Karma

Hi everyone, Its Me Again Hoping do to better this time, I am kind of new at this so please excuse all the mistakes.

Story Characters: 1. Karan (He is the Main Guy in the story)

                           2. Kajal (She is the Main Girl in the story)

                           3. Jiya (Kajal's best friend and one who gets her)

                           4. Aman (Karan's best bud just like his brother)

Story's setting is in USA. In Atlanta, Georgia.

More Characters will be included as the story goes on.

The Story Starts of:

Kajal: Jiya, I Got accepted at the University i wanted to get into.

Jiya: Why are you not so excited?

Kajal: I am going to miss living with my parents (Kajal loves her parents a lot especially because she is an only child)

Jiya: Don't worry about it, Remember i am going with you, you wont be disoppointed at all.

Kajal: Smiles and thinks of the good times she and Jiya has always had.

On the other side:

Karan: Aman man, I can't believe i am going to the same college as you! Its like aweome man, we are going to be in same school.

Aman: Thats going to be great! We get to check of the chicks together.

Karan: Smiles, Gosh! Do you ever think of anything else in your life besides girls?

Aman: NO! Bhagvan ne ladkiya dekh ne ke liye banayi hain!

Karan: If you paid half the attention in your classes, you could have done so much better.

Aman: No **** Man, don't talk about school!

Karan: Fine, So what are you plans for the last weekend before School gets out?

Aman: I gotta go to this Indian thing with Mom And Dad. I hate it, But Dad is buyin me a new car so its all worth it. (Aman comes from a verrrry rich family, His dad owns 6 Motels in Atlanta)

Karan: Great, I think i am just gonna hang out at my house.

Aman: Alright.

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Jiya: KAJAL, KAJAL!!!

Kajal: Yes!! she snaps back to reality.

Jiya: What were you thinking?

Kajal: Nothin, all the good times we had together.

Jiya: Gets happy, holds Kajal's arm and tells her there are more to come.

They both walk out of the Mall and get into their car and leave.

Preview For Next Time: Kajal and Karan meet for the first time. Jiya and Aman have a conflict.

If you like it, let me know and i will update it soon!😃

Moderator's Note: Edited to remove inappropriate & offensive language.

Edited by shahidlover24 - 18 years ago

it was rly good!!!! do cont. soon!!! hmm, nice title-karma.

AWSOME DOOD! :D

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Edited by shahidlover24 - 18 years ago

hi everyone, Nice to see some comments
Well getting back to the story
Jiya: Uggh...Mom i dont want to the mandir, its so boring at the mandir
Jiya's Mom: Jiya stop behaving like a child, grow up, its for your own good.
Jiya: Makes a face and gets ready in like a indian outfit
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Aman: On the phone with karan, **** dude! This whole mandir thing is killing me, at least i convinced my parents to not wear anything stupid.
Karan: Aman yaar, get over it, seriously you whine like girl all the time.
Aman: Shut up Man, its not like you have to go to the "mandir" when was the last time you went to one?
Karan: I go every once a year, you kno that.
Aman: Watever, well i will talk to ya later i gotta go.
Karan: Have fun! Hangs up!
Karan: Thinkin what to do next,just then his mom's like lets go to the Indian Grocery store and he leaves with her.
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Kajal: Getting ready to go the indian grocery store too.
At the store:
Kajal: Is arguing with her mom about not to act so indian and be so cheap about the price of the grocery and its not India.
Karan: He is right behind her and hears to the whole conversation and smiles completely agreeing with Kajal.
Kajal: Turns around to go put something back but she bangs into Karan and the packet falls.
They both get to the floor and try to grap the packet and their hands touch each others.
Kajal: Looks up and gets lost into Karan's eyes.
Karan: He cant believe how pretty she looks even without makeup on.
They both smile at eachother and see that their mom's are having a conversation and they realize that their moms are old friends.
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Jiya: Bumps into Aman because she was late and he gets mad at her coz she spils the prasad milk all over his new t-shrit.
Aman: God Damn, Cant you see!! This is my new ****ing t-shirt. You stupid Indian.
Jiya: Furious Jiya Slaps him, You idiot this is a mandir dont curse and it was ur fault and who asked you to wear that anyways. You fool.
Aman: Starts to say something but Jiya walks away.
They both hate eachothers guts.
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Karan and Kajal are staring at eachother when their mom decides to call them because they are leaving.
They hear them say they will meet soon.

Kajal leaves thinking she needs to call Jiya and let her know about Karan and how he might be coming over their house soon.

Karan leaves thinking the same thing.

Preview for next time: Karan and Kajal meet second time and start hanging out.

Moderator's Note: Edited to remove inappropriate & offensive language.

Edited by shahidlover24 - 18 years ago

WOWOWOWOWOWOWOW 😊

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Edited by shahidlover24 - 18 years ago

that was sooo cute n good n sweet!!! plz do cont. soon, this fanfic looks rly promising!!!!!!!!!! 👏

Hi everyoneToday's update
So, last times episode we left of with Karan and Kajal's first meeting where they both like eachother. Jiya and Aman meet too and they hate eachother.
New Characters: Rohit: A Good friend from school to     Karan and Aman.
                Siya: A old family friend to Kajal and Jiya know's her too.

Karan: On the phone with his friend(Rohit)Yea! Dude that would be awesome haven't gone camping in a long time.

Aman: Who is that? SItting on Karan's couch watching MTV Room Raiders.

Karan: It's Rohit, He says we should all go camping and just hang out for the weekend. Wat you think?

Aman: Man that girl's got sexy clothes(Watching the TV) uhh, sure dude, watever you want.

Karan: Alright then, Rohit count us in. See ya Tomorrow morning at 7:00.

Aman: Did you just say 7 in the morning? Dude, that sucks its earlier than school.

Karan: Smiles, Aman man get use to it. Stop whining.

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Kajal: At the Mall, Jiya what you think of this t-shirt?
Jiya: Its nice!!! Try it on.
Kajal: OK. What about this one?
Jiya: Ummm, I like the first one better.
Kajal: Makes a face 😛 fine.
She walks up to the dressing room and she bumps into Siya.
Kajal: OMG Siya!! Its been soooooooo long!
Siya: Kajal, WOW...I can't believe its you.
Jiya Walks up to them and says hi to Siya
All the girls start chatting and Siya asks them to come camping with her and her boyfriend and some other friends. Jiya and Kajal Agree.
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The twist here is when they go there its surprizing as Siya's boyfriend is Rohit. Along with Rohit is Karan and Aman. Stay tune and reply to my post to find out how they all react. 😃

wow!! wat a twist!!! do cont. soon!!! i rly like ur fanfic
👏 👏 👏

I am just not going to continue with the story because no one is really posting reply but i am glad that 2 people did.

nooooooooooooooooooooooo, plz don't do that!!! 😭