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Shirley IF-Dazzler
Shirley
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Posted: 02 April 2006 at 6:24am | IP Logged
nice one sis.....i really liked amna's and cezzu's part....keep it up... Clap
amna malik IF-Addictz
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Posted: 02 April 2006 at 8:15am | IP Logged
Me and cezzu Embarrassed
tunna Goldie
tunna
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Posts: 1587

Posted: 02 April 2006 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
wow.......... really great tashu !!!!! Clap
c u'v earned urself auite a fan-following.... atleast i'm a fan now... Wink   Big smile Big smile   Wink ...   lov ur language.... its so dus n zayed kind really... Wink Wink Wink
great oneThumbs Up Thumbs Up    waiting4next part Big smile
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Tashu
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Posted: 03 April 2006 at 10:33am | IP Logged
Episode 2

(karan is on his way 2 work and sees a girl stealing)

karan: hey whose dat? oi rukh ja abhay...chori karta hai, oi rukh jaa, teri tho main aaj...aaah!! (pulls coat off and garbs her hand)

marriyam: (sighing deeply and lookin into his eyes)

(karan continuously stares at her and marriyam is trying to pull her hand away)

marriyam: I'm sorry (bites his arm)

karan: ow!!!

(marriyam turns back repeatedly to look at him)

karan: (smiles to himself Smile )...huh!! maine tho us ka naam thak nahin jaantha. yaar karan hamesha teri bolthi bandh ho jati hai...naam pooch letha tho tera kya jata....hmph!!

(next scene...shirley is goin 2 work in her car, and it crashes and the other person is no1 other than shahrukh)

shirley: ( Shocked ) excuse me.

(shahrukh turns and looks at the cars)

shahrukh: i'm so sorry ma'am, i rely am.

shirley: well u no wot u shud b.

shahrukh: well ma'am main apne bhai se baat kar raha tha phone pe.

shirley: aap ko fone pe dhehaan dhena chahiye ya car pe? mujhe samajh nahin athi tum loghon ko driving license kaise milthay hai...abh kuch bologay ya yehi aise hi chup khare rahogay ( Angry ).

shahrukh: well...

shirley: maine apni baat khatam nahin ki

shahrukh: ( laughs LOL )

shirley: tumhe bari khansi arehi hai na, okay dekhte hai....main abhi police ko phone karti hoon.

shahrukh: uh uh...is ki zaroorat nahin hai...police already yehi par hai

shirley: kahan?

shahrukh: (about to laugh his head off) (shows his badge)

shirley: ( Shocked ) voh um....

shahrukh: haan abh bolo na jo bol rehi thi....( LOL )(walks away while laughing)

shirley: argh!!!

(next scene...Amal is returning from her beautician course)

Amal: arey driver zara jaldi karo na
driver: acha mem saab
Amal: (thinking-Tashu will be so suprised, when she sees me)

(suddenly a car comes from front and the driver steers the car to the side...where the car falls in towards a valley but gets stuck in a biiiiigggg tree)(the glasses of the windows break)

(After a while Amal regains conscious...and sees the broken windows and remembers that the car crashed, she touches her head and finds she is bleeding...she looks around and sees the driver has gone)

Amal: stupid, namak-haram...shukar hai ke maine usse abhi thak paise nahin diye...(turns to get out a tissue from her purse and sees that her purse is gone) argh!!! that stupid driver!!!

Amal: (Cry ) koi hai bachao!!! please meri madhat karoooo...(the car moves down slowly)...argh!!...(Amal is crying and panicing)...KOI HAI BACHAO!!!

(all people around the dhaba above the valley, rush to see hu is calling for help.

(Then ppl comes our amal's hero...Rahil)

(Rahil hears the screams he runs 2 c whats happened)

Rahil: hato bhai...(looks down and sees amal)

Amal: (looks up and sees rahil) dekhiye aap meri madhat karenge...mera drive rbhi bhaag gaya hai mera purse le ke, aur yeh gaari aistha aistha neche ki taraf chali jaa rehi hai

Rahil: dekhiye just relax, main aap ko nikaalay bina yahan se nahin jaane wala....aap mujhe apna haath dijiye

Amal: mujhse aisa nahin hoga...mujhe bohat darr lagtha hai unchaiyon se

Rahil: dekhiye, aap mujh pe bharosa rakhiye main aap ko kuch nahin hone dhoonga...koshish kijiye...trust me

Amal: ok, reaches out of the car to give her hand and the car moves downwards) Argh!! sorry mujhse nahin hoga.

Rahil: look no problem, main neche ajata hoon...(climbs down slowly and asks amal her name)...aap ka naam kya hai?

Amal: Amal, aur aap ka?

Rahil: Rahil, nice meeting you amal...(He gets into the car)

Amal: same...(the car moves further down)

(the front screen glass breaks and amal falls further down)

Amal: arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!

Rahil: amal, give me your hand

(she gives him her hand)

Rahil: koi police ko phone karo...

Amal: mujhe bohat darr lagh raha hai, i think this is the end of me yaar...main tho gaye

Rahil: chup, aise baatein anhin akrte...main tumhara haath nahin chorne wala tho tum jaane ka khayaal chor dho

(both look into each others eyes)

(later tashu, zayed and other backup officers arrive, they get amal and rahil out of the valley)

Tashu: Amal, agar tumh lift chahiye thi tho tum bhai ko fone kar dhethi ya mujhe...aise stupid driver ke saath kyun aye...jise tum jaanthi hi nahin, abh hogaya na purse chori...koi baat nahin lets go home

Amal: haan, eik minute...Rahil?

Rahil: (turns around) oh amal, bolo

Amal: thanks main abh jaa rehi hoon

Rahil: oh ( Disapprove )...anyways phir milenge (puts his hand forward, amal shakes his hand)

So hw was dat ppl?

Luv Tashu
Mastang Senior Member
Mastang
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Joined: 14 July 2005
Posts: 538

Posted: 04 April 2006 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
wow...tashu......good yaaar..i luv it.....
i really liked each & every part of it....
karan~maruim scenes were really very good,Srk~shirley scenes were funny & suprurb & mine~rahil scenes were supurb.... Embarrassed Wink LOL .....
yaar kiya entry ki hai meri...manna pade ga tumhain......what a zabardast entry...aur woh driver to mile ..i wount leave him.....mmmmm...i will leave him...cauze ushi ki wajah se my hero came to save me.... Wink ....
really yaar.....that was really kool.......keep up da good work... Clap
tunna Goldie
tunna
tunna

Joined: 01 February 2006
Posts: 1587

Posted: 04 April 2006 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
wow tashu.......... exceptionally amazing Clap
srk-shirley scene was real fun... total sharukh movi type situation... nd the amal-rahil 1 was sooooooooooooo fab!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!      &n bsp;         &n bsp;     i mean talk abt being lucky!!! to b saved by rahil.... from a mountain top... .. Wink     u don need anything els dear.... Wink Big smile   Wink
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Posted: 06 April 2006 at 1:40pm | IP Logged
Episode 3

(in the 1st episode..mita and suraj were pretending 2 be a host and guest..to catch the hijackers in the city but are police officers...)

(cezzu, amna, rajeev, teesha, karan, marriyam, shirley, rahil, suraj all join police force....)

(Mita, Tashu, Zayed, Zeeshan, Shahrukh, Vivek and Shahid have friends around: Anu, Poonam, Tuhina and Amina, Amal - all these ppl r police officers)

(every1 is sitting having coke)

Mita: God those hijackers i thought ke main tho gaye
Shahrukh: hey, officers...baatein baadh mein. abhi everybody conference room mein
shahid: why conference room...?
shahrukh: kyunki..humare ek meeting hai...ok...now..
zayed: uff..theek hai..bhai...chalo..
tashu: oh god...koi personal time nahin milta....
vivek: u should have thought about that before u became a police officer...
shahrukh:ok..all DCs in the conference room..rite now...
zeeshan: will be long nite...what shall we order?
tashu: zeeshan...chinese...
anu: chinese? lets have italian...
tuhina: nah...lets have mexican...
poonam: nah..lets have indian takeaway...
amina: nope...lets have greek takeaway..
zayed(2 amina): do u no there r snails in greek takeaways...? LOL
amina: ugh.....disgusting...
zayed(2 vivek): gals r so gullible...
tashu: gals r not....watch this..guys...(then says 2 shahid): shahid...theres a cute gal over there...
shahid(getting excited): where..?
tashu: guys...r so gullible..haina amal?
amal: rite u r tashu..
zayed(putting his head in his hands): ufff...
zeeshan(mimicking shahrukh): ok...boys and gals...the agenda 4 the meeting is...to name the criminals and plan the mission...ok...now.....
(shahrukh comes behind zeeshan Tongue LOL )
tashu: oh god...major...
zeeshan(mimicking shahrukh): ok...we will be going 2 switzerland....4 a mission..
shahrukh(behind zeeshan):actually..its canada...
zeeshan(unaware its shahrukh): nahin yaar...its swtizerland...
vivek: erm...zeeshan...luk..there...
zeeshan(turnsa round): erm...we r going canada...hehe...
shahrukh: sit down...plz..
zeeshan(sitting in shahrukh's place): sit down bhaiyya..
shahrukh: zeeshan....!!!!
zeeshan: i mean....sit down major...
shahrukh: zeeshan...
zeeshan: what...kya hai..?
shahrukh: wheres yur seat..zeeshan?
zeeshan: oh...ok sorry..(goes and sits in his own place)
shahrukh: ok...4 a mission....we will go 2 canada...
anu: what mission...sir?
shahrukh: that u will find out in canada...
tashu: rite...
shahrukh: ok..i want everybody's bags packed 4 2morrow's flight to canada....ok?
every1: ok..sir
shahrukh: lets rock..boys and gals..
tashu: lets rock...
zayed: lets rock...
shahrukh: zeeshan...contact cezzane and his family....they will be joining us as well....ok..bye(about 2 go)
zeeshan: but major...is that bajaj coming...?
shahrukh(laughs): nah...
zeeshan: wooo-hooooo...lets party..lets rock...boys...and gals...
shahid: gals...wooo-hooooo....
vivek: shut it....u....
zeeshan: ok...c u ppl....i'm going 2 get takeaway..c u at home...
tashu; c ya...
anu: c ya...
zeeshan: ok...come quick(leaves)

(everyone leaves and starts 2 get packing)

How is that, peeps?
tunna Goldie
tunna
tunna

Joined: 01 February 2006
Posts: 1587

Posted: 07 April 2006 at 1:23am | IP Logged
lovely !!!!!!!!!!!!!! Clap
its amazing yaar..... n yahoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo !!!!!!!! i'm a police officer Approve     i'm soo happy...Big smile ll check it out the first thing wen i return...   till then continu the good work Thumbs Up Thumbs Up

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