Originally posted by: prerna4rishav
Rishabh gives her a gift with a card.Prerna unpacks the gift n finds a beautiful show-piece where 1 boy n 1 girl was together holding their hands n the background was changing from snowfall to scorching heat to soothing rainfall to trees with full flowers....
Prerna just keeps watching that when Rishabh says 'Don't u think they r quite similiar to us.See,they r together when life is full of hardship n pathos,they r sharing all their pains together in the heat.And when it's snowfall,it's these two who r enjoying the strongest feeling or urge of passion.Just like us na!'
Prerna is looking at him n seems to get lost in some other world.Rishabh again asks her 'Don't u think so!'
Prerna gets back her senses n asks him 'Mmmmm...what!What u were asking?'Rishabh understood that actually she wasn't listening him n soon realises where she was lost.He smiles n says 'Nothing Prerna!But now I want my return gift in back!''Return gift!But I have nothing right now to give u Mr.BAjaj.What do u want?'He smiles n looks at her naughtily...Prerna understood n started to smile from ear-to-ear while at the same time began to retreat saying 'No...no Mr.BAjaj.Don't come to me!Pls let me go...No no.....'And Rishabh was proceeding to her.He caught her arms when she was abt to run,n then pulls her near him forcibly.Prerna at first was trying to make defense(though was laughing all the time) but lost in when Rishabh put his lips in her shoulder n began to kiss.Prerna was hugging him ever so tightly where Rishabh was in fultoo naughty mood! π³ He moved his lips from her shoulder to down n beside her ears n then slowly went to the cheeks.Prerna was feeling all the essence of being so loved by her husband.Rishabh holds her face with 2 hands n gave her a beautiful kiss π³ Then Rishabh tells her 'Did u like my b'day gift?'Prerna looks at the show-piece n then looks at him n says 'For me the best gift is to be with u.And I am having it.So how couldn't I like it?'Rishabh was overwhelmed with this n hugged her again.....
________________________________________________________
The End..
i read ur story guys,thought why not give a shot,i m not very good at riting but,i will tyr,pls tell me trully guys if u like my story
next day prerna gets up and in her half sleep she searches for her luv by her hands on the bed,but she cant find him,she slowly gets up and streches and remeber last night and blushes and go and turns and see a bouquet of flowers with a note,she opens the note and reads,my jaan gud morning ,i can visualise u in the morning sunlight ur beauty must be enhanced,and ur hubby unfortunately is not there to savour ur beauty,but jaan i want u to get ready fast and come down at teh breakfast hall,and pls jaan wear the red saree which i especially bought for u so u can wear it on ur bday,i wil wait for u,
prerna blushes again and goes and hug the beautifull saree gifted by her hubby
as she leaves her rom ,a bell boy comes and gives her a red rose and a note ,in which its ritten -a beautifull rose for the most beautifull person on this earth,prerna smiles and moves further
and after every few minutes a bell boy comes and gives her a note and a red rose,she keeps on blushing as ppl around her looks at her curiously,but firmly she moves towards the breakfast room,then again she gets a rose and a note saying that -every moment away from u makes me realise taht how much u mean to me ,how much important u r in my life and these 30 roses r not for the 30yrs u have spent on this earth but they r for the 30 min taht we have spent away from each other and there beautifull smell is to sorround u with all the happiness and joy ,while i m not around u,as i cant see u live without happiness and joy for a single min
prena gets overwhelmed by reading this and with tears in her eyes she enters the breakfast hall which in the day time is lit with candles and dim lighting and at centre she sees her love of jher life standing with her kasak in his arms and all her kids sorrounding him and looking at her and smiling
she gets shoced with happiness to see her kids up in switzerland ,and as emotions take over her ,she runs towards them and hug them all and says,this is the best ever birthday of my life
pls continue and plssssssssss tell me frankly how ws it as this is the1st time i m trying my hand in riting
comment:
p_commentcount