Fan Fictions


Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

~The Incomplete Love Story~Pg76 10/3 End (Page 2)

karipa Goldie

Joined: 27 July 2005
Posts: 1840

Posted: 02 April 2006 at 6:56am | IP Logged

amneetkaur_24 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 12 December 2005
Posts: 2504

Posted: 02 April 2006 at 8:08am | IP Logged
I'll try to Continue later today.
sweet honey Goldie
sweet honey
sweet honey

Joined: 13 January 2006
Posts: 2134

Posted: 02 April 2006 at 9:15am | IP Logged
cont soon sounds interesting   Tongue
girlie18 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 17 April 2005
Posts: 4935

Posted: 02 April 2006 at 9:20am | IP Logged
Clap Clap Clap sounds interesting n its different from the otha fan fics that i av read so plzz continue soon
Pooja922 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 17 November 2005
Posts: 3175

Posted: 02 April 2006 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
its sounds outstanding!! continue soon!!
Supernatural_10 IF-Addictz

Joined: 11 November 2005
Posts: 71462

Posted: 02 April 2006 at 3:13pm | IP Logged
sounds interesting continue soon
sgokli IF-Dazzler

Joined: 02 June 2005
Posts: 3382

Posted: 02 April 2006 at 5:15pm | IP Logged
amneetkaur_24 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 12 December 2005
Posts: 2504

Posted: 02 April 2006 at 7:29pm | IP Logged
Kripa was sitting in her big office building. She had so much work to do she felt as if she didnt have time to breathe. Papers and files were everywhere. Her work was disturbed with a knock on the door.
K-Come in
A tall gentlemen stepped into the room. He was wearing a business suit. It was no other than Prithvi Bose, Kripa's best friend whom she had known since childhood. Every time she saw him, a smile spread across her face.

P-Good Afternoon Kripa
K-Hi Prithvi, whats up?
P-Well I was just looking over some contracts and legal documents and stuff, I got bored so I came to see you.
P- Kripa lets go out for dinner tonight.
K- Please, I have too much to do tonight, how about another day.
P- Plz, I hate eating by myself.
Kripa felt bad for Prithvi.
K-Prithvi I'm really sorry.
P- It's okay Kripa, I understand.
K-No Prithvi, I'm sorry about you being alone. I wish Priya didnt leave you. I hate her for not trusting you and it's all Angad's fault your alone today.
P- Kripa, forget all that, at least we have eachother right?
K- Yes, and lets go out tonight.
P- I thought you were busy.
K- I was?
They both laughed.

Dinner at a hotel:

As Kripa and Prithvi were eating they were talking.
P-So hows your dad doing?
K-Fine, In fact he's always the best this time of yeat.
P-Why this time of year....Oh wait I know, Summers here meaning...
Kripa cut in-Yes!!! Aryans coming!!!
P- Awesome I love that little guy! Isnt he 7 now?
P-So when are you going to go get him?
K-Well, I think I'm going to New York next week.
K-And like every year, I need u to look after the business.
P- Sure.

After the nice dinner Prithvi dropped Kripa at home. Kripa went inside her house. She spotted her dad, Raj, on the couch watching tv.
K-Hey dad, How are you?
Raj-I'm fine honey, how are you?
R-And I know why, your going to go get Aryan in a couple of days.
K-Yes dad. Then you can play with your grandson as long as youd like!
R- I cant wait.
K-Well dad, did you eat yet?
R-Yes, the maid made me my dinner.
K-Good, now you should go to sleep dad, you need to rest, I dont want anything to happen to your health.
R- Gosh, your just like your mother, always pestering me.
Raj always missed his wife after she died, but he knew he had the next best thing, his daughter Kripa, who resembled his wife so much.

That night Kripa decided to call Angad to inform him.
On the phone:
K- Hi Angad, It's me Kripa.
A- are you?
K- I'm..umm...good, and you?
A- Yeah...I'm good too.
K- And hows Aryan?
A- He's great, he's sleeping right now.
K- Oh, okay. Well I just wanted to tell you I'm coming to New York to get Aryan on Friday.
A- Oh yeah I almost forgot, thx for remind me.
K- Your welcome.
A- So what time will your flight be coming?
K- 6 P.M
A-So I guess I'll pick you up at 6
K-No you dont have to, I can catch a cab.
A-Come on Kripa, dont be silly, I'll pick you up.
K- Well c u then. Bye

The whole week Kripa was busy. She had to finish all her office work before she left. Prithvi dropped her off at the airport.
K-Okay Prithvi, I'll be back in like 4 days. If u need anything just call, oh yeah Mr. Gopal is going to come for a deal so talk to him for me, and Mr. Oberoi has some type of special offer, if you think its good say yes, if not, then reject him, and...
P- Kripa, Kripa, Kripa I'll handle everything! Now leave before you miss your flight!

Kripa and Prithvi had a friendly hug and Kripa left for New York. Little did she know, the next couple of days would change her life completely.

I hope you guys enjoyed the part! I'll continue soon!

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
love love love(ar,rm,aa)part 5 pg 21updt

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 26 27

Author: mithilalovesksg   Replies: 209   Views: 109768

mithilalovesksg 209 109768 07 December 2013 at 10:24am by ksgandjsg21
FF: Hate Or Love 2: P49: True Love: Pg 4

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 11 12

Author: -Jwalamukhi-   Replies: 93   Views: 46966

-Jwalamukhi- 93 46966 07 September 2009 at 7:06am by amazingneira
Without You I’m Incomplete

2 3

Author: xarmaanx   Replies: 19   Views: 3012

xarmaanx 19 3012 19 May 2009 at 10:43am by suvi_rox1
FFTo love or not to love.pt20 pg 22 31/10

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 23 24

Author: KC294   Replies: 184   Views: 39828

KC294 184 39828 04 November 2008 at 6:06am by sweet cherry
Love Blind Betrayed Love

2 3 4

Author: x_Roxy_x   Replies: 30   Views: 14008

x_Roxy_x 30 14008 10 September 2006 at 2:50pm by mannat.urwish

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index