Originally posted by: twilightmystery
k m still in a daze
u dscribed everythin so perfectlyit was just beautifulcontinue soon
Originally posted by: luv_kash
Awesome update!!
I m loving the way you are describing thier
change in emotions.
Especially, how armaan is trying hard not to
think about the strange feelings shilpa is
evoking inside him.He himself dont knows that he has already fallen deeply for her.But
I guess cuz of his past experiences he would
take some time to realise this.
But the highlight of this part was that cute and sweet fight...forgetting the past, it was just the two of them...laughing and enjoying...how I wished this moment would have turned into something more hotter...LOL.
OMG...why did you stopped at such a moment...who was screaming and why?? :0
Please try to continue soon.
Thnx for the pm :)
Originally posted by: KaShAdmirer
may be you know this already, but let me tell you.
you are an amazing writer, i'm in love with your writing style, the way you describe everything i feel like being there & witness the whole scene.
now plz dnt make us wait long, update super soon.
i'm regreting how come i didn't came across this ff before.
but now really waiting for next update.
Originally posted by: SabzKaShGrAnd
U never fail to enthral me with the meticulousness with u describe each and every thng in ur ff...thats what makes it so beautiful...kudos...great pace..this is the dynamism and push i was looking for
Originally posted by: kashmayurfan
Awesome part! The fight was really cute! The part was sweet:) can't wait for more! Do cont.soon
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