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FF: Mysterious Murder at Manampur; Updt-Pg 44;5/2 (Page 17)

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 9:20pm | IP Logged
Nice update SwetaThumbs Up...Continue soon. Thanks for PM

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 10:44pm | IP Logged

R: (Frowned) I have some pride. I'm not letting him pay for everything.

i think it should be self-respect instead of pride here, if you wanted to mean " aatma-samman ".
 
apart from this, there are some grammatical errors, but nothing serious. you are a much better writer than me, i have to admit that. the way you brought back the case into the story again is too goodClap, i mean, if i had been writing the story, to pata nahi kya kar baithti ab tak story ke saathLOL ..really good jobClapClap, keep updating !!

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
wow yr nyc updt aur char. sketch toh superb tha yr aur me waitin 4 nxt updt...

happy now mah sweet frndEmbarrassed


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im confused   now what happend  Confused

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Great !

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haha part 3 awesme laga. Ech n evry charctr beautifuly plcd

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part 3 nice evry charctr u plcd wl.

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part 3 nyc u plce evry charctr wl

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