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Wish Upon A Star - ArSh FF (P16, pg 58) (Page 5)

m4manju IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 27 December 2011 at 10:57am | IP Logged
haww u r bad anu, u stopped at such moment Angry the part was BEAUTIFUL... loved how u have portrayed the pain not just for armaan or shilpa but how both of them feeling... awesome...
and then the car accident scene... i was like why is she shouting at him Shocked then i knw she was so lost in her thoughts to notice it... but yet she's nt ready to give up her attitude lol ... and she's drunk? omg i wanna knw what is going to happen nw... its killing me Ouch pls update soon anu and gr8 job Embarrassed and yeah pls make this a longer ff k? dnt end in 4-5 parts Tongue

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Posted: 27 December 2011 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kashmayurfan

Awesome part! You describe everything so well:) luved it! Do cont.soon


Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! Embarrassed
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Posted: 27 December 2011 at 12:45pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by m4manju

haww u r bad anu, u stopped at such moment Angry the part was BEAUTIFUL... loved how u have portrayed the pain not just for armaan or shilpa but how both of them feeling... awesome...
and then the car accident scene... i was like why is she shouting at him Shocked then i knw she was so lost in her thoughts to notice it... but yet she's nt ready to give up her attitude lol ... and she's drunk? omg i wanna knw what is going to happen nw... its killing me Ouch pls update soon anu and gr8 job Embarrassed and yeah pls make this a longer ff k? dnt end in 4-5 parts Tongue


Hehe, of course yaar, I needed to leave you all in suspense na. WinkLOL  But seriously, I'm really pleased that you liked this part. She had no idea what was happening at first lolz...she thought he was some random guy trying to take advantage of her, and he in turn thought she was some crazy girl. LOL  Really she's taking out all her inner frustration on him just because he's there and she needed someone to vent on. I'm gonna explain more in the next part, so watch this space. Wink  I will try to update asap...I shouldn't be as busy this week. And I think it will be about 6 parts long or s'thing. It depends really...I have the rough outline in my head, but sometimes it grows as I write, so it could end up longer. LOL
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Posted: 27 December 2011 at 1:32pm | IP Logged

U left in absolute awe at the depth of descritions of the emotions...it literally swept thru me...i could feel and every bit of the emotions...loved it...cont soon dont be late plzzz

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Posted: 27 December 2011 at 7:39pm | IP Logged
awesome update!!!!
loved ARSH first meeting.
beautifully writen.
looking forward to read next part!!
please continue soon.

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 12:14am | IP Logged
how do u do this??
u mak me speechless
in love with ur story
its fably described n written
continue soon

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 2:33am | IP Logged
awesomeee part!!!!
loved it!!!!!!!!!!
thnx a lot 4 d pm :)
cont real sooN!
can't wait 4 d nxt part :D

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 3:42am | IP Logged
beautifull update...please add me to ur pm list

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