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~The Incomplete Love Story~Pg76 10/3 End (Page 41)

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hey i just read ur whole fanfic and its awesome!!!!
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awwww sooo cute....i love aryan!! he's just tooo cute...lol..contineu soon
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Originally posted by nabz8888

that was fantastic!!! omg! i don't know what else to say except that once again, a fantastic job done n to cont. soon!!! best of luck for ur finals btw Big smile

 

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Thanks for all your great nice comments!!!
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~The Incomplete Love Story~

Ary- Mom, you can shift your business and everything to New York
K- I know I can beta, but I've lived my whole life-----------------------
Kripa realized that she was asking Aryan to change his life style if he moved to "India. She felt bad.

K-Just like you lived your whole life there.........I'm so sorry Aryan, I didn't even realize I was asking you to leave the place you lived all your life
A- So your going back with us Kripa
Kripa smiled. She hugged Angad, but then a tear rolled out of her eye and she let go of him
A- Whats the matter Kripa?
Right then Angad got a call. After he hung up Kripa noticed he looked upset.
K- Angad whats the matter?
A- We have to go back....I have a basketball game coming up.
K- Oh..
Angad noticed Kripa got sad. He took her hand in his.
A- Kripa, you are going back with me right?
K------------------
A- Please say you'll go back with me
K- Angad.....I can't right now...I have to do something really important
A- What's more important than our relationship, then our family?
K- Angad try to understand------
A- Try to understand? Im asking you to go home with me and your---..... Fine, just tell me why you can't go back with me
K- Prithvi
A- Prithvi?
K- I have to find Priya, Prithvi's whole life got ruined because of us, Priya left him now don't you think it's our responsibility to find her?
A- Yeah but--
K- But what Angad? I have to find her and tell her everything she saw and heard was a misunderstanding
A- Kripa, I don't have to go back until two days, lets find Priya
K- Really?
A- Really

Ary- Whose Priya?
A- Prithvi's wife, now you go play, me and mom have work to do
Ary- Ok

Aryan left and Kripa and Angad got to work.
K- We should call her parents
A- You got their number?
K- No, but I'm sure Prithvi does
A- Ok, why don't you tell him to come here, this way I can meet him too
K- Not a bad idea
A- I know, all my ideas are good
K- Sure
They both laughed and kissed, then Kripa got off the coach and went towards the phone and called Prithvi over. He said okay.

Kripa opened the door and Prithvi came in.
P- Hey
K- Hey, how are you?
P- Okay, but I can tell your on top of the world by your smile.
K- Yep and this smile is all thanks to you!
P- No, you found the will I was just a way
K- Still I owe you everything
Kripa grabbed his hand and took him towards the living room where Angad was.
When Prithvi saw Angad he got kind of awkward.
K- Well............. I'll go get some coffee
Kripa left.
A- Hey Prithvi
P- Hey...Angad
Angad got up and shook Prithvi's hand.
A- Prithvi I don't blame you if you hate me right now
P- I don't hate you Angad
A- Prithvi because of me and my stupidity Priya left---
Prithvi interupted- Angad, forget it okay, I don't want to talk about all this stuff now
A- I really am sorry Prithvi
P- What difference does your sorry make now? Huh? Tell me
A- Not much, but I'll make Priya come back to you---
Kripa came in
K- Here's your coffee Prithvi and Angad heres yours
P- Thanks
K- Okay Prithvi, if we want to bring Priya back to you then---
P- Kripa, please stop, I don't want to talk about all this
K- But Prithvi--
P- But what Kripa?
K- Don't you want Priya back?
P- Kripa, I never told you this but
K- But what?
P- Priya got married.
A- What?
P- Do I have to remind you guys it's been seven years, a lot changes in seven years, no one wants to live life alone, Priya didn't either, she got married.
K-What, I can't believe this
P- Not everyone is like you two, not everyone waits...............
A- Im sorry Prithvi
P- Don't be, I'll catch you guys later
Prithvi left.
Kripa and Angad were sitting down.
K- Poor Prithvi
A- Maybe he'll meet someone better
K- I hope
A- We'll you can go back now right?
K- Yeah
A- Good!
Kripa leaned in and kissed Angad.
A- What was that for?
K- Because I love you
A- You probably do love me but not more than I love you
K- Whatever
They both started making out when they heard something. It was Raj.
Raj- Uhh hmmm
They both seperated.
Kripa blushingly- Oh dad
Raj- I hope I didn't disturb you two
A- No, come sit dad
Raj- So when are you three going back?
A- Not three dad, four
R- What?
A- Dad, your going with us
R- Me?
K- Of coarse dad, you didn't think we would leave you alone did you?
R- I really appreciate you guys' love and care towards me, but
K- But what dad, your going with us and thats final
R- Beta, I lived with you for seven years, and now Rishi wants me to move to Australia with him
Rishi is Kripa's younger brother.
K- Do you want to go dad?
R- I don't mind going, I'm thinking of getting him married anyways, so I guess I have to go persuade him for that too
A- Okay, but you have to visit us often
R- Of coarse
K- Well tomorrow night is our flight
R- All the best to you guys
A- Thanks

The next day they were all packed. They said their warm goodbye to Raj. Raj would be leaving to Australia in one or two weeks as well. On their way to the airport Kripa was crying.

A- Please Kripa, stop crying, I promise you won't miss India
K-crying- How can you promise that? I miss it already
A- Fine, I promise we'll visit often
K- STOP THE CAR!!!
Angad quickly stopped.
A- What happened? Who died?
K- I forgot to say bye to Prithvi!
Aryan- But mom our flight
K- It'll only take five minutes, his house is nearbye too
A- Fine, but make it quick
K- I will

They drove to Prithvi's house.
K- Do you want to go inside too Angad?
A- No you go, I don't feel like it
K- Okay, if you say so

Kripa went inside. She found Prithvi in his office.
K- Prithvi
P- I thought you would forget me
K- I'm really going to miss you
P- Stupid! You could meet me anytime
They both hugged.
K- Prithvi will u promise me something?
P- What?
K- Promise me you'll date girls, promise me you'll try to move on
P- I don't know Kripa
K- Please Prithvi
P- Fine, anything for you, I promise
K- Thanks
P- And now you promise me something
K- Anything
P- You'll always remember me when you need help and tell me
K- Of coarse
P- Good, now go or you'll miss your flight
Kripa hugged him for the last time and left.
She went back to the car.
A- Ready
K- Yeah lets go
They next thing they knew they were on the flight to New York.
For Angad it was a day he only dreamt of, a day Kripa was with him, the day his family was together. For Kripa it was the day she was leaving her home country, but on the bright side she was leaving to a better world. A world which contained her husband and child. She felt complete around them. For Aryan it was the day his parents were together. He could see the happiness reflecting in their eyes. He knew he had the best parents in the world and he felt blessed to take birth in a family which had so much love.

To Be Continued


I'm kind of double minded on what should happen next that's why today's part wasn't that good. I need time to think. But I thought I owed it to you guys to post a part. I know I kept you waiting for too long. Well I want something really interesting to happen next so keep reading!!! Bye

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