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zehra05 Senior Member

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Posted: 25 April 2006 at 6:24pm | IP Logged
awsome part Clap Clap Clap con. soon

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Thanks for the great comments!!!
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When Kripa realized she was sitting in Angad's lap, she blushed and quickly got up, this time without slipping back down. She was glad it was getting dark so Angad couldn't tell she was blushing.

A- I guess I should get up now too.
K- Yeah

Kripa extended her hand forward and Angad caught on to it and pulled himself up.
A- Thanks
K- No problem

Angad knew Kripa had blushed, he smiled to himself. He didn't know why but he liked being close to Kripa, he liked knowing she was with him, he liked talking to her, what he didn't know was why. Why did he want to protect her from all the evils in the world?

Angad was following Kripa. He had no idea where she was taking him.

A- Where are we going?
K- You'll see

They walked to the front lawn where a big water fountain was. It was a made into a dolphin squirting water out of it's mouth into the fountain. Kripa took off her shoes and stepped into the fountain. The water came to her thighs. Angad looked at her as if she was crazy.

K- Wow! The water feels great!
A- ???
K- Well, dont just stand there, get in!
A- You want me to get in the fountain?
K- Trust me...come in.
Angad wasn't too sure about it, but then he decided to get in. He took off his socks, shoes, and jacked. He put one foot in and then quickly took it out.

K- What happened? Don't tell me your afraid of water!
A- No, the waters cold.
K- Angad! It wont seem as cold if you come in for a little while.
A- fine!

Angad quickly got in the water and stood in it like a frozen statue, but a little later it didn't feel as cold anymore.

A- Ok, so now tell me why are we in here?
K- To take the mud off of us
A- But now we'll be wet.
K- Better wet then muddy right?

Angad watched Kripa take the mud off of her. She cleaned off all the mud and was now playing in the water. Kripa felt Angad's stare, she felt awkward for a while. She started throwing water with her hands at him. Angad threw some back, but she threw a lot more then him. He went to her and caught her hands so she couldn't throw any more. He didn't realize how close they had gotten. When they realized it they were once again looking deeply into each other's eyes. Before any of them knew it, they were kissing. What turned out to be a small peck turned into a deep passionate kiss. They both gave into the kiss as much as the other.

I hope you enjoyed it. I know it was shorter than usual but I'll try to make the next part longer. Do comment!!!

Edited by amneetkaur_24 - 26 April 2006 at 9:15pm

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Posted: 26 April 2006 at 9:21pm | IP Logged
when will u continue next?????????????????????????????  this part was sooo romantic i can't wait 4 the next! Embarrassed

Edited by angadkripafan - 26 April 2006 at 9:28pm
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great plz cont soon. Clap
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Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed sooooooo cuteeeeee
jaldiiiii se cont karooooooo Smile Clap Clap
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Posted: 26 April 2006 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
superb job on the part!!! keep up the good work n cont. soon!!
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great part!!!

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