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~The Incomplete Love Story~Pg76 10/3 End (Page 39)

KripAngad4ever IF-Dazzler

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that was a cute part Embarrassed                    continueeeee eeeeeeeee

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thank you for the nice comments. I really get great encouragement from them. Tomorrow is my last day of school, so let me assure you guys I'll be updating very soon. But tonight I have to study for finals, so I won't be able to. But perhaps tomorrow!
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no problem.....cant wait till tomorrow....and oh yeah good luck for your finals, i know how stressing they can be lol!!! but im sure u'll do terrific! Wink
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awesome part cont soon Clap
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heyyy!!! of luck to u on ur finals!!!!..i cant wait to read ur new parts for ur fanfics!!!...they rock as usual!!! continue when u can!!!! of luck again!!!! Big smile
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Thanks a lot for being patient, I'm about to post the next part in like 2 minutes.
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Incomplete Love Story

Kripa was catching up on some office work when she got a call from Prithvi. She excitedly picked it up.
K- Hey, any news!!!!
P- Calm down, actually I did find some information out, umm you think we can meet?
K- Of coarse, I'll come to your house
P- That's great, c u then
K- Okay bye

Kripa got ready. Angad, Raj, and Aryan had gone out bowling. She left in her car.
At Prithvi's Place:
K- So What'd did you find out?
P- Well, you know the company I had to find, with the crown and everything
K- Yeah
P- I found them, its called Super Photo
K- That's great!!!
P- Yep and I found out that this guy names Avinash did the pictures, but I couldn't find out who paid him to make them, they had no records of it.
K- Crap! But, but can't we just find out from Avinash?
P- Avinash died seven years ago
K- What?
P- Yeah, it turns out he was murdered
K- What! Prithvi, what if the person who paid him to make the pictures murdered him?
P- It's possible, I mean those pictures were made seven years ago and he got murdered seven years ago too, I don't think its a coincidence
K- Me neither...
P- But we got all the evidence we needed, all you have to do is take Angad to Super Photo and they'll tell him the truth
K- I really love you Prithvi
Prithvi gave Kripa a small smile.
P- I know, now go to Angad, go get your love back
K- But Prithvi.....I won't be unfair to you. I promise I'll bring Priya back to you, even if I have to find her in every part of the world, I'll bring her back.
P- You still have hope?
K- Yes! And you should too, our sad days our over Prithvi.
P- Your like a sister to me, if your happy then so am I.
K- And if your happy, then I am too, but your not happy. Prithvi soon you'll be the happiest man in this world, you'll have Priya with you.
P- Thanks Kripa

Kripa left to home. She was eager to tell Angad the truth. She had fear though that Angad won't believe. She went home, she saw Aryan and Raj on the sofa watching t'v.
K- Dad, wheres Angad?
R- He's on the terrace honey
K- Thanks

Kripa left towards the terrace. She saw Angad looking around.
K- Angad!!!
A- What is it?
K- I have to tell you something!
A- Me too
AK- You first!
A- You first
K- No you first, please!
A- Okay, Kripa for the past couple of days I've been thining about you, me, about us. I don't know what happened to me, I don't know why I didn't trust you, but now, now I do! I trust you Kripa! I know my Kripa can't ever betray me, I know the whole world can change colors, but can't. I'm really sorry for not trusting you before.
K- Angad, are you serious?
A- yes, I love you, but even more than that I trust you.
Kripa smiled.
K- Then I guess I won't be needing to take you to Super Photo.
A - What?
K- I found evidence that would make you trust me, the pictures that were made at a shop named Super Photo, someone made a man named Avinash to make them, but it was weird. Avinash died seven years ago, around the time those pictures were made----
Before Kripa could finish Angad was kissing her. She joined him in the kiss. When they kissed everything felt perfect, the world felt beautiful, the birds were singing, and time stopped in place.

When they pulled away, Angad and Kripa both had tears in their eyes.
A- I love you more than anything Kripa, I promise I'll never leave you again
K- I love you too Angad, and I promise I won't ever let you leave
Aryan- And i love you both!
Angad and Kripa turned around to find Aryan.
Ary- So does this mean were a happy family now?
A- Yes, we're a happy family now
Ary- All thanks to me, I mean I had trust in your guys' love when you guys didn't
A- Thanks, we'll repay the favor by picking out a really cute girl for you
K- Angad!
The three hugged.

Angad and Kripa told Raj they were back together again. He was very happy for them. Aryan was the happiest kid in the world.

Ary- So now we have to get you two married
A- Actually we're still married
Ary- You are?
A- Kripa will tell you that story, won't you Kripa?
K- Yeah, umm actually the divorce papers were never submitted, so yes we're still married
Ary- Okay that saves us a couple of thousand dollars
K- Aryan!
Ary- Just kidding, but have you two decided where were going to live?
A- Obviously in New York
K- What? Why can't we stay in India?
A- Well I can't pursue my career in India, I'm a basketball player
K- I know but I've lived in India all my life, I can never even imagine of leaving and starting a life elsewhere.

Aryan knew he had to do something. He couldn't let his parents seperate when they were so close to each other.

Well that's it for today, I think I'll update in like 2 days. Well bye till then. Leave lots of comments!

nabz8888 Goldie

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that was fantastic!!! omg! i don't know what else to say except that once again, a fantastic job done n to cont. soon!!! best of luck for ur finals btw Big smile

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