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Dhadkan *Sujal And Kashish* (Page 27)

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Posted: 25 July 2006 at 9:22am | IP Logged
Chetan : Bas Veena ab mein is baare mein koi baat nahin kerna chahita
Veena : lekin ager aap ki wajah se meri betay ki zindagi barbaad hui to mein aap ko kabhi maaf nahin keroon gi..!!
yeh keh ker Veena wahan se chali jaati hai
Kher phir subha hoti hai..!!
Aaj Sujal aur Kashish ko Kripa ki mom se us ki shaadi ki baat kerni hoti hai ..!!
(Kripa's mom is played by Meera of Kyunki saas bhi kahbi bahu thi aur un ka naam hmmm gayatri hota hai )
Sujal Kashish kp phone kerta hai ..!!
Kashish : Helloo ..haan boliyeh..!!
Sujal : Woh aaj Kripa k ghar jaana..
Sujal k kuch bolne se pehlay hi Kashish bolti hai
Kashish : haaan mein wahan pauhanch jaaon gi ..aap bhi aa jaiyeh ga..!!
Yeh keh ker Kashish phone rakh deti hai
Sujal bhi apnay ghar se nikalta hai ..!!
Sujal Kripa k ghar pauhanchta hai
Lekin Kashish kahiin bhi nazar nahin aa rahi hoti ..
Sujal pehlay kaafi der intezaar kerta hai aur jab kashish nahin aati to woh Kripa k ghar k ander chala jaata hai
Gayatri : Aray Sujal betay tum ..aao na
Sujal ander jaata hai aur dekhta hai k Kashish pehlay se hi wahan aayi hui hai
Kripa Sujal k paas aati hai aur halke se kehti hai
Kripa : itnee der lagadi tumne..ab jaldi mama se baat kero
Sujal : Choro yaar kya kerein gay baat ker k .!!
Kripa : Sujall....
Sujal : acha sorryy baba ..!! baat kernay hi to aaya hooon ..!!
Gayatri : kya baatein ho rahi hain donon mein..!! aur Kripa tumhari dost Kashish to bauhat hi chup chaap rehti hai
Kripa : nahin mama ..!! yeh chup nahin rehti ..acha hua yeh bol nahin rahi warna jab bolna shru kerti hai to chup hi nahin hoti ..!
Kashish k chehray per halki si muskurahat aati hai
Kashish : haan aunty issi se to aadat lagi hai itna bolne ki ..!
Gayatri hansti hain..!!
Gayatri : waisay aaj sab idher kaisay ..?
Kashish : Aunty woh hum Kripa ki shaadi ki baat kerne aaye hain
Gayatri : Kripa ki shaadi..??
Sujal : haan aunty ..!! hamara dost hai Angad woh aur Kripa ek doosray se bauhat pyaar kertay hain ..!!
Gayatri : kahiin yeh wahi to nahin jis k baare mein Kripa kal tum mujhay bata rahi thi
Kripa : haan mama yeh wahi hai
Gayatri : har giz nahin ..mein apni beti ki shaadi ek aisay larkay se bilkul nahin keroon gi jis ka na aaj ka kuch pata hai na kal ki koi khabar..!!
Kashish : nahin aunty woh bauhat acha larka hai
Gayatri : Itna acha larka hai to tum hi kyun nahin ker leti us se shaadi
Sujal : Aunty...(shouts)
Gayatri : mein bata ti hoon kyun nahin ker sakhti ..kyunki woh tumhari standard ka nahin hai
Kashish : Standard ki baat nahin hai ..!!
Gayatri : to phir kya baat hai ?
Kashish : mein kisi aur se pyaar kerti hoon ..
yeh baat sun ker Sujal thora khush hota hai
Gayatri : to tumne socha Kripa ki zindagi barbaad kerdi jaaye
Kashish : Aunty hum us k dost hain dushman nahin ..hum us ka bura kyun chahein gay?
Gayatri : lekin yeh larka Kripa k liyeh theek nahin hai
Sujal : Aunty hum aap se bas poochnay aaye the k kya aap raazi hain k nahin ...ap ka ek faisla do zindagi bana sakhta hai ..aur aap ka wahi faisla do zindagion ko hamesha k liyeh alag ker sakhta hai ....ab faisla aap k haanth mein hai ..kyunki mein nahin chahta k kal yeh log koi ghalat kadam uthayein aur phir aap ko pachtawa ho..!!
Yeh baat sun ker Gayatri thori dar jaati hain ..!!
Gayatri : kya mujhay thora time mil sakhta hai is baare mein sochnay k liyeh
Kashish : Aunty aap ko jitna time lena hai aap le sakhti hain lekin ek baad yaad rakhiyeh ga yeh aap ki beti ki zindagi ka sawaaal hai
Yeh keh ker Kashish bahir chali jaati hai
Sujal : Kripa ab mujhay bhi chalna chahiyeh ..!!
Kripa Sujal ko bahir taq chorne aati hai
Kripa : hope k mama maan jaayein ..!!
Sujal : tum fiker mat kero Aunty maan jaayein gi..!! acha ab mein chalta hon
Kripa : thanx ...Kashish chali gayi kya ?
Sujal : haan shayad
Sujal jaa raha hota hai ..k usse bus stop per Kashish nazar aati hai
Sujal : Kashish tum idher kya ker rahi ho ?
Kashish : bus ka intezaar ..
Sujal : lekin tumhari gaari kahan gayi?
Kashish : Driver usse mechanic k haan le ker gaya hai
Sujal : kya mein tum ko lift de sakhta hon?
Kashish : Nahin ..aap ka bauhat shukriya lekin mein khud jaa sakhti hoon
Sujal : Kashish zid mat kero ..!! gaari mein beth jao (opened the front door )
Kashish : nahin mein chali jaoon gi meine kaha na ..!
Kaafi der ho jaati hai..aur bus abhi taq nahin aayi hoti ..!!
Aur baarish bhi shru ho jaati hai
Kashish forun Sujal ki gaari mein beth jaati hai
Sujal gaari drive kerta hai ..!! aur gaari mein bilkul khamoshi hoti hai
Donon ek doosray se chah ker bhi baat nahin ker paatay ..!!
lekin un ki aankhein sab keh rahi hoti hai
Kashish (thinking) : Aisa kyun kia Sujal mere saaath..mujhay yeh to bata do k meri khata kya hai jis ki itnee bari saza chukani per rahi hai..
Sujal (thinking) : tumhari koi khata nahin hai Kashish ...yeh sab kismat hai ..!!
EK dum se gaari rukti hai
Kashish : kya hua ??
Sujal : pata nahin aagay kya hua hai..traffic jam hai ..mein dekhta hoon
Sujal jaata hai
Sujal : Bhai sahab yahan kya hua hai ?
Person : tez barish ki wajah se kuch darakht gir gaye hain ..!!
Sujal : raasta kab taq saaf ho jaaye ga?
Person : Kal subbha taq..
Sujal : lekin humein to abhi jaana hai
Person : sorry sir..aap filhaal to yahan se nahin nikal sakhtay...lekin yahan kareebi ek motel hai wahan aap aaj ki raat guzzar sakhtay hain
Sujal : acha thanx..!!
Sujal wapis apni gaari k paas jaata hai
Kashish : kya hua ?
Sujal sab batata hai
Kashish : kya poori raat mujhay tumhare saath rehna paray ga
Sujal : hum kuch aur ker bhi nahin sakhtay
Sujal aur Kashish wahin Motel mein jatay hain
Sujal : humein do room chahiyeh ..
manager : sorry sir baarish ki wajah se Motel k saare rooms full hain ....haan ek room khali hai
Sujal : theek hai aap wahi de dein
Sujal keys leta hai aur apnay room mein chala jaata hai
Kashish : mein tumhare saath idher nahin rahooon gi..!!
Sujal : tum yahin raho ..mein apni gaari mein hoon
Yeh keh ker Sujal chala jaata hai
Kashish bed per leti hui hoti hai ..k achanaq se bijli karakti hai
Kashish darr jaati hai
Kashish (to herself) : Sujal bahir gaaari mein hai ..aur yeh mausam bhi itna kharab hai ..mujhay usse ander bulana chahiyeh ...
Kashish bahir jaati hai ..aur gaari k darwaze per knock kerti hai..
Sujal : Kashish ..tum bahir kya ker rahi ho ?
Kashish : chalo..
Sujal : kahan ?
Kashish : chalo ander ..!!
Kashish Sujal ko ander le ker jaati hai
Sujal : mein wahan sahi tha
Kashish kuch nahin bolti..!!
Phir thori der baad kashish kehti hai
Kashish : tum is bed per lait jao mein sofay per lait jaati hoon
Sujal : nahin tum bed per lait jao mein sofay se kaam chala loon ga..
Kashish : nahin..
Sujal : bas meine keh diya na ..!!
Aur Sujal ek takiya(pillow) utha ta hai aur sofay per lait jaata hai
Kashish bhi phir bed per lait jaati hai
Donon mein se kisi ko bhi neend nahin aa rahi hoti..
Sujal Kashish donon woh pal yaad ker rahe hotay hain ..jo unhon ne saath guzare..!!
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lo ji yeh part bhi idher khatam hota hai ..!! aagay kya ho ga..?? Kya Sujal Kashish mil paayein gay?? Kya Gayatri Kripa ki shaadi k liyeh raazi ho gi??? Kya Sujal Archie se shaadi ker lega??? sab jaanay k liyeh perhtay rahiyeh Dhadhkan..!!!
luv..
Iman

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Posted: 25 July 2006 at 10:00am | IP Logged
yayy..i m da 1st one 2 comment...thx alot iman 4 continuin....sum1z callin so i llbrb n giv my comments on ths awesome part....gud job yarr...n thx once again..
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Posted: 25 July 2006 at 10:08am | IP Logged
awesoem story!! Smile
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Posted: 26 July 2006 at 7:14pm | IP Logged
so i m baq again...ths part was jus awesome...i hope kripa's mom agrees 4 da weddin..it was sooo sweet ven sujal spoke up 4 kash ven kripa's mom was kinda misbehavin wid her....n i hope us stupid aarchie ko koi aliens abduct kur lain...atleast she ll leave sujal n kash.....
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Posted: 28 July 2006 at 4:42pm | IP Logged
gr8 part iman Clap
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Posted: 30 July 2006 at 2:18am | IP Logged
thank god u continued.
i thoufght u had 4gotten about us
gr8 pART
plz bring s-k 2gether
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Posted: 30 July 2006 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
Cry
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kahan ho yar iman plz laut aao jaldi se Cry

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