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Dhadkan *Sujal And Kashish* (Page 6)

MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posted: 03 May 2006 at 3:49am | IP Logged
yaar iman tumne itna intezaar karwaya par a very sweet & cute part... Embarrassed
iman hum tumhari story ka wait karenge.. tum apne exams achche tarah se likhna.. ALL THE BEST..
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JaViA Senior Member

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Posted: 05 May 2006 at 2:25am | IP Logged
Sujal : Aunty mein pani de doon ga usse aap aaraaam kerein...
yeh keh ker Sujal Kashish k room ki taraf chala jaata hai
Sujal darwazay per knock kerta hai
Kashish : aray mama knock kernay ki kya zaroorat hai ..aa jaayein
Sujal ander aata hai
Kashish : Oh aap hain ....aap yahan kaisay ?
Sujal : woh aap ki mom ne paani bhij waya hai
Kashish : mama khud kyun nahin aayeen
Sujal : woh asal mein bauhat thaq gayeen thi ..isi wajah se
Kashish : oh acha
Kamray mein khamoshi ho jaati hai
Kashish : tu aao kyun nahin gaye shaadi mein ?
Sujal : woh kuch kaam kerna tha mujhay
Kashish : acha ..!! waisay aap ki aur Kripa ki dosti kaisay hui thi ?
Sujal : well..!! woh mere saath college mein perhti thi ..phir mera office bhi join
ker liya tha ..tu dosti khud ba khud hi ho gai ...
Kashish : woh aap ki sirf dost hai ya ....
Sujal : yeh har koi ek hi sawaal kyun poochta hai ..kya larka larki sirf dost nahin ho sakhtay
...waisay woh meri sirf dost hai aur kuch nahin ....
Kashish : acha
Sujal : aur aap ki aur Angad ki dosti kaisay hui?
Kashish : hum log school friends the ..aur phir college mein bhi ek saath aap hi ki tarah
khud ba khud dosti ho gai ...
Sujal : oh acha ..!!! ab mein poochta hooon woh aap ka sirf dost hai ya phir...
Kashish : sirf dost hai ...lekin mein ek baat kahoon
Sujal : ji boliyeh
Kashish : hmm plzzz bura nahin maaniyeh ga
Sujal : nahin maanonga
Kashish : meray khayal se woh Kripa ko pasand kerta hai
Sujal : kya?
Kashish : haan jis tarah se woh mujhse baat kerta hai Kripa k baare mein ..mujhay lagta hai k
Sujal : hmm meray khayal se Kripa bhi Angad ko chahiti hai
Kashish : thats gr88
Sujal : haan ..lekin Kripa kabhi is baat ka izhaar nahin keray gi Angad se
Kashish : aur na hi Angad ....
Sujal : tu phir ..?
Kashish : lagta hai ab hum donon ko hi in ko milana hoga.
Sujal : haan
Kashish : tu phir theek hai ..aj se mein aur aap dost
Sujal : dost bhi keh rahi ho aur aap bhi keh rahi hoo
Kashish : okay Sorry ..aaj se mein aur tum dost ...
Sujal : gr888
Kashish : waisay jab tum naye naye aaye the ..mujhay tum per bauhat gussa aaya tha
Sujal : kyun ?
Kashish : tumne mujhse mera room jo cheen lia tha
Sujal : oh I am sorry about that
Kashish : ab koi problem nahin ..waisay meray kamray ki halat kya hai ?
Sujal : khud ja ker hi dekh lo
Kashish apnay room ki taraf jaati hai
aur room ko dekh ker heraan reh jaati hai
woh room aur bhi acha lag raha hota hai
Kashish : wow..!!
Sujal : pasand aaya
Kashish : haan ..!! thanx
Sujal : kis k liyeh
Kashish : mera room theek rakhnay k liyeh
Sujal : waisay ab aap ki tabiyat kaisi hai
Kashish : ab behtar hai
Sujal : good ...ab aap aaraam kerein ..mein chalta hoon
Kashish : okay
Sujal : good night
Kashish : good night
Kashish apnay room mein ..mera matlab Charu k room mein chali jaati hai
Charu aur Kripa bhi shaadi se wapis aa jatay hain
Charu : Di aap nahin gayeen aaj itna maza aaya ...aur pata hai bhi hua tha ...udher
aur pata hai musik band ho gai thi tab bhi Kripa aur Angad dance ker rahe the
Kashish : kya???
Charu : haaan
Kashish khush ho jaati hai
Kashish Sujal k pass jaa rahi hoti hai
Charu : di aap kahan jaa rahi hain ?
Kashish : ek minute ati hoon
Kashish Sujal k pass jaati hai aur usse sab bata ti hai jo usse Charu ne bataya ho ta hai
Sujal : tu ab kya kerna chahiyeh ...
Kashish : hmm sochna parega..!!
Sujal : ji aap sochiyeh ..aur phir mujhay bata di jiyeh ga
Kashish : acha sahi hai
Kashish wapis apnay room mein chali jaati hai
Kashish to herself : yeh mujhay kya ho gaya tha ..mein Sujal ko subha bhi tu bata sakhti thi
Sujal to himself : Kashish ko dekhtay hi mujhay kya ho jaata hai ..mein kuch bol kyun nahin paata ...
aisi kya baat hai us mein
yahi sochtay sochtay donon so jaatay hain
Kher phir subha hoti hai
Lekin aaj Kashish Sujal ko naashtay k liyeh bulanay aati hai
Kashish : Sujal ..!!
Sujal : haan Kashish
Kashish : woh mama bula rahi hain naashtay k liyeh
Sujal : acha mein aa ta hooon
Kashish : theek hai
Kashish neechay chali jaati hai hai
Charu : Sujal kahan hai ?
Kashish : aa raha hai
Charu : woh Angad aaya tha ..
Kashish : tu
Charu : woh Kripa ko le ker gaya hai
Kashish : kya ??/ kahaan..??
Charu : hmm ghoomnay gaye hain shayad
Kashish : ghoomnay ??
Charu : haaan
Kashish : wah aaj taq mujhay tu nahin le ker gaya ..meray kahe baghair aur Kripa ko le gaya
Charu : tu di aap bhi chali jaayein na
Kashish : kis k saath
Charu : Sujal hai na
Kashish : koi aur nahin mila tumhein
Sujal : kya baatein ho rahi hain
CHaru : woh aap ...
Kashish : nahin nahi kuch nahin (glares at Charu)
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Thanx for all us comments......... Abhi itna hi likha hai baaqi baad mein ...yaaron meray liyeh dua kerna ..mere exams ho nay
wale hain ...

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Innocent_Angel Senior Member

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Posted: 05 May 2006 at 3:27am | IP Logged
hay i read all the parts...its mind blowingggggggg Clap
nikhat_niki Goldie

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Posted: 05 May 2006 at 4:18am | IP Logged
iman great and all the best for ur exams
AngelsHeaven IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 May 2006 at 4:19am | IP Logged
just caught up with ur story... it is rocking
i loved it.
plz continue soon
group_1223 Goldie

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Posted: 05 May 2006 at 7:18pm | IP Logged of luk wid ur examz...n im surei nshallah u ll do gr8....n ths part waz very gud...well dey alwayz 4 now.....n ya....all da best 4 da examz once agn...
MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posted: 05 May 2006 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
iman dear bohat bohat achche.... Clap thanku so much ki tumhare exams hothe hue bhi tumne story continue kii.. Smile Tongue Big smile .. aur hamesha ki tarah i just loved reading ur story... Clap
tumhare exams ke liye ALL THE BEST.. i hope that u write ur exams very well.... Smile
Riddhima Senior Member

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Posted: 06 May 2006 at 10:01am | IP Logged
exceleent part...keep it going Clap Clap

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