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FF: Holding Your Hands Forever.. Ch16, Pg38 (Page 26)

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Posted: 05 February 2012 at 3:38pm | IP Logged
Awesome chapter Bidz really enjoying reading it.

Now I seen that side of Mohan on the show it helps me relate to him in your story. There is a huge void that needs to be filled and with DP off air your story helps.

Thanks Bidz

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Chapter #11:
Fear Of Loosing You Kills Me Inside...

Sweating, Kastur kept on moving her head. Her breath turned heavier due to fear. She gripped the bed sheet and suddenly she jerked up in a sitting position. Scared and nervous, she looked around. The sun was at it's peak and it brightened the whole room. She got up from bed quickly and went outside. 

Mohan was peacefully sleeping with his head under his pillow. Kastur opened the door of his room and stared at him, shocked. She ran to him and removed the pillow off from his head. Mohan opened his eyes slowly and looked at her. 

"Kastur, you are here so early? Are you alright?", Mohan asked her in a sleepy voice. 

Tears gushed from Kastur's eyes as she looked at him with so much affection. Seeing him perfectly okay brought life back inside her. She sat beside him and didn't let her eyes go off from him. 

Mohan sat on his bed and looked at her worriedly. He wiped off her tears and softly yet tensely asked her, "What happened Kastur? Why are you crying? I hope everything is okay."

Kastur pulled him in a tight hug. "I had a nightmare.", she said quietly. 

"That was just a dream. Don't get scared. Dreams never become reality.", Mohan said as he caressed her hairs gently and consoled her. 

Kastur broke the hug and cupped his face. "I can't loose you Mohan. Please take care of yourself. He might harm you.", her face depicted fear. 

Mohan, understanding the whole situation, embraced her securely and said lovingly,  "He's in jail, Kastur. He can't harm me. Don't panic. I'll be with you always. I promise."

Kastur broke the hug and said in a caring yet ordering tone, "Today you'll stay home. You won't go out."

Mohan smiled seeing the way she cared for him. "Yes madam." he mischievously said. Kastur slightly smiled. 

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Saroj went to market to buy some home stuff. Kastur was sitting on the dinning table and eating breakfast. Mohan was working on his laptop. Just then; the phone rang. Mohan picked up the call and after a moment, he grinned. 

"Yeap she'll be there on time. Thank you so much. Take care. Bye."

He said, hung up the phone and ran to the kitchen. 

"Kastur, you've been called for the interview. Remember sometime ago, you applied for lecturer job in arts college? They've selected you in the list. You've interview tomorrow morning.",he said ecstatically but seeing Kastur gloomy, he frowned. "What happened? Why are you sad?", he asked.

Kastur raised her eyes on realizing Mohan's presence. Immediately she faked a smile. "What happened? Do you need something? Are you hungry?", she said on spree and tried sounding normal though she wasn't.

Confused, Mohan shook his head. 

"I'm coming.", Kastur said plainly and as she got up from her chair, she screamed holding her tummy. 

Mohan widened his eyes in shock. He held her. "Kastur, are you okay? Kastur..." His tone was high in worry.

"It's hurting a lot." Kastur said as she closed her eyes in pain. 

Mohan picked her up in his arms and rushed outside. 

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Pacing around outside the cabin, Mohan waited for the doctor. At last, his wait got over.

"Doctor, how is Kastur? What happened to her?", Mohan asked him, panicking.

Seriously the doctor said, "Mr. Gala, she is really weak. She needs pure rest. Plus I think that she's tensed about something. Something is bothering her very badly. She couldn't handle it, so it affected on her pregnancy. Please take care of her."

Mohan nodded quietly. The doctor left. "What is making her so worried? I need to talk to her." Mohan said with a confused look. Just then; a nurse came to him and said, "Can you please bring these vitamins for Ms.Kastur? We need these immediately."

Mohan nodded and went to the hospital pharmacy.

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An hour passed. Feeling better than before, Kastur sat up. As a nurse came inside, she requested her, "Nurse, can you please call the one with me?"

The nurse nodded and went outside. After a minute, she came back and said tensely, "Mr.Gala isn't outside. He went downstairs to buy medicines an hour ago and yet didn't come back.

Kastur was shocked. "I hope that my nightmare didn't turn reality." she thought.

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Done...hope you all enjoy this nightmare trackLOL Don't worry...am not dragging the story...it's just the last spice to make up a tasty dishWink Waisey bhi,I love twistsLOL I just love suspense...enjoy on cliffhanger and comments pleaseLOL Btw thanks for the previous comments and likesEmbarrassedHug


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Arre waah bidzben Hug rapchikkk...
Agar kastur ke hubby ne mere Mohan ko kuch kiya na toh Censored I will kill him...
Awesome blossom chapter Party jaldi update kr

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Originally posted by silky_harshad

Arre waah bidzben Hug rapchikkk...
Agar kastur ke hubby ne mere Mohan ko kuch kiya na toh Censored I will kill him...
Awesome blossom chapter Party jaldi update kr
thanks silkybenHug update pata nahi phir kab milegi...lets see..Smile

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Posted: 13 February 2012 at 5:12am | IP Logged
very good bidz darling.Clap...actually it is worryful.Disapprove...
i wud alsoo faint if sumthing wud happen 2 my MOHANOuch

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Posted: 13 February 2012 at 5:37am | IP Logged
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Posted: 13 February 2012 at 7:18am | IP Logged
OMGGGShocked bidzzz wowowoowowow amazinggg FF chapter 10 OMG all the emotions were described so well, omg i looove the kastur/saroj moments not to forget the joy in mohan when he heard kasturs acceptance on marriage... awww the best part was when he woke up during the ni8 and saw her munching on pickles heheheh her childishness omg i cud vision it... mohan's sleepy eyelids shutting and opening by the seconds..these are the moments i am craving to see... once again bidzz thnx for making mohur alive by ur FF's its just MINDBLOWING... sowie the damn like button doesnt work for me.. i will read ch11 now :D

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Posted: 13 February 2012 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Bidzzz!!!!!!!!! is this FAIR???? whttt how cud u end with cliffhangerAngry OMG one of ur Best FF so farrr ufhh the rush the suspense this FF had was one of a kindddClap..wowowoow u knw the way u wrote abt kastur's fear of losing mohan was BRILLIANT.. her running into his room hugging him, him assuring her... she's scared of losing mohan thats y all tht tention and ending up in doc care ... OMG mohan didnt come baq yet.. where did he goo BIDZZZAngry make him come baq asap... I DEMANDLOL... lolx well written bidzzz keep it uppp Wink

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