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~Destiny~AK PAGE 51 (10/3)The End (Page 16)

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Posted: 16 April 2006 at 5:26pm | IP Logged
Thanks for all the great comments!!! I'll try my level best to continue soon. Im going to start writing the next part soon, maybe even tonight.

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Posted: 16 April 2006 at 7:56pm | IP Logged
Destiny:

Angad got up in the morning, he had the best sleep of his life. He got up and took a shower and put on a blue shirt with jeans and he was looking HOT. He then looked at the clock,
A- talking to himself-darn I still have 45 minutes left b4 school starts...what should I do now?
Then Angad thought he might as well pay Kripa a visit. He drove his car to her house. He was hesitant to go in or not, but finally he rang the doorbell and the maid opened it.
Maid- Yes?
A- Umm, hi...I'm Kripa's friend,....is she home?
Maid- Yes, she's in her room, you can wait in the living room, I'll try to wake her up.
Maid thinking- Oh god, how do I wake this girl up now?
A- Cool

Angad sat on the coach in the living room. He noticed all the pictures of Kripa and her dad. He could tell she loves him a lot.

Meanwhile in Kripa's room:
Maid- Kripa baby wake up now, schools going to start soon
K- Please just a little longer
Maid- Someones here to meet you
K-mumbling cause she still half sleeping- Later
Maid- Plz wake up Kripa
K----------------------------------

After trying the maid went downstairs into the living room.
A- So, where is she?
Maid- I'm sorry, she won't wake up, usually her dad wakes her up, but he's not home right now. I don't know how to wake her up, I tried.
A- Oh, I C, If u don't mind can I try?
Maid-Well.......umm........
After a lot of thinking she finally gave in
Maid- Fine, I dont c why not, give it a shot, but I doubt she'll wake up. It's the first room to the right.
A- Thanks

Angad went upstairs and found her room. It was kind of messy, with clothes everywhere. She had a lot of pictures, mostly of her and her dad again. She had a pink bedroom, which was humongous. In the middle of the bedroom he spotted her bed.
A- Yoy Krips, wake up!
K- Go away   Chaaro(Chaaro was the maid)
A-thinking-I sound like a woman?
A- Hey I'm not Chaaro, its me Angad!
K-mumbling- Hi Angad...........Wait Angad!
Kripa quickly got up and sat on her bed.
K- Angad.....u....here?
A- No I'm in Paris, this is Angad's ghost
K- Haha, Now what r u doing here?
A- I came to pick u up for school, but after I came here it seems to me that u really don't want to go to school
K- Well its just I'm still not used to getting up early, when I was home schooled I got up any time I wanted.
A- Well this is the real world now, your gonna have to start getting up on time
K- I know, I know, I dont want to hear another lecture.
A- Fine...but I feel bad for your husband.
K- And why is that?
A- Well, the wife is supposed to wake up the husband after they get married right?
K- Yeah, I guess
A- It'll be the exact opposite in your case!
Then Angad started laughing uncontrollably. Kripa threw a couple of pillows at him, but he wouldnt stop.
K- Angad that was so not funny!
A- still laughing- Whatever you say!
K- Well I feel bad for your wife because shes going to have a dumb stupid monkey face husband like you!
Then Kripa started fake laughing.
A- Kripa,...... in front of Mishty u have great comebacks, where r they now?
K- I'm......................I'm out of em. Now get out so I can get ready.
A- Fine but hurry up okay, I dont like waiting.
K- sweetly- Good things only come to those who wait.
A- Kripa, if u dont go to the bathroom right now, I swear I'll carry u in there.
K- Oh really?
A- Kripa, your really pushing your luck! I will carry u in there!
K- Oh really?
Angad then slowly started walking towards Kripa. Kripa started walking backwards, then she hit the wall. Angad put both his arms on the wall so she couldnt get out.
A- I warned u
Kripa then went underneath his arms and ran to the bathroom.
K-yelling from the bathroom- I win!
A- Whatever, U won't escape next time!

Kripa came with a towel wrapped around her. She started walking towards her wardrobe when she heard Angad's voice.
A- Wow, Kripa ur looking good.
K- Angad!! Get out of here!
A- why?
K- Well does me being in my towel ring a bell to u?
A- Okay, fine, but let me just help u pick out your clothes.
K- I dont need any help, I already know what i'm going to wear.
A- And what is that?
K- Well let me c. Kripa started looking through her wardrobe. How about this? She pointed to a pink top and a white skirt.
A- Well it looks nice, but what about that? Angad got up and took out a light pink salwaar kameez with white flowers embroiled onto it, with a white and pink chunee. It was the only suit in Kripa's closet.
K- A suit?
A- Yeah, you'll look nice in one.
K- Angad, I don't wear suits.
A- Well.....then why do u have one in your closet?
K- My dad gave it to me on my last birthday, but I never wore it.
A- Oh Kripa plzzzzzzzzz, try it on for me, and if you look good wear it, otherwise you could put on whatever u want.
K- Fine!
Kripa took the suit and went to the bathroom. She came out looking gorgeous. Angad's mouth dropped open. It was like a different Kripa. She looked like an angel.
A- OMG is that really you?
K- Yes...........I look awful dont I?
A- Kripa, r u crazy, you look drop dead gorgeous!
K- Your just saying that to be nice. Now I'm going to go take it off.
Kripa turned around, but before she could walk back into the bathroom Angad grabbed her arm.
A- Kripa wait, keep it on, you look great!
K- Angad, remember you said I just had to try it on!
A- Wrong, I said u had to try it on, and if it looked nice you would keep it on.
K- Angad I dont know, I dont want to wear one.
A- Fine I understand. I'll wait in my car for you. Angad sadly walked out the door.

He waited for Kripa in the car. A few minutes later he heard the door close. He knew she was coming but didnt look over at her. He kept his eyes straight ahead. Kripa got in the car, she knew Angad was upset with her.

K- Hey Angad, r u mad at me?
A----------------------------
K- You are, aren't you? I'm sorry.
A-----------------------------
Kripa got fed up, she grabbed Angad's face and turned it so he would look at her.
Angad- You wore it?
K- Yep! Besides, my best friend told me I look drop dead gorgeous in it!
Angad smiled at her and said- Well your friend must be blind because....
Kripa cut in- Angad shut up!!!
They both laughed and drove to school.

Over the week, Angad and Kripa became best friends. They both felt comfortable with each other, they told each other things that they didn't tell others. But they didnt have feelings for each other yet.
One day at college:
Angad- Hey Kripa u gotta come to my house tonight okay and bring your dad.
K- sarcastically- Angad, if want to ask my dad for my hand in mariage then you have to come to my house silly.
A- Very funny Kripa, now if your done being sarcastic can I tell u why ur coming to my house?
Josh- I'll tell u, its Angad's parents anniversary party!
Rahul- Yep, they have one every year!
A- Well no duh, they have an anniversary every year, so they're obviosly going to have one party every year.
R- hey....................i get it!
K- OMG Rahul, tumhara kuch nahin ho sacta!
Right then Mishty came.
M- Did u just speak hindi?
K- I'm sorry I forgot this was India, Do we speak Russian here?
R- Good one!
M- Shut up Rahul! I just came here to talk to Angad, I didnt know u losers would be here too!
A- Mishty they're not losers, they're my friends.
M- Whatever! I just wanted to tell u I'll c u at tonights party!
K- Your going?
M- Of coarse, my parents and Angad's parents go way back, don't they Angad?
A----
M- Well c u tonight Angad. Mishty then walked off.
K- Uhgggggggggg! I cant stand her!
A- Don't worry about her, so your coming right?
K- Yeah I guess. But its your parents party, they dont even know me or my dad, I'll feel...
A- Well theres bound to be a first meeting Kripa, you'll love my parents! And your dad can meet them too.
Rahul- You guys are acting like u guys r meeting your in-laws.
K- Rahul has anyone told you that u talk way 2 much?
J- Kripa, I think the question would be has anyone not told him he talks way 2 much!
They all started laughing. Life seemed perfect!

Preview: The party and a new character!!!!

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hey
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plz
continue soon!!!


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Posted: 16 April 2006 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
awesome part! cont soon! i loved it! whos the new charecter?
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