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hellraiser Goldie

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Posted: 19 April 2006 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
thnxx ppl... Embarrassed Embarrassed

if u think this is romantic..the nxt one takes the cake..its the most romantic part ive ever written.... Embarrassed Embarrassed will PM u my id ok Big smile Big smile Big smile

saff IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 20 April 2006 at 12:09am | IP Logged
wat a sweet n romantic part i totally luved it
n now cnt wait 4 d nxt 1 Embarrassed
ME-MYSELF Senior Member

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Posted: 20 April 2006 at 12:18am | IP Logged
Oh god it sooooo romantic Embarrassed .
It is lovely Smile and keep writing Wink .
s_aangel Senior Member

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Posted: 20 April 2006 at 12:37am | IP Logged
it was lovely as usual sindhu!! Tongue
waitin 4 frm wht u say luks lke atleast here(may be not or never in the serial Angry ) we'll get some thin we all wait 4 Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed
fate Goldie

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Posted: 20 April 2006 at 1:50am | IP Logged
i was a silent reader all this time...that means i was bein lazy and not postin nething....... well i guess i shud post now...ur fic is awesome ...though i like i said b4 the first part is the best......and i loved the first twist the best ............
neways do continue soon this fic and silence ... yup still have not forgottten that one...
love u lots behena..cont soon
icychoco Groupbie

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Posted: 20 April 2006 at 2:22am | IP Logged
its really awesome sindhu. u r too gud at this. plz continue. Tongue Tongue
uvcraziestfan IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 April 2006 at 3:14am | IP Logged
sidd u agreed to me u continued dats hjust soo swett ur d me best buddy lub u lots Embarrassed
hellraiser Goldie

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Posted: 20 April 2006 at 4:16am | IP Logged

it was the brink of dawn....
they were standing on the white sands of the beach....
the sea was a deep azure blue....the water was icy cold...
it wa sthe time of the day we it was neither nite nor morning...
the sun had nt risen..but there was light with a hint of darknes...
the air was foggy....there was a chill in the air...
a huge wave came crashing down on themm...
they stood where they were...he put his arm around her waist nd held her tightly knowin how afraid she was of water
she stood secure in his comforting embrace....chills spreadin on her waist which had nuthin 2 do with the cold...
the water crashed all around them...
they fell bak on 2 the sand due to the force of the wave...
wet...laughing....his hands still wrapped around her waist...
he lay on the sand....lukin into her eyes...
she was on top of him....her breath caught in her throat...
she moved closer....
another wave crashed on them....nd another..till they were fully wet....
they lay bak on d sand....njoyin the closeness....
they gt up onli wen it was noon...nd the water had bcum warm...
he picked her up in his arms...nd wlked across the white sand
at tht moment there was nowere else ashi wud rather be....

Edited by hellraiser - 20 April 2006 at 4:18am

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