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Wish Upon A Star - ArSh FF (P16, pg 58) (Page 28)

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Posted: 05 February 2012 at 7:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by luv_kash

Awesome update!!
I m loving the way you are describing thier
change in emotions.
Especially, how armaan is trying hard not to
think about the strange feelings shilpa is
evoking inside him.He himself dont knows that he has already fallen deeply for her.But
I guess cuz of his past experiences he would
take some time to realise this.
But the highlight of this part was that cute and sweet fight...forgetting the past, it was just the two of them...laughing and enjoying...how I wished this moment would have turned into something more hotter...LOL.
OMG...why did you stopped at such a moment...who was screaming and why?? :0

Please try to continue soon.
Thnx for the pm :)


I feel like saying thank you isn't enough for your lovely comment. Honestly, it means a lot to know you think I'm doing a good job with describing their feelings and developing their story. It's especially gratifying when I've spent a whole day trying to get inside Armaan's head and wondering if I'm succeeding. LOL  Believe me, he is one tough cookie to crack. He likes shutting people out lolz.
You've hit the nail on the head when you said he's gonna take time because of his past experiences. He was so set in thinking Riddhima was 'The One', and a part of him doesn't want to let go of that ideal. He honestly didn't expect to feel anything for anyone ever again, that is why Shilpa has turned his world upside down. He never saw it coming.
Ahh, I'm so glad you liked the flour fight. I had a lot of fun writing that bit. Big smile  I wanted to show how together they can shake off all the sadness of their pasts. That was the start of them discovering that. Hehe, well, I contemplated writing a kiss, but according to Armaan it was too soon for that. Watch this space though. WinkLOL
I'll try to get the next update posted soon. Thanks again. Embarrassed

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Posted: 05 February 2012 at 7:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -BlueShadow-

awesome


Thank you! It's good to know you enjoyed it! Big smile


Originally posted by moonlight2630

great update
Thumbs Up


Thanks so much! I'm really pleased you liked this part. Embarrassed
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Posted: 05 February 2012 at 7:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KaShAdmirer

may be you know this already, but let me tell you.
you are an amazing writer, i'm in love with your writing style, the way you describe everything i feel like being there & witness the whole scene.
now plz dnt make us wait long, update super soon.
i'm regreting how come i didn't came across this ff before.
but now really waiting for next update.


Wow, I am speechless. I'm humbled you think I'm a good writer. Thank you so much for such a wonderful compliment! Embarrassed  To know that you can visualise the scenes makes me feel like I've achieved what I set out to do. Whenever I write, I always get a real vivid picture of events in my head and my goal is to try and convey that to the reader. All my favourite writers are the ones who paint a picture with their words, and this is what I hoped to do with my own work. So when you said that you could visualise it, you made my day. Embarrassed  I'm so thrilled you are enjoying it and I promise not to leave you all in suspense for too long. I hope you'll like what's coming up next.
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Posted: 05 February 2012 at 8:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SabzKaShGrAnd

U never fail to enthral me with the meticulousness with u describe each and every thng in ur ff...thats what makes it so beautiful...kudos...great pace..this is the dynamism and push i was looking for


Thanks Sabz, I'm really happy you thought I described it all well. Embarrassed  Glad that you're enjoyed it better and I hope what I have planned for the next few updates will build upon that. Thanks for taking the time to read it.
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Posted: 05 February 2012 at 8:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kashmayurfan

Awesome part! The fight was really cute! The part was sweet:) can't wait for more! Do cont.soon


Aww, so glad you liked their lil play fight. I wanted to add some light-heartedness and just show they enjoying each other's company, because that's as crucial as their bonding over their mutual sorrow. It was a chance for both of them just to unwind and let themselves forget all the sadness for a few moments. Hope you'll enjoy the scenes coming up between them. Will try to get the next part up asap. Embarrassed
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Posted: 05 February 2012 at 9:56pm | IP Logged
beautiful update...the floor fight wass hilariousss...good goinggg

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Posted: 05 February 2012 at 11:50pm | IP Logged
awesome part :)

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Posted: 06 February 2012 at 6:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by teenorchid

beautiful update...the floor fight wass hilariousss...good goinggg


Thanks hun, glad you thought so. I had a lot of fun writing that scene so it's great you enjoyed it. Embarrassed


Originally posted by MaNaLoVeKaSh

awesome part :)



Thank you! Pleased you liked this chapter. Embarrassed

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