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Dhadkan *Sujal And Kashish* (Page 19)

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Posted: 07 June 2006 at 5:22am | IP Logged
iman aur kitna intezaar dear continue soon.........Cry

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Posted: 07 June 2006 at 11:55am | IP Logged
Iman ab cont bhi ker do Cry

& ye do pal kon si story hai?
is it urs?if yes then Y i dont know abt it? Cry
Now plz plz plz plz mujhe batao k total tumhari kitni stories hain? & plz give me all the links.
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hey awesome sory...relli sweet.. keep it up Clap Clap Clap
post the next part sooooon pllzzz Tongue
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Posted: 07 June 2006 at 4:53pm | IP Logged
phew..i finally caught up....excellents parts Iman ... i really love this sotry....update soon...i cant wait see what happens between Sujal and Kashish
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Thanx Suri ...!! bauhat zyada taareef ho gai..!! heheheLOLLOLLOL
Thanx Kaamna..!!
Thanx Golu..!! Pyaar ka izhaar bhi ho jaaye ga bas hora intezaar ..!! heheheLOLLOL
Thanx Kulbin..!! tum se bhi yahi kahooon gi k fiker not ikraar bhi ho jaaye ga..!!LOLLOL
Thanx Ridhhima ..!! haan haan baba ho jaaye ga ikraar..!!LOLLOL
Thanx Jyothi..!!
Thanx Kriti..!!
Thanx R.S ..!! baqi ki links meine pm kerdi hain ..!! ab khush heheheLOLLOL
Thanx Aliya..!!
Thanx Alia..!! Oh one more AaliaLOLLOL
Thanx Jaanvi..!!!
Thankyou all once again for ur gr88 comments..!!
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Angad : Woh Kripa mein mein yeh keh raha tha k..
Kripa : k???
Angad : k tum itnee jaldi kyun jaa rahi ho??
Kripa : yeh kehna tha...mein to kuch aur hi samjhi..!!
Angad : tum kya samjhi??
Kripa : mein samjhi k tum..!!
Angad : k mein..!!
Kripa : kuch nahin ..!! jaana to tha hi mujhay ..
Angad : haan lekin itnee jaldi..!!
Kripa : ab kal jaaon ya thori dinon mein baat to ek hi hai na..!!!
Angad : haan lekin...
Kripa : ab jaana to hai hi na ..waisay koi aur baat kehni thi tumhein ???
Angad : haan woh ..nahin kuch nahin kehna tha..!!
Kripa : theek hai ..! ab mein chalti hoon..!!
Angad : theek hai Bye
Kripa : Bye..!!
Kripa udaas ho ker murti hai ..!!
Angad to himself : beta Angad ager aaj nahin keh paaya to tujhay phir
kabhi mauqa nahin milay ga..!!
Angad ek dum se kehta hai
Angad : KRIPA I LOVE YOU..!!
Kripa heraan reh jaati hai ..!!
thori der to ussay samajh mein nahin aata k yeh hua kya..!!
Angad Kripa ko pakarta hai aur apni taraf kerta hai ..!!
Angad : Kripa mein tumse bauhat pyaar kerta hoon..!! aur tumhein yoon jaatay huay nahin
dekh sakhta ..!!
Kripa : yeh sun nay k liyeh meine kitna intezaar kya hai Angad ..!! kyun kerdi itnee der
tumne ..!!
Angad : mein darta tha ..k ager tumne mana ker diya to..
Kripa : pooch ker to dekhtay ..!!
They both hug for a long time..!!
Sujal Kashish ander aatay hain ..!!
Kashish : oopps ..!! sorry hum ghalat time per aa gaye..!! lekin kya kerein ..yeh public place hai
Angad Kripa seperate..!!
Kripa was very embrassed..!!
Sujal : Chalo shuker ..donon ne apnay pyaar ka izhaar to kya na ..!!
Kashish : hmm to Angad ghori charnay jaa rahe ho tum..!!
Sujal : haan mujhay baat kerni hi paray gi Aunty se..!!
Both Kashish and Sujal laugh..!!
Sujal : acha Kashish mein apnay room mein chalta hoon..!!
Kashish : ok..Good night..!!
Sujal : Good Night..!!
Angad Kripa bhi ek doosray ko Good night kehtay hain
aur phir chalay jaatay hain..!!
Ab raat ka waqt hota hai..!!
Sujal Kashish k baaray mein soch raha hota hai
Aur Kashish Sujal k baaray mein ..!! ( donon apnay aap se baatein kertay hain )
Sujal : mein Kashish k baare mein kyun soch raha hoon?? kahin mein usse se pyaar.??
Kashish : nahin aisa nahin hai ..Sujal mujhse pyaar...
Sujal : Shayad kerta hoon..
Kashish : haan shayad ...
Sujal : Lekin kya Kashish bhi mujhse pyaar kerti hai ???
Kashish : nahin mein usse pyaar nahin kerti ..lekin phir mein us k baare mein soch kyun rahi
hoon..mujhay kyun fiker ho rahi hai k Sujal mujhse pyaar kerta hai k nahin ..kyun kya mein bhi
Sujal : haan ho sakhta hai Kashish bhi mujhse pyaar kerti ho..!! aur usse bhi meri tarah lag
raha ho ..lekin yeh mein maaloom kaisay keroon ...abhi to kuch nahin ho sakhta ..kyunki
bauhat raat ho gai hai ..!!
Kashish : haan bauhat raat ho gai hai ..lekin ..
Sujal : ager aaj kuch nahin kaha ..to phir kabhi kuch nahin ho sakhta
Kashish : mujhay Sujal se milna hi chahiyeh
Sujal : mujhay Kashish se milna hi chahiyeh..!!
Donon ek saath apnay apnay room se bahir aatay hain ..!!
Sujal : Kashish ..tum abhi taq soi nahin ?
Kashish : tum bhi to abhi taq jaag rahe ho ..!!!
Sujal : Oh haan ..!! asal mein mujhay tumse baat kerni thi
Kashish : mujhay bhi tumse baat kerni thi
Sujal : haan bolo
Kashish : pehlay tum bolo
Sujal : nahin pehlay tum
Kashish : nahin pehlay tum..!!
Sujal : ab kya aisay hi lartay rahein gay..!! hm acha donon ek saath boltay hain
Kashish : Theek hai
Sujal Kashish together : Kya tum mujhse pyaar kertay/kerti ho??
Both of them laugh
Sujal : hum donon ko ek hi sawaal poochna tha
Kashish : haan
Sujal : haan to kya tum mujhse pyaar kerti ho?
Kashish : pehlay tum batao..
Sujal : hmm..pata nahin mujhay ...tum batao
Kashish : hmm mujhay bhi nahin pata..!!
Sujal : Shayad hum donon ko hi ghalat fehmi hui ...
Kashish : Shayad haan..!!
Donon wapis apnay apnay room mein jaa rahe hotay hain
Sujal (in his mind) : Kal mein Kashish se hamesha k liyeh door chala jaaon ga ..!!
(usse ajeb sa darr hota hai )
Kashish (in her mind) : kal Sujal aur mein hamesha k liyeh alag ho jaayein gay..
(Kashish k ander bhi ek ajeeb s adar hota hai ..aur yeh dard aanso ban k behnay lagta hai )
Sujal Kashish ko mur ker dekhta hai ...aur jab woh us k aankhon mein aansoo dekhta hai
to woh usse bardaasht nahin hota..!!
Sujal Kashish k paas jaata hai
Sujal : Kashish kya hua ???
Kashish : kuch nahin ..woh aankh mein kuch chala gaya tha..!! i m fine
Sujal : jhoot nahin bolna aata to kyun bolti ho jhoot..yeh aansoo meray jaanay
ki wajah se hi hain na..!!
Kashish : nahin (looking down)
Sujal : to yahi baat mujhse aankh mila ker kaho ..!!
Kashish Sujal ko dekhti hai ..aur usse hug kerti hai (crying bitterly)
Sujal : haan Kashish mujhay bhi ehsaas hua hai ..yeh hum donon ki ghalat
fehmi nahin thi ...bal k hum donon ek doosray se pyaar kertay hain ..!!
Kashish : tum kyun jaa rahe ho Sujal ..??(Still crying)
Sujal : jaana to hai hi mujhay ...lekin mein vaada kerta hoon k hum zaroor milengay..!!
Kashish : lekin kaisay???
Sujal : woh tum mujh per chor do...lekin tum mujhse pyaar to kerti ho na ??
Kashish : koi shaq??
Sujal : nahin ..!!
They both hugeach other..!!
Kripa : ahem ahem..!! yeh kya ho raha hai yahan per
Angad : aray Kripa wahi jo hum ker rahe the..
Kripa : Angad..\!!
Kashish : tum log abhi taq jaagh rahe ho ?
Kripa : yeh sawaal hum tum se bhi pooch sakthay hain ..!!
Kashish : hum to yahi kehnay aaye the k hamara plan kamiyaab hua
Angad : kaisa plan??
Sujal : tum donon ko milaanay ka
Kripa : kya yeh tum donon ne plan kya tha..!!
Kashish : Ofcourse ..!!
Kripa : tum donon na..!!
Angad : bauhat hi achay ho..!!
Kripa : haan..!!
Kashish : acha mere khayal se kaafi raat ho gai hai ab humein sona chahiyeh
Sujal : haan ..!!
Sab apnay apnay room mein chalay jaatay hain ..!!
aur ek doosray k baare mein sochtay sochtay so jaaatay hain
Subah hoti hai ..!!
Saari jaanay ki tayariaan ho chuki hoti hain ..!!!
Kripa aur Sujal Angad aur Kashish k saath Airport pauhanchtay hain
Kripa aur Angad ek dise per kharay hotay hain
Aur Kashish or Sujal doosri side per
Kripa : acha Angad ab mujhay jaana hai..
Angad : lekin hum dobara milengay na??
Kripa : haan hum zaroor milengay..!!
They both hug each other
Aur Sujal Kashish kya baat ker rahe hain dekhtay hain
Kashish : tum wapis aao gay na ?
Sujal : ager mein wapis nahin aaya ..to tum udher aa jao gi..yeh hamari kismat
mein likha hai
Kashish : ager yeh kismat ko manzoor nahin hua to???
Sujal : To is kismat ko badalna ho ga..!! hum alag nahin hongay..!!
Kashish : Sujal mujhay bhool to nahin jao gay na ??
Sujal : kabhi nahin
Chalo bhi yeh donon bhi hug kertay hain
Ab Kashish Aur Angad yahan kharay hotay hain ..!!
Aur Sujal aur Kripa plane mein chalay jaatay hain ..!!
Sujal aur Kripa Shimla pauhanch jaatay hain ..!!
Aur do din bhi guzar jaatay hain ..!!
Sujal Kashish ko phone kerta hai ..!!
Sujal : Helloo Kashish
Kashish : Oh aap ko mein abhi taq yaad hoon..!!
Sujal : hmm mood kharab lag raha hai Madam ka..!??
Kashish : do din ho gaye tumhein gaye huay aur tum ho k ek waqt phone bhi nahin
ker sakhtay ..!!
Sujal : acha sunno ..meine tumharay liyeh kuch likha hai
Kashish : sach ..!!
Sujal : haan ..perh ker bataoon ??
Kashish : Ofcourse..!!
SUjal : woh teri aankhain jin mai basi woh rahat jis main dobnay ko dil karta hai

woh teri batain jo na sun kar bhi main sun raha honnnnnn

wohh teri chahat jis main chupi teri mohabbat jo main mahsoos karta hon

wohh teri aahat jo sun kar hi teri khoobsoorti ko bayaan kardaiti hai

wohh tera muskurata hoa chahra jjis ko dekhnay k liyay main apni zinahgi gawa sakta hon

wohh teray chahray per udasi jis per khushi lanay k liyay main apni jan daisakta hon

wohh tera bolna jis main main jannat ki hawa mahsoos karta hon

wooh tera danntna jis main chupi fikar meray liyay jo teray dil main hai

wohh teri sooch or husnay sulook jis ko dekh kar main tujh se pyar karta hon

woh to hi hai jo is dil k zakhmoo ka ilaaj hai
woh to hi hai jissay main pyaar karta honn ..!!
Kashish : WOw..!! thanx a lot..bauhat achi hai ..!!
Sujal : acha ab mein phone rakhta hoon mama aa rahi hain..!!
Kashih : okay no problem..!!
Sujal phone rakh deta hai ..!!

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Okay guys ..yeh part kaisa laga batana ..ab aagay kya ho ga..Kya
kashish aur Sujal doabara mil paayein gay ya woh unki
aakhri mulaqat thi..???
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Posted: 08 June 2006 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Great Part Iman!!!!!! Clap Very cute Embarrassed Embarrassed

Ofcourse woh phirse milain gay Wink, main dekthi hoon woh kaise nahin milte

continue soon Wink

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Posted: 08 June 2006 at 7:37pm | IP Logged
nice part iman....da poem was soo oluvly....n really cute.....dey finally let out dair feelingz...will b waitin 4 da nxt part....

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