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she was the same as ever...just as beautiful....the confidence radiating off her....
she took off her glasses......
nd he took a step back....
in those large brown eyes was an expression he had nvr seen newere before in his life.....
it was sadness of a magnitude he cud nt imagine......
she saw him..he luked at her.....
she came running 2 him..n hugged him....
he put his arms around her...she started cryin....
big large tears out of those big,beautiful eyes....
every sob of hers tugged at his heart....
they stood for a long while......
he wa ssurprised...and shocked...
but most of all he was angry....angry at the world...angry at everything nd everyone who had made her cry....
he wanted to take her away...away2 sum distant place were no one else existed...
where he wud keep her happy for ever...were no one cud touch their own private world...
she stopped cryin....
she luked at him thu red rimmed eyes...confused abt wat she felt
she ran her fingers thru his curls....caressing his face...she watched him close his eyes in ecstasy...
she felt a thrill running thru her...
"ashi"he murmured softly...
she drew closer....he put his arms around her ...nd kissed her....
a kiss of passion.....a kiss of longing.......a kiss fer the memories of old...
a kiss of desire...a kiss of doubt....bliss untold...
yuvi wanted nuthin more than 2 stand there forever...his arms around the woman he luved...
but the question ,if only he cud know it, was nt wat he wanted...but wat she wanted....
wat did she want???

Edited by hellraiser - 04 April 2006 at 6:57am

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Posted: 04 April 2006 at 7:02am | IP Logged
damn cool part
222 gud!! Clap

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Posted: 04 April 2006 at 7:03am | IP Logged
too good yaar to good

waiting 4 ur next one
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awesom gr8 wonderful out of the world plz cont asap Clap   Clap
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Posted: 04 April 2006 at 8:23am | IP Logged
great Clap
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Posted: 04 April 2006 at 8:59am | IP Logged
really good, sindhu, it's absolutely brilliant Clap
plz cont asap
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Posted: 04 April 2006 at 9:30am | IP Logged
Clap Clap Clap very well written!! bt y is she crying bcoz ranveer din turn up at their wedding?

Edited by rakhi_uv - 04 April 2006 at 9:31am
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Posted: 04 April 2006 at 9:32am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rakhi_uv

y is she crying bcoz ranveer din turn up at their wedding?

yep...u know..long hidden dard sorta

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