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~The Incomplete Love Story~Pg76 10/3 End (Page 28)

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omg...marevllous parts
especially the last part was soo cute mindblowing\
cont soon

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Cry Cry it was damn sad but funny too LOL anywes cont soon Wink
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it was areally gud part but it was sad to see kripa&Angad go apart again
i hope angad finds out the truth that their is nothing between pritvi and kripa.
so that angad and kripa could be together.
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hey awsome part....last last part was actually on page 21 not 18............plz cont soon Smile
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great plz cont soon. Clap
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Wow, thanks for the awesome comments!!!
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~Incomplete Love Story~

Kripa and Aryan boarded the plane and took their seats. The flight took off.

Aryan noticed Kripa's tears, which she was trying to hide.
Aryan- Mom you don't have to hide your tears from me
K- Tears.....im not crying
Ary- He really loves you, you know
K-crying- Then why doesn't he trust me?
Ary- I don't know what the reasons behind him not trusting you are....but even once in the last seven years did you even try to win his trust back?
K-........no
Ary- Then he's not the only one to blame, you are too.
K- .....It's not too late is it?
Ary- Better late than never
K- Your right
Ary- Then what are you waiting for mom, you only live once, don't waste any more time mom, win his trust back
K- Your right...... we only live once..........but if we do it right, then once is enough.
Aryan smiled at her.
K- I promise Aryan, I'll win Angad's trust back
Ary- Im happy for you both
K- But to win his trust I need him to come to India
Ary- I have a plan mom, how about a week after we get to India, you call dad and say I'm sick, dad will surely come then!
K- Yeah...but the second u get better he'll take you back with him
Ary- I'll say I want to stay longer
K- I dont know Aryan...
Ary- Come on mom! It'll work.
K- Okay!

After reaching India, Aryan and Kripa went home. They found Prithvi and Aryan waiting for them there.
Aryan ran straight to his grandma, Raj.
Ary- Hey Grandpa!
R- Hey, boy you've grown!
Ary- Yep, and Im going to grow even taller and then Im going to be a basketball player
R- A basketball player, thats nice
Ary- Yep!

Prithvi went to Aryan and picked him up.
P- hey buddy! Whats up?
Ary- Nutthin
P- So how about the 2 of us play a one on one later today
Ary- Okay, but u better get ready to lose
P- we'll c

K- Okay you guys can play all u want later, but first lets go eat, Im starving!
Ary- Me 2
P- Me 3
Ary- Grandpa, your supposed to say me 4
R- Okay Me 4

They all went to the dining room and ate dinner. Afterwards they talked for a little while. Prithvi went home and Raj went to sleep. Aryan and Kripa were left.
K- Call Angad, he must be worried
Ary- Okay
Kripa dialed the number and handed the phone to Aryan.
RING RING RING
Angad- Hello?
Aryan- Hey dad its me!
Angad- Hey!!! So hows India?
Aryan- Pretty nice! I love it!
A- Yep, Indias the best
Ary- So ur taking care of yourself right?
A- Yeah, dont worry about me, Im fine
Ary- Thats good
A- So hows dad and everybody doing?
Ary- Grandpas doing fine...
A- And....everyone else?
Ary- Whose everybody?
A- Umm...i dont know..Kripa!
Ary- Oh yeah...moms fine!
A- Good
Ary- Here talk to her
A- Ok
Aryan gave Kripa the phone.

K- Hello
A-...Hey
K- Are you doing ok?
A- Yeah....fine...you?
K- Great, so what r u doing?
A- I was about to go to basketball practice, but i still have like half an hour
K- That's cool
SILENCE
Angad finally spoke up- .....Kripa I'm working on it
K- Working on what?
A- Trusting you, I'm trying my best
K- I hope you succeed
A- Me too
K- Well bye
A- Bye, take care
K- You too

Preview: Angad comes to India!!!

Well I hope the part was worth reading!! Leave a bunch of comments if it was!



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Posted: 03 May 2006 at 5:34pm | IP Logged
hey
great part
i really lliked it
continue reall soon plz
Big smile


~~~Mahak~~~


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