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~Destiny~AK PAGE 51 (10/3)The End (Page 50)

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just read ur fan-fic WOW! Smile

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Originally posted by IndianCutie13

great part i can't stop laughing the end was so hillouris LOL

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Wonderful Part
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i loved this part

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~Destiny~

It was the day of Anjali's and Aaron's wedding. Kripa and Angad were busy in preparations. They hadn't seen each since morning. After getting done with decorating they both went and got ready.
Aaron- Do I look good?
Angad- You look great, I wonder how Kripa looks.....
Aaron- I wonder how dashing my Anjali will look, I can't believe she said yes when I proposed to her
Angad laughed.
A- I know, I was shocked too, I mean who would say yes to you, right?
Aaron- that was so not funny Angad
A- Jokes apart, you guys look good together
Aaron- I know, I say the same about you and Kripa, even though you two are so different
Angad- I agree with you 110% on that.
Angad smiled as he recalled his morning.
     Angad got out of the shower and woke Kripa up.
     A- Wake up baby
     K- Angad, its too **** early
     A- But its Aaron's wedding, we have too much preparations to do
     K- oh yeah
     Kripa opened her eyes. She smiled as she saw water dripping from Angad's wet hair and him      shirtless.
     K- Angad, you can't turn me on in the morning
     Angad laughed.
     A- God Kripa, your a bigger flirt then me
     Kripa laughed. She went to the bathroom and took her shower. An hour later when Angad came in      the room, he saw clothes scattered everywhere, the bed still wasn't made, jewelry was scattered on      the floors. As Angad walked in he tripped on something
     A-****
     Angad looked at what he tripped on, it was a sandal.
     A- Kripa
     Kripa was laughing looking at him through the mirror as she was brushing her hair.
     K- Are you okay?
     A- What is this Kripa, I just cleaned the room yesterday, and now look at this mess
     K- Sorry, but I couldn't find anything to wear, but now I did, so problem solved
     A- Okay so as your trying your clothes on why didn't you hang them back up when you didn't like      them?
     K- Now that darling would be too easy
     A- I'm not joking Kripa, it looks like a pigsty in here
     Kripa mumbled under her breath- Neat freak
     A- What did you say?
     K- Nothing
     A- now what's your excuse for not making the bed
     K- Why do I always have to make the bed, why can't you?
     A- Because the last person up always makes it
     K- That's not fair, you know I'm the last one to always wake up
     A- Meaning you'll always make it, right?
     K- Okay, okay I'll make it
     A- I just hope our kids don't go on you
     K- What do you mean, if they don't go on me, then who will they go on, the neighbors?
     A- I'm just saying they should be like me, responsible, smart, clean, and organized
     K- You mean to say "geek"
     A- Okay, so be it, I'm a geek
     K- But a very cute geek
     A- **** your good at flirting
     Kripa laughed.
     K- I love you Angad, and to be honest I want our kids to be just like you too
     Angad went closer to Kripa and looked into her eyes, which had nothing but love in it.
     A- Well, I want my kids to be like you, fun and loving
     K- Your not a bad flirt yourself
     Angad kissed Kripa, Kripa sank into his kiss.

Aaron- Angad, Angad, hey dude
Angad snapped out of his thoughts.
A- Sorry what?
Aaron- Were you thinking about Kripa
A- What if I tell you I wasn't
Aaron- If you tell me you weren't thinking about my sister I'll kill you, but I know you are because you love her more then anyone could possibly imagine

In the other room Kripa was getting Anjali ready.
K- Oh my goodness Anjali, Aaron is going to faint when he sees how pretty you look
Anj- I'm really nervous Kripa
K- Don't worry, your my best friend, I wouldn't let you take any wrong step, Aaron will keep you happier then anyone can, I promise.
Anj- I know, he's your brother after all
K- Okay, come on, it's almost time for the wedding to start
Anjali- okay

Aaron and Anjali took the saat phera. They were both more then happy. Right after the wedding Angad and Kripa gifted them a honey moon sweet to Hawaii.
Aaron- Thanks guys
Anjali- Wow this is the best gift ever
K- Your welcome
A- And if you want to keep this gift then I suggest you leave for the airport in the next five minutes
Anjali- But our bags?
K- Don't worry we packed them already, there in the car
Anjali- Oh my God I love you guys
Aaron- Thanks Angad, Kripa, you guys are the best, bye
Angad- See you after your honeymoon!
Aaron winked at him and he left.

Angad and Kripa were cleaning up after the wedding.
K- Hey Angad
A- Yes?
K- You look very handsome
K- I know, but you look way sexier then me
K- thanks
Angad continued cleaning up.
Kripa took his hand and was leading him somewhere.
A- Kripa---
K- Shhhh, just follow me.
Angad did as he was told. Kripa took him to the balcony. The stars were out. The moonlight hit their faces along with the cool breeze.
A- Kripa---
K- Angad, let me talk tonight,
Angad nodded.
K- Every step of the way you held my hand and stayed with me in our journey. I don't know what I would do if I never met you, I'm glad the first day we met I yelled at you, because if I didn't then we probably wouldn't have ever been where we are today. I don't know what I did to get a great guy like you, but whatever I did was worth it. I know you could have gotten a million girls better then me if you tried, but I'm glad you chose me. You make everyday of my life special and worth getting up for. I know I say this a lot, but I really do mean it with the bottom of heart, I love you Angad Khanna.
A- First of all thank you for staying with me and being there for me, I don't know what I would do without you. Secondly, I couldn't have gotten anyone better then you because baby your the best. I thank god everyday for bringing you into my life, you make my life worth living for. I love you too Kripa.
Kripa smiled.
K- I have good news Angad
A- .......what?
K- I'm pregnant!!!
A- What! Oh my god! I'm going to be a father! Wow! Thank you, I love you!!
Angad picked up Kripa and swung her around., following by a warm loving kiss. They both knew this was only the beginning of their journey and it was going to be one **** of a good ride.

                                  THE END

Thank you for your great support throughout this fan fic. I know some of you wil be dissapointed I ended this fan fic, but to every beginning there is an end. I hope you enjoyed this part. Please do comment and tell me what you thought. I'm also thinking of starting a new fan fic, is that a good idea? Please comment! I love you all!


             

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Posted: 03 October 2006 at 8:10pm | IP Logged
aww that was such a cute ending!!!!! neways cant wait 4 ur other ff 2 b cont.!!! hope u start more sooon!!!
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Posted: 03 October 2006 at 8:13pm | IP Logged
awesome ending. Clap
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i didn't comment much through out the whole fanfic...buh it was a great fanfic, and had a nice ending
keep up da good work
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