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sindhu.. this is the best fic ever!!!!! plzzzzzzz cont.soon and this is a great fic .... you rock!! 👏

part 9

"i beggged my landlord fer sum more time...
he said sirr...the bills waitingg...
my best friend called me the other nite..
he said mannn..r u crazy??
my girlfrnd told me 2 get a life...
she said paull..r u lazy?..
but i dun mind....
as long as theres a bed beneath the stars dat shine..
ill b fine..if u give me a minute..
a mans got a limit...i cant get a life if my hearts nt in ittt"


she was in splits by the end of it...
"thnk god ur laffin....i thot ud start cryin in my arms again"he grinned
she blushed in embarrasement...
neither cud think of nethin 2 say.....
she stood up nd walked 2 the edge ....
the stars lit up the whole sky...
"may i hv the pleasure of this dance"he asked with a charming smile
he xtended his hand as he had done so mny years b4...
this time there was no hesitancy as she accepted it...
they danced the nite away..lost in each others eyes...
the ship docked at a port...
they luked at the coast..nd raced hand in hand towards it..

Edited by hellraiser - 18 years ago

👏 👏 👏 awesome sid...yuvi is always so sweet so matured yet a kid sumtimes....well keep writing to cheer all yuvi fans like me 😭

cont soon.....

awesome sindhu
u gotta post da nxt prt soon

luking fwd for more gud scenes 😉

WOW sindhu......the song is sooooo nice!!!! 😆

And the part is soooooooo romantic..... 😳

Now...dont u dare disappear again!!!! 😉

And continue soon..... 👏

P.S.gimme ur yahoo id. 😃

thnxx ppl... 😳 😳

if u think this is romantic..the nxt one takes the cake..its the most romantic part ive ever written.... 😳 😳

mads...me will PM u my id ok 😃 😃 😃

wat a sweet n romantic part i totally luved it
n now cnt wait 4 d nxt 1 😳

Oh god it sooooo romantic 😳 .
It is lovely 😊 and keep writing 😉 .

it was lovely as usual sindhu!! 😛
waitin 4 more.....an frm wht u say luks lke atleast here(may be not or never in the serial 😡 ) we'll get some thin we all wait 4 😳 😳 😳

i was a silent reader all this time...that means i was bein lazy and not postin nething....... well i guess i shud post now...ur fic is awesome ...though i like i said b4 the first part is the best......and i loved the first twist the best ............
neways do continue soon this fic and silence ... yup still have not forgottten that one...
love u lots behena..cont soon