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no dont end this is relly good

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no dont end this is really good
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continue soon.....
and dont end this.....
make it longer.....
its 2good.....
i am already addicted to it.....
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Just damn good!!! Embarrassed
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Part 7
As angad walked out of the room with Kripa he was trying to keep himself calm as he knew he had to take care of Kripa. If he breaks down then what will happen to Kripa, who will wake care of her? But deep down he still had the fear that he would lose the girl he loved the most and the girl that could take care of him no matter what happens. But whatever happens he knew he had to believe in God and pray to him. So he took off to the church where he prayed for Kripa.

A-God plzzzzz don't take my Kripa away from me, I can't live without her, she is the first person who always knew what was on my mind or what I needed. I never had to use words to tell her about my feeling because she would just look into my eyes and read them, as he was saying that he was crying. Those tears were the prove of how much he loved her. How much he needed her. After some time he went back to the hospital. As he was waiting for the operation to end he cell rang. After looking at the number he quickly wiped his tears and pressed talk.
A-hello
D-arre angad tumhari awaaz ko kia howa
A-kuch nai howa dadi, wo bas main abhi hi souke uttha honna (woke up from sleep)
D-acha, angad maine call isliye kia tha kyu ke maira kam thora ziada hai tho main aik aur week yahi rukonggi.
A-theek hai dadi app fikar na kijiye main hoon na
D-pata hai, waisa Kripa ko phone do
A-wo………..dadi wo tho abhi washroom mai hai
D-acha…………..koi baat nai badme hojaigi baat
A-han main usse kahonga ke wo app ko call kerde
D-theek hai bata, ab mai phone rakhti hoon

As angad put the phone down he felt a relief, he did not want dadi to leave work and come back. So he decided not to tell her as of yet.

I wont end it soon, so don't worry. You will find out what happens to Kripa in the next part for sure. Thanks for the comments.
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I like your story its amazing Clap
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loved this part.
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nice part plz continue soon

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