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Dhadkan *Sujal And Kashish* (Page 23)

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Thanx for all ur Commments..!! Sorry woh mujhay thoda bukhaar tha is liyeh nahin likh paayi ..!!
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Veena : Sujal ..!! kis se baat ker rahe the tum???
Sujal : woh mama meray dost ka phone tha..
Veena : acha neechay aa jao ..Sab khana kha rahe hain ...tum bhi kuch kha lo ..!!
Sujal : acha mama mein thori der mein aata hoon
Veena : thori der mein nahin ..mehman bhi intezaar ker rahe hain
Sujal : Mehmaan ??? kaun aaya hai .??
Veena : Woh tumharay papa k dost hain ...
Sujal : acha mein neechay chalta hoon..!!!
Sujal neechay jaata hai
Wahan Mr Mehra aur un ki beti bethay hotay hain ..
(Well ...Sorry to say Lekin Mr Mehra ki beti Archie hai )
(Mr Mehra is played by Vishaal of Miilee..)
Mr Mehra : Helloo Sujal betay (apna haanth aagay karta hai )
Sujal : Namastay Mr Mehra..!! (aur Mr mehra se haanth nahin milata ...bezatii..)
Mr Mehra : Oh haan Namaste..!!waisay aap k betay k sanskaar kaafi achay hain
Veena : ji ??
Rishi : Mere khayal se humein khana khana chahiyeh
Veena : haaan
Sab ek saath beth ker khana khaatay hain ..!!
K achanaq Sujal ka cell ring kerta hai
Sujal : Excuse me ..!!
Yeh keh ker Sujal bahir chala jaata hai
Sujal : Helloo..Kashish ??
Kashish : Helloo...kya ker rahe the?
Sujal : Kuch nahin khana kha raha tha ??tum kya ker rahi thi?
Kashish : oh khana kha rahe the..sorry to disturb u..lekin kya keroon baat hi itnee zaroori thi
Sujal : kya baat hai ??
Kashish : mein Shimla aa rahi hoon..!!
Sujal : kya????sach??
Kashish : haaan ..hum log Sunday taq Shimla pauhanch jaayein gay..!
Sujal : Ab yeh Sunday kab aaye ga??
Kashish : intezaar kero aa jaaye ga
Sujal : waisay Angad aa raha hai kya?
Kashish : haan..!! kyun?
Sujal : nahin phir meri pyari si friend ka bhi dil lag jaaye ga na
Kashish : Sujal tum bhi na..!! acha mein phone rakhti hoon aur tum jaa ker khana khao
Sujal : okay ..!! Bye
Kashish : Bye
Kashish aur Sujal donon phone rakh detay hain
Sujal wapis ander jaata hai tab taq sab khaan kha chukay hotay hain
Veena : kis ka phone tha Sujal..??
Sujal : Nahin woh office se tha..
Veena : acha tum khanaa kha lo tum ne nahin khaaya
Sujal : nahin mujhay bhook nahin hai ..
Yeh keh ker Sujal oopper chala jaata hai
Mr Mehra yeh sab observe ker rahe hotay hain
Kher phir Mr Mehra bhi ghar chalay jaatay hain
Archie : Oh papa Sujal kitna handsome hai na ?
Mr Mehra : haan acha hai lekin us ka behaviour kuch ajeeb sa tha
Archie : papa woh jaisa bhi hai mujhay bauhat pasand hai
Mr Mehra : Theek hai mein Lalit se baat keroon ga
Archie : Sach papa ??
Mr Mehra : Haan ..!! meri beti ko jo cheez pasand aa gayi ...woh usse zaaroor miley gi
Archie : thanx papa
And hugs her father..!!
Aur yahan Sujal Sunday ka intezaar ker raha ho ta hai..!!
Kher phir finally Sunday aa hi jaata hai ..!!
Kashish Shimla aa chuki hoti hai
Aur Kashish log ka yahan per ghar bhi hota hai ..!!
Kher Phir Kashish aur Angad ...aur Sujal aur Kripa milnay ka plan bana tay hain
Yeh sab ek restaurant mein aatay hain
Sujal : Kripa tumne Angad se baat ki thi na ...???
Kripa : haan ki thi aur yeh jagah bhi batayi thi
Sujal : to abhi taq yeh donon kyun nahin aaye?
Kripa : pata nahin ..!!
Sujal aur Kripa donon intezaar ker rahe hotay hain
Kripa : Sujal woh dekho Kashish ...
Sujal : kahan hai?
Kripa : aray woh dekho (points toward Kashish )
Kashish aur Angad bhi Sujal aur Kripa ko dekhtay hain ...!!
Sab ek doosray ko hug kertay hain
Phir sab beth ker khana khatay hain..!!
Aur phir Kripa aur Angad aur Sujal aur Kashish alag alag beth ker batein kertay hain
Kripa : Aaj Sujal aur kashish ki wajah se hi hum donon idher hain ..!!
Angad : haan Sujal aur Kashish ne bauhat kia hai hamaray liyeh
Kripa : bhagwaan ka laakh laakh shuker hai k un donon ko bhi apna pyaar mil gaya
Angad : haan...waisay Kripa tumne mujhay miss kya?
Kripa : hmm sach bolon ya jhooot ?
Angad : jo sunnay mein acha lagay ..
Kripa : theek hai meine tumhein bauhat miss kia ..!!
Angad : yeh sach tha ya jhoot ..!!
Kripa : bas sunnay mein to acha lag raha hai na..!!! I love you
Angad : I love u tooo..!!
Donon hug kertay hain
Aur yahan Sujal aur kashish hotay hain
Kashish : tumnay mama se baat ki??
Sujal : woh mein ..!!
Kashish : yaani nahin ki
Sujal : woh actually ...
kashish : kab kero gay?
Sujal : promise aaj hi baat kerta hoon
Kashish : Pakka promise ??
Sujal : haaan baba..!!
Kashish : acha ab humein chalna chahiyeh ..kaafi der ho chuki hai ..!!
Sujal : abhi to aayi ho tum..!!
Kashish : janab mujhay aaye huay 3 ghanatay ho chukay hain
Sujal : yeh waqt itnee jaldi beet jaaata hai pata bhi nahin chalta
Kashish : ab waqt ko rok to nahin sakhtay na..!!
Sujal : haan yeh bhi hai .....idea..!! tum mere saath mere ghar chalo abhi ..aur phir mein
mama se bhi baat ker leta hooon
Kashish : lekin mein apnay ghar mein kya bataoon..???
Sujal : bata do k tum Angad k saath ho ..aur Angad ko bhi apnay saath le jaatay hain
Kashish : chalo theek hai
Kashish apnay ghar per phone ker deti hai..!!
Kher phir yeh charon Sujal k ghar jaatay hain ..!!
Jab yeh ghar pauhanchtay hain to Mr Mehra aur Archie pehlay se hi wahan hotay hain
Aur sab galay mil rahe hotay hain
Veena : aray Kripa ..tum aa gayi ..Mubarak ho Sujal ki shaadi paqqi ho gai hai Archie se ..!!
Kashish per bijliyaan girtee hain ..!!
Kripa bhi shocked hoti hai
Aur Sujal to bas ...usse kuch samajh mein aa hi nahin raha hota ..!!
Veena : aray yeh donon kaun hain???(point toward Kashish and Angad )
Kripa : Aunty yeh donon mere friends hain ..!!
Kashish Veena k paaoon chooti hai
Kashish : Namaste Aunty..!!
Veena : Jeeti raho beta..!! Kripa tumhari Dost bauhat khoobsurat hai ..!!
Kripa kuch nahin bolti..!!
Kashish ki aankh se aansoo tapakta hai ..aur Sujal yeh dekh raha hota hai
Sujal se bardaasht nahin ho raha hota..lekin woh kuch ker bhi nahin paata ..!!
Kashish : Angad humein chalna chahiyeh...
Aur yeh keh ker Kashish Angad ko saath leti hai aur chali jaati hai
Aur Sujal kuch nahin ker paata ...!!!
Sujal Veena aur Lalit ko bauhat gussay se dekhta hai
Mr Mehra aur Archie bhi wahan se chalay jaaatay hain
Veena Sujal k room mein aati hai
Veena : kya tum khush nahi ho Sujal?
Sujal Veena ko dekhta hai
Sujal : aap ko kya kerna ..mein khush hoon ya nahin
Veena : yeh kaisi baatein ker rahi ho?
Sujal : aapnay aisa kyun kya mama ?
Veena : lekin kya hua?
Sujal : ek baar to mujhse pooch leti ...mujhse poochay baghair aap ne meri zindagi ka
itna bara faisla ker diya
Veena : lekin hum mana bhi to ker sakhtay hain
Sujal : ab aap k pati ki woh so called reputation ka kya ho ga..!!???
Veena : Sujal...!! woh teray pita hain ..!!
Sujal : Nahin ho sakhtay woh meray pita ....jo apnay matlab k liyeh apnay betay ko dao per laga dein..!!
Veena : Sujal ..!!
Aur becharay Sujal ko ek thapar perta hai ..!!
Aur doosri taraf Kashish ro rahi hoti hai ..!!
Song time..!!
"Mujhse Hui Bas Yeh Khata
Maine Tujhe Chaha Sanam
Chup Chup Ke Roothi Rahi
Tune Diye Kaise Yeh Ghum
O Bekhabar Be Raham
Karle Chaahe Jitne Sitam
Na Chaahat Kabhi Hogi Kam
Mujhe In Aasoon Ki Kasam
Maine Kiya Hai Tujhse Sachcha Pyaar Maine Kiya Hai Tujhse Sachcha Pyaar..."
yahan Sujal bhi Kashish k baare mein soch raha ho ta hai
Sujal : Kashish ko kitna bara dhoka mila hai ..aur woh bhi meri wajah se ..mujhay usse baat kerni hi hogi..!!
k achanaq Sujal ka phone bajta hai ..!!
Kashish : meine sirf is liyeh phone kya hai k humnay hi Kripa aur Angad ko milwaya tha is liyeh ab yeh hamari zimendari hai k hum un donon ki shaadi bhi kerwayein..!!
Sujal : Kashish woh aaj ..
Kashish : aur ek baat tumhein mein pehlay hi bata doon k aaj jo kuch bhi hua woh mein bhool chuki hoon..mein bhool chuki hoon k meri zindagi mein koi SUJAL bhi tha
aur hum jo baqi din milengay woh sirf Angad aur Kripa ki wajah se milengay ..us k baad tum apnay raastay aur mein apnay raastay
Sujal : Kashish ..!
Is se pehlay k Sujal kuch kehta Kashish phone rakh deti hai ..!
Aur phir bauhat roti hai
Kashish : Sujal tumne aisa kyun kia???kyun..?
Aur doosri taraf Sujal bhi apni kismat ko kos raha hota hai..!!
Kaafi raat ho chuki hoti ..lekin Kashish aur Sujal donon mein se koi bhi nahin soya hota
Veena bhi Sujal ki halat dekh rahi hoti hai ..!!
Veena : kya Sujal ki Archie rok nahin sakhtay
Cg : aisa kaisay ho sakhta hai ? humne un se vaada kya hai aur Chetan Garewal kabhi apna vaada tor ta nahin
Veena : lekin yeh aap k betay ki zindagi ka sawaal hai
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Hmm kya ab Sujal aur Kashish mil paayein gay?? kya ho ga aagay ..jaanay k liyeh perhtay rahiyeh Dhadkan...
Iman

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