
P- New York City Hospital
A- Thanks

Angad and Kripa drove to the hospital. They went to the receptionist.
A- Which room is Aryan Khaana in?
Lady- One second.....oh he was the kid brought from the bus accident?
K- Yes, yes thats him
Lady- Room 148, its on the third floor
A- Thanks

Angad and Kripa rushed to his room. When they went in doctors were surrounding him.
Doc- Who are you?
A- I'm Angad Khaana and this is Kripa Khaana, we're his parents, is he okay?
Doc- It's very serious right now, he got hurt on the head. And he has lost a lot of blood.
Doc 2- Doctor we need more blood
Doc- Can one of you donate blood to him---
A- Of coarse, I will
Doc- Follow me than
Angad left the room Kripa went to Aryan. He had cuts on him. His forehead was bruised. She hugged him.
Doc- Ma'am could you please step out of the room
Kripa nodded. She sat outside.

Angad came to her half an hour later.
K- Is he getting the blood?
Angad nodded. He sat beside Kripa. Kripa hugged him. Even though they had great distances between them, right now all that mattered was Aryan. For Aryan they could do anything.

Doc- He got the blood. Fortunately he is out of danger, so theres nothing to worry about anymore.
Kripa gave out a sigh of relief.
K- Can we meet him?
Doc- We just gave him medicine, he should be sleeping right now...
A- Thank you,
Doc- No problem, he'll be discharged tomorrow morning, so if you guys would like you can go home--
K- No we'll stay here, right Angad
A- Yeah
Doc- As you wish

Kripa had her head on Angad's shoulder. And Angad had his head rested on her head. Neither of them could sleep.
K- Angad
A- Yeah
K- I want to know now
A- What
K- Every story has two sides to it, I want to know your side of the story, about Mishty....only if you want to tell me that is.
A- I thought you would never ask. When you Josh and Ria went skiing I was in the lobby. That's when Mishty came. She wanted to say good bye to me for the last time. That was nothing. She kissed me, but I swear I backed off. As you know she loved me, but she left to Australia. and before she left she wanted to see me, that's it. And as for me not tell you about her and that stupid kiss, I didn't tell you because I didn't give that much importance to it. For me her and her kiss had no meaning, and I didn't want to give importance to it by telling you. But if your hurt by that matter than I'm sorry---
K- You know what I'm going to say now right
A- Sorry
K- Yeah, I'm sorry, I really hate myself right now, I should of listened to you, I let so many distances come in between us, I'm just so stupid, I don't deserve you, Im sorry---
A- Shut up! You do deserve me, and don't' you ever say you don't'. I love you. And I know you love me too. I need you Kripa, please don't ever suspect me of anything again----
K- I won't, but why didn't you tell me all this b4
A- Bcause I wanted u to ask me, I guess I got a sort of an ego myself
K- Don't worry, I heard all guys have their male egos
ANgad smiled.
A- But Kripa how did you find out about Mishty?
K- She sent a letter
A- Oh
K- Yeah its on the coffee table just in case u want to read it
A- So you read my letter
K- ........Sorry
A- Your forgiven
Kripa leaned in and kissed him. Angad kissed back more passionately and harder. Angad slipped his arms around Kripa's waist. Kripa put her arms around his neck and in his hair. They noticed they were kissing in a public area so they quickly stopped. They both smiled.

K- So whats been going on with you? I mean what are you always writing?
Angad laughed.
A- You know Zaib?
K- Zaib? OMG Zaib!!! The man everyone in New York is crazy about Zaib! Who doesn't know him! Everyone in my office is crazy about him and.......wait why are we talking about Zaib?
Angad smiled.
K- No! No! Your---
A- The one and only Zaib!
Kripa hugged Angad.
K- Do you even have any idea how popular you are?
A- A lot
Kripa laughed.
A- Your business is doing good too I hear.
K- Yeah
A- Kripa have you noticed something
K- We're both professionally doing good in our lives
A- Besides that
K- What
A- Every time we serperate Aryan brings us together, today we talked this out and ending our fight because of him. Because of him we're here and---
K- He's our little cupid, he always brings us back together.
Angad and Kripa held each other the rest of the night. They had everything, which was each other and Aryan. Aryan, the apple of their eyes was their angel.

I kind of feel guilty for updating this fan fic, because I was supposed to update Destiny. Sorry for you Desiny fans, but I'l update that soon. I hope you liked this part! Their back together, lol. Do comment!!!

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