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~The Incomplete Love Story~Pg76 10/3 End (Page 33)

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~Incomplete Love Story~

They went home and Angad entered inside where he spotted Raj.

A- Dad!
R- Angad, I cant believe your finally here!
Angad touched Raj's feet and got his blessings and then they both hugged.

R- Well I guess you better go see Aryan, we'll talk later.
A- Okay

Kripa led Angad to Aryan's room. Angad came in and saw him reading a magazine.
They both hugged.
Ary- Dad, why r u here?
A- I had to be with you, I promise you'll be better in no time!
Ary- Yeah, I'm getting better and my fever is almost gone too
A- Good
K- Angad you must be tired, I'll show you your room.
A- No there's no need for that, I'll just go to a hotel
K- No you have to stay here
A- It's fine Kripa--
K- Angad, when I went to your house you didn't let me stay in a hotel, so why should it be any different with you?
Ary- Mom has a point
A- Okay, you guys win

Kripa and Aryan both smiled at each other.
Kripa led Angad to his room.
K- If you need anything then just tell me
A- Sure...thanks
K- No problem

Kripa was about to walk out when Angad called her name again.
A- Kripa
K- Yeah
A- Sorry
K- For what?
A- For coming here, I know this is supposed to be your summer with Aryan....and here I am, just barging in
K- Angad, when I came to New York, did you think I was barging in
A- No, of coarse not, In fact I was glad you were there--
K- Then why do you think I'm not glad you here?
Kripa gave Angad a smile and walked out the room.

Raj went on a walk. Aryan was playing video games with Angad, and Kripa was on the phone with someone in her bedroom.
K- Hello, Prithvi, I need to meet you
P- Sure, when?
K- How about now, just meet me at the coffee shop.
P- Sure, I'll be there in fifteen minutes
K- Thanks, bye

Kripa went downstairs.
K- Umm Angad, can I ask you for a favor?
A- Yeah
K- Dad went on a walk and I need to go for some important work, could you please look after Aryan.
A- Kripa, he's my son, of coarse I'll look after him
K- Thanks, I'll be back in like 45 minutes, bye
Ary&A- Bye

Kripa left and went towards the coffee shop. Prithvi wasn't there yet, so she sat down and waited for him. A couple of minutes later Prithvi came.
P- Hey
K- Hi, sorry for calling you hear on short notice
P- No prob, I wasn't doing anything much anyway, so why did you call me here anyway?
K- Well, Prithvi, I need you help
P- With what?
K- You know those pictures that were made with both of us together
P-angry- Yes, what about them?
K- Well I need to know who made those, someone evidently put our pictures together and made it look like we were kissing and hugging, and it has to be some kind of professional who did it.
P- But it'll be impossible to find who made them--
K- Nothing is impossible if we try Prithvi, besides I already have a leading clue
P- What?
K- Here, look.
Kripa got out the pictures and showed Prithvi the back of the pictures. It had crowns on the back of them and on the corner it said Mumbai.
P- What about it?
K- The pictures were made here in Mumbai and whatever the company is their logo has to be a crown. So all we need to do is find a company who has a crown as a logo.
P- Well I guess it is a pretty good lead
K- So you think we'll find whoever made it
P- Maybe, I'll get on it right away
K- Thanks so much Prithvi, your the best
P- Well what can I say, I rock!
Kripa smiled at him and Prithvi laughed.
K- Well I have to go home
P- Okay, I'll go try to find some information on this
K- Than----
P- Shut up, I dont' want to hear the "T" word
K- Okay
Kripa got up to leave but before she left she yelled
K- Thanks!
Kripa then left the coffee shop and went home. She saw Raj, Angad, and Aryan in the living room.

K- I'm back
R- Well honey, I'm going to sleep now
K- But dad, it's only 7
R- I know, but I'm getting old, so I can't stay awake too long
K- okay
R- Good night kids
Ary-K-A- Good night
With that Raj went upstairs to sleep( I tried getting him out of the picture for a while, lol)

K- So what do you guys want for dinner?
Ary- Pizza!!!
A- Hey, only soup for you
Aryan gave Kripa a "help" look.
K- Umm...Angad, its pizza, it cant do any harm, besides Aryan is getting better
A- Exactly, he's getting better, so we shouldn't ruin his health with pizza right now
Aryan and Kripa- Take a chill pill
A- Fine! We'll just call the doctor and see what he has to say about this
K- Wait dont!
A- And why not?
K- Umm...the doctor is.....umm....
Ary- Out of town
A- Out of town?
K- Yeah, yeah out of town
A- Then I'll just ask another doctor
K- Fine! Aryan won't eat pizza
Ary- What?
A- Thank you
K- Sorry kiddo
Aryan was kind of disappointed.
A- Cheer up buddy, look theres so many choices of soups you have to choose from
K- Yeah there's tomato, chicken noodle, onion,---
Ary- I'll take chicken noodle
K- Hey, about we all eat soup today then
A- Yeah, see aren't we nice parents?
Ary- Complimenting ourselves are we dad?
A- Well, what can I say, I mean I am the best
K- Okay three chicken noodle soups coming up!

Kripa was making the soup and Angad set the table.
K- Dinners ready
A- And so is the table
Aryan- Good, I'm starving

They ate their soups and no one was talking.
Ary- Ok, this is creepy, why are you both so quiet?
K- Well u guys aren't talking
A- No you guys aren't talking
K- I would talk if you talked
A- I would talk if you talked and gave me something to talk about
Ary- Okay, lets talk
AK- Kids?
Ary- Yes, kids, what r you guys' future plans about having anymore kids? I remember you guys saying you always wanted a daughter, you know its not too late
Kripa chocked on her soup. Angad patted her back and handed her a water. After drinking the water both Angad and Kripa didn't know how to react.
Ary- I know what you guys are thinking, "Will I be able to share your love with another sibling?" But let me tell you guys, I don't mind it at all. Besides I know you guys will love me more than my to be brother or sister.
A- Well Aryan I think it's bed time for you
K- I agree
Ary- But I'm not sleepy
K- Oh yes you are
Angad picked up Aryan took him to his room. Kripa and Angad tucked Aryan in and said good night. When they were leaving Aryan closed his eyes and said
Ary- Think about what I said!
Kripa blushed like crazy and Angad saw her blush. He smiled to himself.. They were both happy, but they didn't know what the other was thinking.

As they walked out of the room:
K- He talks a lot for a 7 yr old
A- Yeah, I know.....I guess he watched too much tv
K- Yeah, probably, well good night
A- Good night

They both went to their rooms thinking about each other.

I hope you liked it. Leave comments!!!

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Posted: 13 May 2006 at 8:49pm | IP Logged
i agree ...he talks too much for a seven year old kid. lol
ne wayz that was great, by ne chance r u posting another part today?

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