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Wish Upon A Star - ArSh FF (P16, pg 58) (Page 14)

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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 9:48am | IP Logged
Comment edited page 4 for part 2 :)

FINALLY, I got read your updates ! And, how it was worth the wait ! I'm glad I didn't read them between two exams, I wouldn't have appreciate as much as I did now ! Anu, it was really beautiful ! 
I think I can't convey how much I love the story and your writting...
I loved ArSh's meeting, it was so out of this world but somehow realistic in their behaviour. I wished to know if meetings like that do happen in real life or not ErmmLOL
Both the characters and their story are so touching. You described everything so well that I could feel Shilpa's pain when she saw the accident, when Armaan mentioned her mother. And I was holding my breath along with Armaan when he waited in the waiting room. And how he remembered Shilpa's words and asked for her to be alright, with that sentence "That's all I ask"

I really love their almost instant connection. Ah, and I could go on and on about your story, Anu !

Like I said, a true novel. Thanks for writting, it's a pleasure to read you Smile

Love,
Laila

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Posted: 11 January 2012 at 10:02am | IP Logged
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Nycly writen

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Posted: 12 January 2012 at 2:29am | IP Logged
nice fic
Add me please

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Posted: 12 January 2012 at 5:38am | IP Logged
Laila, thank you so much for both of your comments. I'm a little embarrassed by so much praise, but I can't tell you how wonderful it was to read your words. I think you are one of the best ff writers I have come across, so receiving such compliments from you is a real honour. I am just thrilled that you enjoyed it so much and felt I had struck a good balance between description and emotion. I do worry about flow, especially as I sometimes have a habit of digressing (lol) so I'm really happy to hear that you thought it was fluid. Hehe, yes, actually, I do have this weird thing about first meetings. I don't even know why...well, I guess it's cause I am a diehard romantic. The whole idea of meeting your soulmate fascinates me and I always feel first meetings are like a moment of destiny and that is why I spend so much time trying to describe them. Embarrassed  I really wish such meetings did happen in real life, but I guess reality is not as romantic as books and TV. But if I ever meet my prince in such magical circumstances, I'll surely let you know. WinkLOL 

I'm also really pleased that you could feel Shilpa's pain. I was hoping it would come across strongly and the same with Armaan when he was waiting at the hospital. For me, that moment when Armaan wished was a turning point for him. He won't ever be the same again. Shilpa's turning point is yet to come, but the events of this night will change them both.

But OMG, you really think it's like a novel? Wow. You have no idea how much that means to me. I've always wanted to write an actual novel, so the fact you said this ff makes you think of one makes me feel like maybe I could do it. Embarrassed  Thank you so much Laila, for all your kind words. They really have made my day! Hug

p.s. I hope the exams went well.

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Posted: 12 January 2012 at 5:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by teenorchid

Nycly writen


Thank you so much! I'm glad you are enjoying it. Embarrassed
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Posted: 12 January 2012 at 5:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by blue.shadow

nice fic
Add me please


Hey, thanks for dropping by. It's great to hear you like my ff. Embarrassed
I've added you to the PM list, thanks for wanting to read more.
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Posted: 12 January 2012 at 9:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DulceAmor

Laila, thank you so much for both of your comments. I'm a little embarrassed by so much praise, but I can't tell you how wonderful it was to read your words. I think you are one of the best ff writers I have come across, so receiving such compliments from you is a real honour. I am just thrilled that you enjoyed it so much and felt I had struck a good balance between description and emotion. I do worry about flow, especially as I sometimes have a habit of digressing (lol) so I'm really happy to hear that you thought it was fluid. Hehe, yes, actually, I do have this weird thing about first meetings. I don't even know why...well, I guess it's cause I am a diehard romantic. The whole idea of meeting your soulmate fascinates me and I always feel first meetings are like a moment of destiny and that is why I spend so much time trying to describe them. Embarrassed  I really wish such meetings did happen in real life, but I guess reality is not as romantic as books and TV. But if I ever meet my prince in such magical circumstances, I'll surely let you know. WinkLOL 

I'm also really pleased that you could feel Shilpa's pain. I was hoping it would come across strongly and the same with Armaan when he was waiting at the hospital. For me, that moment when Armaan wished was a turning point for him. He won't ever be the same again. Shilpa's turning point is yet to come, but the events of this night will change them both.

But OMG, you really think it's like a novel? Wow. You have no idea how much that means to me. I've always wanted to write an actual novel, so the fact you said this ff makes you think of one makes me feel like maybe I could do it. Embarrassed  Thank you so much Laila, for all your kind words. They really have made my day! Hug

p.s. I hope the exams went well.

You really are talented. That's honest words. And I'm sure you can do it ! You already have readers Wink
By the way, if you like "first meetings", there's books I can advice you to read. I don't know you'd heard of them, but they're one of my favorites. You'll see what I am assimilating your writting to Embarrassed

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