true love (a-k fan-fic) - Page 5

Posted: 18 years ago
Sweet...just caught up with the fan fic!.....doing a pretty good job so far!....keep it up! 😊
Posted: 18 years ago
that was greatttttttttttt
cont sooon 👏
Posted: 17 years ago

THAT WAS AWWSOME PLZ CONTINUE SOON

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Edited by shahidlover24 - 17 years ago
Posted: 17 years ago
Part 6
In the car
a-kripa kal tumein main drop kardong ya tum khodi challi jayogi
k-no angad its ok I will manage
a-ok so right now restaurant chale ya ghar pe khaana khana hai
k-ghar chalo main bana dongi
a-ok
As they were talking they reached home
a-main fresh hokar atta ho
k-theek hai

Kripa went in the kitchen and started cooking but all of a sudden she started getting one of the attacks which hurted her head a lot so she was holding her head and getting support from the wall when angad entered the kitchen
Kitchen
a-kripa are you ok
k-yes angad I am fine bas thora sa chakkar aggaya
a-oh ok
k-can u get the pain killers, they are in the room
a-i will be right back
k-angad the medicine is in the drawer
a-ok Kripa
when angad got medicine he read it and it said that it was prescribed for brain tumor and he was surprised and shocked at the same time but as he thought about it he decided to ask Kripa before jumping on conclusions. So he went downstairs to ask but saw her fainted on the floor. As he saw her faint his suspicious grew and he took her to the hospital.

In the hospital
a-doctor is she ok
d-no Mr. Khanna
a-what do u mean
d-well she had brain tumor, which she knows about and she needs to do the operation as fast as she can or she will be in danger
a-now angad knew the secret and was really mad at Kripa for telling him
a-you can start the operation right now
d-we can but before that can you pay the bill…………….and the chance are 50 to 50 so we don't really know if it will be successful or not
a-yes I will
d-ok then we will start it as soon as possible
a-doctor………..can I meet her before the operation
d-yes
a-thanks

As he walked in the room he saw Kripa with tears in her eyes and he understood what she was thinking about and did not feel mad at her anymore as she was helpless and he would have done the same as she did.
a-kripa
k-angad wo main
a-shhhhhhhhh………..i know its ok
k-after looking into angad's eyes and looking at the love she broke down and he hugged her really tight telling her that he wont let anything happen to her. He knew she had hidden these tears for long enough and now they needed to get out so he let her cry in his arms. As she was crying angad was asking god why he was taking her away from him after knowing how much he needed her, but at that moment he realized that he loved her more than anything. Then without thinking he blurted out
a- kripa I love you
k- -------------
a- kya howa Kripa kia tum mujhse pyaar nai karti
k- ------------
when Kripa didn't say anything he left her go and was walking away when Kripa caught his hand and made him look at her
k- angad I love you too………… but I don't know if I will be able to live with you but remember I always loved you, I love you, and I will always love you
a-hearing I love you from Kripa made angad the most happiest guy in the world and he hugged her
a- Kripa nobody can separate us now and I mean nobody
After sometime they aparted and angad kissed her and the kiss deepened when finally Kripa aparted and at that moment the nurse came and took his Kripa away.

Will the operation be successful???
Find out in the next part, and thanks for the comments.
Posted: 17 years ago
maria don't kill kripa
and do continue soon
Posted: 17 years ago
fab part!!!!

yaar u cant kill kripa!! 😛 👏 😆
Posted: 17 years ago
i jus read da whole thing and it is amazing plz cont soon 😃
Posted: 17 years ago
nice part plz continue soon and offcourse kripa will be fine yeah offcoures 😛
Posted: 17 years ago
wow!!! just brilliant, plz do cont. soon!! i rly enjoy reading ur fanfic n look forward to reading it!!
Posted: 17 years ago
the operation will be succesful i know this 😉!!!!👏 👏 continue sooon

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