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shriyaroxxx IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 01 April 2006 at 12:39am | IP Logged
ur jst too gud, sindhu, i have to say, u write really well, d fic's awesome

hellraiser Goldie

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i was excited.i decided it would b the dream wedding i had always air of grandness...just a simple ceremony...
me the bride in flowing white lace , him the groom in a cute tux nd the reverend..on the beach side...

the long awaited day soon came...the weather was stormy...with a hint of humidity....there were black clouds all over the sky
i stood in the morning twilight...the waves a few feet away..waiting fer the groom...i wited nd waited nd waited....
he never came.....i later found out..tia had called him 2 her...he had nvr forgotten her....he went 2 her believing she needed strength...

it was then i realised, he had nvr really luved me....i was just a substitute...while he waited for his beloved 2 remember him....
it began 2 rain....the sweet rain mingled with the salty tears on my cheeks...


"idiot..cant u see....salt..salt..nt mirchi ...."a curly haired hunk was cursing fluently...
heyy bhaggu..he thot 2 himself..these fools cant tell the diff b/n white nd red nd they want 2 cook....
a smile came on his face as he remembered the red haired origin of hey bhaggu...
he was the chef of a famous italian bistro......his pasta cud cause rivers of saliva 2 ooze...

finally he managed 2 get the correct ingredients into the correct dishes...
the sun had started 2 set....he walked across the street..nd looked affectionately at his lil restraunt...
the name "ANVESHA'S" was glowing against a bright red sunset

rrui Goldie

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Posted: 01 April 2006 at 1:29am | IP Logged
good one Smile Smile
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rakhi_uv Goldie

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Posted: 01 April 2006 at 2:01am | IP Logged
wow sorry 4 the late reply bt dis part was the best...... Big smile good everything's follen in place......
now its prim nd proper ...... relly well written Clap Clap Clap

continue soon
ashi_mania IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 April 2006 at 2:07am | IP Logged

restaurants name "ANVESHA'S" Embarrassed thats so much like my darling too happy that things have finally fallen into place and ranny has left ashi for good Wink

gr8 going sindhu Clap Clap Clap

FateBeChanged IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 01 April 2006 at 2:07am | IP Logged
yuvi's a chef and cooks pasta..quite shocking....but not as shocking as ashi-ranny 2gether....nice twist though...hopefully from now on it would be from yuvi's point of view...

and ya d beginning part was very well written Clap

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