@ swetha :
nice character sketches dearπ !! regarding the updates you have done till now, i have something to say...the plot is no doubt very goodβοΈ , but i think you are messing up with the punctuations, for example, at the points where you want to express and convey the feelings of the characters, you are using the " : " symbol in front of the character name. so my suggestion is, dont use the " : " symbol in such cases, instead put it in a plain sentence..isse samajh ne mein aasani hoti hai, warna lagta hai ki woh log kuch kehne wale hai. ok ??π
accha one more thing which i just noticed, in the last update ie, chap-2,part-1, you said that Manish ji left for the station at 5.30pm to take the train to shimla. then how come Shashank says that it's " late night " ?π plz explain it.
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