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Posted: 12 years ago
love both parts
maan is sincierly tring to manofy geet
like the thing that he don't want to involve anyone between them
now party time
waiting with all hopes of maaneet
aaj GHSP nahi to DA ka long update de do
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Posted: 12 years ago
oho 
phir karan nd prachi in dono kahin door bhej do 
nice
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congratulations on the new thread Puchki Di 😊
Great going...an update per thread!!! dekha sab aap ke hi Deewane hai!!! 🤗
 
Awesome updates...as usual!!! wow Maan putting Geet before his ego is quite an achievement!! an interesting one...⭐️
 
Mast precap diya hai aapne...cannot wait for the next update...
 
pleash continue very soon...😍
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Posted: 12 years ago
happy thread 17 half centuary!!!! 😊
waiting for your update!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
AUDIO LINK FOR GURTI INTERVIEW
Shiya1206 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
yaaayyy!!!!!
Waiting!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
 
FOR GEET FROM MAAN 
 
  [YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8PV_hS7WRE4&feature=player_detailpage[/YOUTUBE]
 
 
 
FOR MAAN FROM GEET 
 
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WAhm4oR6pVk&feature=player_detailpage[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by tintinu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Dhundlae aks

PART 125
 

karan ' I will be there in 5min
Geet ' haan main entrance main wait kar rahi hoon
Maan angrily twisted his lips & crossed his arms.. mocking.. karan ka wait kar rahi hoon
leaning on her shoulder. She moved away.
He pouted cutely ' ek tho tumhari frd ne mujhe dhoka diya aur tum bhi mera saat aisen kar rahi ho
Geet wondered agar prachi nahi aayen tho main kya kar sakti hoon
Maan pulled her hand challo na
Geet snapped ' aap tho prachi ke saat jane walen then na
Maan lifted his brows.. leaning closer to her.. why do I smell something burning
she crossed her hand defensively ' main karan ka wait kar rahi hoon
Maan pulled her ' kaun karan wo jo.. uske saat aa raha hain
she just looked up to see some girl lacing her fingers with karan. Geet just marched straight to him
yah sab kya hain karan
karan ' wait wait I can explain..before he could.. the girl dragged him in..
Maan .. cutely waved at him standing behind Geet.
She tapped her foot angrily & turned to leave..oops only to hit his chest..
aah.. he screamed melodramatically. She rolled her eyes & tried to walk away
Maan ' aach aacha suno
nahi
Geet main akela party main kasien javonga
thats ur problem
well then..
he just lifted her & put her on his shoulder & walked straight in. she hit her leg..& hand
as if all that ever mattered to him.
The moment they entered the lights were dim.. with false smoke.. music playing loud. Geet became conscious. Sab dehk rahen hain
tho
plz mujhe neechen uttaro
phelen promise karo mujhe chodke nahi javoghi
she didn't reply
he waked cutely on her butt
her eyes popped out in shock.
When she didn't protest further he slowly slid her down, his palm & long fingers deliberately caressing the length of her back. She bit her urge to smack him right away. His touch now began to irritate her in a very different way.. a feeling of sleaze within, may be it all just attraction between them nothing to be really proud off or fight for.
 
 
She wiggled out of his embrace stepping far away as far as she could. It was not very obvious thing when he carried her in, but her behavior did catch attention. Maan grabbed her hand & told her stop.
Geet sab dehk rahen hain
yah so.. she pushed him away with all the people watching them
Geet why r u creating a scene
why u wanted to party with me right!!!!

he exhaled sharply pulling her into a warm hug, trying to calm her down. Her whole body seemed cold filled with hateness he couldn't bare. Even her heart beat seemed unreal to him.

He pulled away in shock scanning through her face.
she plunked her hand on the hip.. why u don't want to party anymore?

 


Her words weren't hers..or is it her real her!!?? no..this can't be her..he knows his mistimia better than this, but why her every inch of hers repelled him. He felt irritated. He took a inhaled sharply.. let it be in her terms .. he just walked straight to her
I still want to be with u, kya karna hain he looked straight into her eyes caring a dam abt others
that just touched deep into her, into her soul
her eyes immediately softened against her own wish, she couldn't let that happen the never ending fight again began within.. it was out of her control now..
she looked away get me a drink she said
sure he nodded
wat do u want
lets do tequila shots today she said leaning over the counter ordering for 2
Maan looked at her trying to read wat was in her mind.
She couldn't wait.. just grabbed the drink & gulped it down. He just held the drink & stared at her.
Kyun dar gayen she challenged
 

he smirked drank hating to drink.
She ordered couple of more & gulped it down without even thinking. she just wanted to be herself for once.
 
 
Both of them where drunk when they hit the dance floor. She jumped around crazily holding his hand enjoying every bit of it with no fear, no guilt no nothing playing in her mind. She just loved ever min of that with him, just nothing holding her back from being herself. He shook his head.. pagali hain..
phelen mana karti hain.. phir khud hi
he smiled treasuring his moments with mistimia looking at her in awe wondering he doesn't know her well.. kabhi gussa tho khabhi masti..but still every thing of her enchants him like a song sung far far away ..like he couldn't hear the words but wat it means hunts his soul softly. Like he has always seen her furtively but could read her eyes something hazel dreamy like her soul half else where a story yet to be read. All he knows is he wants to be with her, the truth of her, untamed & whole driven by an emotion that is just out of his control with that pain that still feels sweet.
 
 
 
 
 
 

Precap
falling in love!!!
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thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
muskaan plz update with in 8 mints after that we have one hr load shadding

Thanks 


Thanks Thanks a lot for updating 


Edited by Arsheela - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome one dee...you leave me speechless with every update of yours...Edited by honeygrape - 12 years ago