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Wish Upon A Star - ArSh FF (P16, pg 58) (Page 43)

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Posted: 07 March 2012 at 5:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vidi263



Ha Ha..Anu..I think the grass is always greener on the other side...U like the sunshine in CA and i like the snow in places like UK and NY...not in excess though Wink

Thanks for sending me the link..I am sure I'll find your other KaSh FF by search..(that's how I found your FF in the first place Smile)

trust me...you are one of the very few FF writers here on IF, who has a very good command over English...and that's a very big relief LOL. Sometimes the concept of a story is good but there are so many grammatical errors that the fun of reading is lost...but again...considering that you reside in UK..that's a given...you have a very good writing style...

looking forward to the upcoming chapters...

Love and Luck

Vidi


That is such a true saying Vidi. I think it's just human nature to never be entirely satisfied with our situation. Snow does have a way of making everything look magical. There is something romantic about it, at least I think so. Embarrassed

I hope you enjoy my other work and thank you again for your kind words. I studied English at university, so I guess that helps with my writing too, but really I just absorb the books I read and try to emulate what my favourite authors do. I'm really flattered that you think I am succeeding. Hope you will continue to enjoy the ff. Embarrassed

tc
Anu

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Posted: 07 March 2012 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
comment edited on page 42 :)

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Posted: 07 March 2012 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by m4manju

res :)
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*cuteness* thats what came to my mind when i finished reading this part... its a damn cute start of their journey of letting the past go ... Star
they are trying to move on by helping each other... like when armaan kissed her scar, the feelings and the thoughts which were going through his mind were shown beautifully
and the guitar and snowfall moments... the awkwardness between them was obvious but wat has changed is, now armaan is not reacting weirdly after that moment Tongue loved the change...its just a start of their story n all these moments make it more sweet Embarrassed
btw happy holi anu :)


Happy Holi to you too Manju! Hug

I'm so glad you liked the update and thank you so much for your comment.Embarrassed  You've got straight to the heart of what I was trying to show. Yes, they are moving on together and that was what I wanted to convey through the more light-hearted moments. I wanted to show how they can bring a smile to each other's faces when neither of them have properly smiled for a while now. The scar-kiss was important to me because I wanted it to symbolise his protectiveness over her but also his attraction to her, and how both are growing stronger with every minute he spends with her. I hope you'll continue to enjoy the progression of their story. The next part should be fun if it turns out the way I've planned it. Will get it up as soon as I can. Embarrassed
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Posted: 08 March 2012 at 4:45pm | IP Logged
AHH your update was out of this world!! i loved each one it was so nice! cant wait to see more ;D! 

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Posted: 09 March 2012 at 9:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by t0xiicxkiis3s

AHH your update was out of this world!! i loved each one it was so nice! cant wait to see more ;D! 


Thank you so much!!! I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it and want to read on. Embarrassed  New update will be coming soon. Will surely let you know when it's up. Embarrassed
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Posted: 10 March 2012 at 7:09pm | IP Logged
Amazing update. Beautifully written, as usual!!
Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 11 March 2012 at 8:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by artemis20

Amazing update. Beautifully written, as usual!!
Thanks for the PM



You're most welcome, hun. Thanks so much for your comment. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the update! Embarrassed
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Posted: 11 March 2012 at 2:45pm | IP Logged

sorry for the late comment..

but i just loved it..

it was sooo awsum..

the feelings they shared..n understanding each other..

supporting..encouraging...that was all mindblowing..

n the last bit was sooo cute..

awww...both in a precise moment..

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...

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