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Wish Upon A Star - ArSh FF (P16, pg 58) (Page 46)

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Posted: 14 March 2012 at 3:55pm | IP Logged
awesome so so cute

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Posted: 14 March 2012 at 3:57pm | IP Logged
Beautiful part !! hope they both realize their feelings towards each other soon...pls continue soon

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Posted: 15 March 2012 at 12:52am | IP Logged
awesome update

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Posted: 15 March 2012 at 3:14am | IP Logged
Ahh finally i'm here.
first thankyou so much for the dedication.
i'm feeling honourd to have your excellent writings as dedication.
seriously the note above update make me grin so wide,
just then after knowing about your coming absence in coming weeks make me sad, but its ok next update will compensate for that.
all the very best for your work.
one thing more
i really enjoyed reading this long part.
I had sports in uni but i was reading this, & believe me i enjoyed update more then watching sports =D

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Posted: 15 March 2012 at 3:15am | IP Logged

Edited.

so now let me dissect the update,

it was wow, seriously. but i felt bad for Shilpa cz every time Armaan make her feel something and then the feeling remain suspend somewhere, somethings incomplete between them.

poor girl is having hard time in controlling her  heart. LOL

Canteen scene was cute, specially the food talk LOL

muski and sapna played a great roll in update, but muski entered on a wrong time Embarrassed

the last dialog scene meke my   heartbeat skips Embarrassed

i so want to know whats next for us in coming update.

simply loved the update.

waiting for weekends/



Edited by KaShAdmirer - 15 March 2012 at 4:25am

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Posted: 15 March 2012 at 9:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by prrk86

awesome so so cute


Hey there, thanks a lot! Happy to know that you enjoyed it. Hope you will keep reading/liking/commenting. Embarrassed


Originally posted by blessed4

Beautiful part !! hope they both realize their feelings towards each other soon...pls continue soon


Thanks hun. Embarrassed  I'll be posting the next update either tomorrow or on Sat, so not too long to wait this time. Hope you will enjoy what happens in it. Embarrassed


Originally posted by MaNaLoVeKaSh

awesome update


Thank you! It's great that you liked it! Embarrassed
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Posted: 15 March 2012 at 9:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KaShAdmirer

Ahh finally i'm here.
first thankyou so much for the dedication.
i'm feeling honourd to have your excellent writings as dedication.
seriously the note above update make me grin so wide,
just then after knowing about your coming absence in coming weeks make me sad, but its ok next update will compensate for that.
all the very best for your work.
one thing more
i really enjoyed reading this long part.
I had sports in uni but i was reading this, & believe me i enjoyed update more then watching sports =D


Aww, no need to thank me hun, I did promise you a long update so it seemed fitting to dedicate it to you. I'm glad that I could bring a smile on your face. Embarrassed  It's a bit frustrating for me too that I won't be able to update cause I finally got to the most interesting phase of my ff...but well, I do hope that my next part will be a fitting pause point, you know, like they get in shows before they go on winter break. I will try not to make you wait too long after those two weeks for the next update. Oh, and I think the next part is almost as long as this one, so I hope that will compensate for the wait too. Tongue


Originally posted by KaShAdmirer

Edited.

so now let me dissect the update,

it was wow, seriously. but i felt bad for Shilpa cz every time Armaan make her feel something and then the feeling remain suspend somewhere, somethings incomplete between them.

poor girl is having hard time in controlling her  heart. LOL

Canteen scene was cute, specially the food talk LOL

muski and sapna played a great roll in update, but muski entered on a wrong time Embarrassed

the last dialog scene meke my   heartbeat skips Embarrassed

i so want to know whats next for us in coming update.

simply loved the update.

waiting for weekends/



Thank you!!! You have no idea how happy I am hearing that you liked it. Big smileEmbarrassed  You totally hit the nail on the head - there is something incomplete between them as of now. Both are aware of feeling something for the other, Shilpa probably more so than Armaan, but neither is ready to confront it yet. It's hanging between them and with every day it's getting less easy to ignore. Glad that you enjoyed seeing Sapna and Muskaan's input. The latter would probably have kicked herself if she had realised what she interrupted when she came home, but at the time she was all distracted by the decorations. LOL  It's great too that you liked the filmi dialogue. I was trying to make it as OTT as possible but while still keeping it so that the words actually have a resonance with ArSh's story. Embarrassed  Ahhh, well, I'm not gonna give any spoilers. Only two days at the most to go now. But I am so eager to know what you all will think of the next update. I'm hoping it will be good...that's all I can say. TongueLOL  Will let you know as soon as it's up.
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Posted: 15 March 2012 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
OMG I am cursing myself for not reading this FF when the first time you PMed me >.< im seriously regretting not reading this before ... I was randomly going thru my inbox and saw ur msg written 'update' im like hmm i think I know her... So I decided to read the entire FF from the beginning... And when I started reading it I couldnt stop! It was like I need to know whats gonna happen next . I was too eager, too anxious about it. I read all the chapters in one night when I had college at 10 in the morning Big smileDude! You rocked this FF! It is the most sweetest FF I have ever read on ArSh. Please try to update soon, at least after 4 days, 7 days seems forever to wait... Your FF made me so crazy that I visualize everything in my head when Im in college or sitting alone doing nothingLOLLOL You see how much ur FF has affected me? LOL 

I loved each and every sentence , word by word of what you wrote. How they first met in the snow. The part when she says she broke his bottle made me cracked up ROFL I literally let a laugh out on that part that my sister looked at me thinking I have gone nuts ROFL 

Loved how he defended her from her family, how they both confront each other. The way they both are feeling for each other. And omg loved sapna's scene , she was teasing Shilpa to the core ROFL Its funny how u mentioned about facebook , that was so random cuz you never mentioned it before when he captured her pic ROFL I was like Shilpa 'the doctor' even HAS a facebook?ROFL But it was funny , I enjoyed every bit of it AH! Im so glad I read this man.. 

Please update soon! <3


Edited by dildirani - 15 March 2012 at 11:26pm

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