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Posted: 24 April 2006 at 3:47am | IP Logged
wowww sid wat a sweet... romantic.... emotional.....n the perfect ending! it was really a very cute fic n i luved each nevery part of it! Clap Clap Clap
im gonna miss u n ur fics too Cry Cry Cry

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Posted: 24 April 2006 at 4:06am | IP Logged
Hey Sid...

i read ur fanfic jus now .. all at a stretch..

im so dumb tht i missed reading this fic

but anyways

luved dis part

PART 10


it was the brink of dawn....
they were standing on the white sands of the beach....
the sea was a deep azure blue....the water was icy cold...
it wa sthe time of the day we it was neither nite nor morning...
the sun had nt risen..but there was light with a hint of darknes...
the air was foggy....there was a chill in the air...
a huge wave came crashing down on themm...
they stood where they were...he put his arm around her waist nd held her tightly knowin how afraid she was of water
she stood secure in his comforting embrace....chills spreadin on her waist which had nuthin 2 do with the cold...
the water crashed all around them...
they fell bak on 2 the sand due to the force of the wave...
wet...laughing....his hands still wrapped around her waist...
he lay on the sand....lukin into her eyes...
she was on top of him....her breath caught in her throat...
she moved closer....
another wave crashed on them....nd another..till they were fully wet....
they lay bak on d sand....njoyin the closeness....
they gt up onli wen it was noon...nd the water had bcum warm...
he picked her up in his arms...nd wlked across the white sand
at tht moment there was nowere else ashi wud rather be....

n the ending

gonna miss u

come back soon

Divya
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Posted: 24 April 2006 at 4:23am | IP Logged
ahh d ending as perfec as it can be Embarrassed
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Posted: 24 April 2006 at 4:25am | IP Logged
WOW...I JUST LOVED YOUR FIC! I WILL MISS IT...START SOMETHING NEW...CANT WAIT....! Clap
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Posted: 24 April 2006 at 4:34am | IP Logged

Originally posted by hellraiser

the cruise ended at italy...
ashi nd yuvi walked along the plazas....visiting every tourist spot....
timbo wud hv luved 2 b here ashi thot lukin at all d designer shops....
it sounded like sumthin out of fashion week...
gucci..prada...versace...d&g....ralph lauren...
but shes happy were she is.....whu wud hv thot the fashion diva of maurya wud hv ended up in sum out of the way rajasthani village...
she giggled as she thot of her step sister cleaning..doing the dishes...cooking
tht reminded her..."yuvi...when r u gonna take me 2 ur restaurant??"
"thres a time nd a place fer everythin..my love"he said mysteriously...
he left her at her hotel...assuring her he wud pick her up tht evening...
she spent the whole evening tryin 2 choose a dress....
in the end she chose a red gown with swarowski crystals....it was her 21st bday present frm her mom...
"typical of mama....but it luks perfect.."
she combed her hair till it shone..
it fell in soft waves around her shoulders....
she had 2 admit ..the red in her dress toghether with the red in her hair luked stunning...
she just hoped yui thot so 2...
at 9....she heard a knock on the door....
she opened the door 2 greet yuvi..
the look on his face assured her she luked as stunning as she thot...
"so...where r we going??"
"special evening..special place"
"special evening??"
in reply he closed her eyes with his hands nd guided her towards a door...
she opened her eyes....nd gasped...
written in shades of red nd black was "ANVESHAS"
she turned 2 yuvi her eyes sparkling with delight...
in his hands was a platinum nd saphhire ring sparkling with just as much beaty as her eyes...
"anvesha banerjee ray.....frm the moment i had seen u....i knew u were the one fer me...
i luved u...hated u...adored u...envied u....but nvr forgot u....
ur my ecstasy..my passion....my love..my life...
will u be anvesha yuvraj dev??"


THE END

EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Sindhu,I  SURE  envy  you...

You  write  TOO  WELL...

I  think  I  should  stop  writing  my  fic...

You're  TOO  GOOD...ClapClapClap



Edited by dia5 - 24 April 2006 at 4:37am
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Posted: 24 April 2006 at 4:36am | IP Logged
sindhu its awesome
plzz write a new one Clap
cz13 Senior Member
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Posted: 24 April 2006 at 7:22am | IP Logged
awesome sindhu!!!! Clap

u write perfect endings Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed
ashi912 Goldie
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Posted: 24 April 2006 at 9:37am | IP Logged
it was awesome,superb,romantic,passionate n v. expressive.i luuuvvvvv u 4 writiiiing such a sweet fic n i'll miss u a lot

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