A bride without Jewels- SFF-NOTE Pg20

Posted: 12 years ago

I'm not much of FF writer... i prefer writing my views on characters http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2324946

</b><b>but .. i was really bored and was missing Udayveer and manyata so thought of trying out something fun to do ... anyways...if its good than let me know and if its utter crap let me know too promise i wont mind๐Ÿ˜†Anyways this is just a short FF.

Please ignore the spelling errors and understandable lines๐Ÿ˜Š

A bride without Jewels

Walking in every coner of the room,
she'd tried to figture out her surroundings. In the past 6 months her
life had taken a U turn from rags to princess and now
queen not forgetting riches. Yes today was the day. Laying on her bed were jewels and a bridal saree with heavy golden embroidery. She lifted the saree up
and found her balance drifting from one coner to the other.
<font color="#ff0000">Do
people really expect me to wear this ' just lifting it up has me
losing my balance whats gonna happen when I wear it O.O </font>she thought in
amusement !<font color="#ff0000"> Great I'm going to look like a Christmas tree on my wedding day. Monyia, Monyia you have far more important things to worry
about than this saree. Udayveer, so focus.</font>


She still couldnt get over the fact
that she was going to marry mr arrogant up himself Udayveer. She had never
agreed for the wedding and yet here she was. She had tried every
method she knew in hope to call off the wedding from emotionally blacking
mailing Daddi sa to insulting Uday time and time again. Yet these
two had they're nose held up too high. Daddi Sa's filmy line of ' <font color="#993366">ek din har lakkie ko apne ghaar
jana hai</font>, would leave her stunned.<font color="#993366"></font><font color="#ff0000">W*F ,6 months ago they were
dragging me here claiming this to be "my house" and now they're
giving me they're fimly one liners, this familly really is messed up</font><font color="#000000">. But
the hidden truth was also that in these 6months she had grown to love
daddi sa however she was to suborn to agree on it specaily after this. </font><font color="#FF0000">Udayveer ! That kutta kaminaBewakoofKhota -</font>

Her chain of thoughts were interrupted
with the ring of her phone . The phone flashed "Khutta Kamina calling"


<font color="#0000ff">Hello princess
or should I say mrs. Yuraj Udayveer '...</font>


<font color="#FF0000">kutta kaminaI will NEVER marry you !</font>


Manyata swearing at Uday was always
Music to his ears infact his days felt incomplete withoutthem.

<font color="#0066FF">I am already
parked in front of your house, the guest have arrived,daddi
sa is standing near the door ,the wedding will have to go on . So
without creating any drama , walk down the mandap with a smile. </font>UdayVeers voice turned sightly intense.


<font color="#ff0000"> Khutta - Hello ,Helloo</font>...too late , he had already up.


<font color="#ff0000">What did he say,
not to create any drama ' my whole life has turned into a drama and
here his tellin me not to create any drama...wish granted ;) </font>Manyata looked arounded her room until her eyes lay on
her saree.<font color="#ff0000"> Drama is just what you'll get Yuvraj Udayveer.</font>


Manyata quickly entered into daddi
sa's room once she had found what she was in search for ' she carefully returned before anyone could sight her...<font color="#ff0000">hmmm </font>she thought standing
infront of the mirror with a smile <font color="#ff0000">.Pefect.
</font>


<font color="#6600CC">Manyata hurry up
the priest is</font> ' daddi Sa entered her room than looked in pure shocked.
<font color="#6633CC">MANYATA! What is going on , what is this. Where
is the saree Udayveer's family sent you?</font>

<font color="#FF0000">If I am to get
married, I will chose what I am to wear.</font>


<font color="#6633CC">Yes manyata you
have every right but this is insane, what will people say, have you
not once thought of our family ? where are your jewels?</font>


<font color="#ff00ff">Maa whats taking
so long everyones wait</font>- Komal stood in disbelieve.


The royals and press awaited anxiously downstairs for manyata but no one could match up to what Uday was
feeling sitting down at the mandap waiting for his bride to be. With
the amount of time that was being taken , he knew not all was well,
he would have thought manyata had eloped if it werent for the tight
security he had placed around the Mahal. But he knew something was
definity wrong...


With flash lights going off and the
level of noise rising in the room he knew his bride had entered. And what
an entry it was , there she walked down the stairs with her hair let
down with no jewels dressed in a plain white saree. He cleary knew
what message the white saree was to pass on to him but he also knew
how to turn the tables on her. It was this very moment Uday had realized why he had chosen Manyata and no one else. It was for this very reason. Manyata was placed next to Uday, she
could hear the commotion of the people present in the
room. She knew she had gotten her message across and turned to look at uday
with her eyes sharpen in glory, he returned with a laugh. As the ceremony went on Uday whispered in her ear, <font color="#0000ff">you look beautiful with your hair
let down</font>. Manyata looked at Uday in amusement , was that his first thoughts when she entered, is that all he had to say, hadnt he noticed her saree.?<font color="#0000ff">I
know princess what your thinking, as for your saree,
onces the ceremony is over it will no longer be of much value or attention.</font>


And right he was , as Manyata stood
infront of the mirror in a decorated room. At the end of the day it
wasn't her saree that stood out but it was her Heavy sindoored maag.
Uday had purposely applied such thick sindoor from the start of her
maag to the middle, that everyones eyes automatically fell there.
In fact the white saree had enhanced the sindoor for it would have
never been so visiable in a heavily red decorated saree .

I was going to name it A bride in whitebut thought it would give it away,Lol , trying to be dramatic๐Ÿ˜†


Edited by _SuMmEr_LoVe_ - 11 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Dear๐Ÿค—...this is so sweet nd amazing can you  continue...? ๐Ÿ˜I wanna know what happens next...lol ๐Ÿ˜ƒ...the phone flashing bit was so funny..."kutta kamina calling " lol ๐Ÿคฃ loved it yaar...you shud write more...๐Ÿฅณ
Posted: 12 years ago
 
Originally posted by filmyprincess


Wow Dear๐Ÿค—...this is so sweet nd amazing can you  continue...? ๐Ÿ˜I wanna know what happens next...lol ๐Ÿ˜ƒ...the phone flashing bit was so funny..."kutta kamina calling " lol ๐Ÿคฃ loved it yaar...you shud write more...๐Ÿฅณ

oh wow that was fast as...๐Ÿ˜Š thanks so much for reading , liking and commenting ๐Ÿ˜ƒ really appreciate it๐Ÿค— but  ๐Ÿ˜•i havent really planned anything after this . I'll try to think of something ๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by _SuMmEr_LoVe_ - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Kutta kamina calling... ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ Lol that crack me out... Great work dude...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Posted: 12 years ago
it was really fun to read!!
u shud definitly continue :)
pm me if u do
Posted: 12 years ago
please do continue  want to read more from you! loved it!
Posted: 12 years ago
please continue...loved it ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Posted: 12 years ago
OMG "Khutta Kamina calling" lolz this really cracked me up...๐Ÿคฃ

Really loved the part... that was so awesome..




Manveer married.. Awww... and the sindoor marking her as his...really lovely


plz pm me whenevr u update... looking forward to the next chapter..

continue soon!!!

take care

Posted: 12 years ago
Wow..very well composed..loved the idea..Continue soon and add me in your PM list :)
Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!!!!very unique concept..
white saree..๐Ÿ˜†
i just luv it..
plz pm me nxt tymm..
update soon..

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