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IPKKND SS: Holding On and Letting Go, Parts 1-5 :) (Page 63)

deeps_92 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 29 July 2011
Posts: 9849

Posted: 04 January 2012 at 11:29am | IP Logged
u know wat this was the way i wanted it to end...
i dint want her to die or get cured suddenly...
the end was perfect...
i loved it...
thanks for writting such nice story...
pls keep writting

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SmileyStar IF-Rockerz

Joined: 20 September 2011
Posts: 5641

Posted: 05 January 2012 at 7:58am | IP Logged
That was sooo Good, Hayles!! Great update!! Hope you're soon back wid some more of your awesome work :D

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Richie-Rich Goldie

Joined: 28 October 2008
Posts: 1287

Posted: 05 January 2012 at 11:29pm | IP Logged

I cried this time. Numb I felt.
Why do things like that ever happen?! :(

Your update had a striking resemblance to A Walk To Remember.
The list and all...(Just felt like saying)

But Im glad you ended it the way you did.
You know just left for the reader to decide...cause what I believe is that she lives for years with Arnav there by her side all along...if not happily ever gives the reality touch to it!

I m waiting for another one now. Something happier this time...cause this left me feeling all sad :P

*Edit - Thank You so much for putting my name up there, Hayles.
It's the first time someone's done that.
It made me smile. Big. :)

Edited by Richie-Rich - 06 January 2012 at 5:11am

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SillyPepper IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 11 March 2011
Posts: 11774

Posted: 06 January 2012 at 3:11am | IP Logged
Hi ccuteaangel! Big smile

Recently I got a chance 2 read this SS. U hav done a gr8 job...for a few minutes I forgot dat it was a fiction, I won't lie dat I cried..but I did freeze with a heavy heart  and I think dat is ur success..u made me live along with the characters...And the ending so apt! The most Realistic ending!

Loved it! Do PM me when u update, I hav sent buddy req Smile

Edited by cindrella255 - 06 January 2012 at 3:13am

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bmtdluver IF-Rockerz

Joined: 21 September 2008
Posts: 9569

Posted: 06 January 2012 at 5:26pm | IP Logged
There are some update that words fail. Words can't describe how beautifully you captured both of their emotions and brought them to life. It was like I was watching the scene unfold in front of me. The fact that you left the ending incomplete made your update all the more better. It's an open opportunity for anyone to create his/her own ending. Arhi's story in the ss is timeless and there couldn't have been a more appropriate ending. This update reduced me to tears, but al the while, I had a smile on my face. It was a poignant story that touched me and many of your other readers with it's wonderfully woven words. I think Arnav's thoughts at the end made everything so much better.
"He was going to hold on to the way he was feeling in that instance even though he knew there would come a time when he would have to let go. Let go of her and all the happiness and pain that came with her. But he would keep it all buried, deep in his heart and never let it fade, no matter how much of his heart she stole, he would always remember, because the memories of what only seemed like fleeting moments, were all he was going to have left one day..."

Thanks for writing this ss.

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moon_mine IF-Rockerz

Joined: 07 August 2010
Posts: 6317

Posted: 07 January 2012 at 4:46am | IP Logged
i jst loved it!!!!
bt leukemia diagnosed at an early stage can be i jst want u to gv another update...on hw they both overcame the disease!!!!! 

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Chimpsy Goldie

Joined: 04 October 2011
Posts: 1097

Posted: 09 January 2012 at 7:32am | IP Logged

What can I say? Holding On and Letting Go is a beautiful story... and you're a fantasic writer, Hayley Thumbs Up

Every writer has her own style and yours is not only unique, but it stands out brilliantly!
It's obvious that you put a lot of effort into it, and you really love and cheerish what you write... one really has to fully appreciate their own work of art before anyone else does! Big smile
A word is not the same with one writer as with another.  One tears it from his guts.  The other pulls it out of his overcoat pocket. 
~Charles Peguy
You're remarkable in the way you put extra effort in setting the right mood for each part, and I must say that your choice of songs are always fantastic...Clap
And now for my tribute to Holding On and Letting Go, hope you like it:
( Both parts from Arnav to Kushi)
If the rain was my love and the sky my heart,
I'd drench you to your skin and never let you part,
You thought I'd leave you, that I won't care?
But, losing you, darling, I just could not bear...
I'll pledge eternal love to you, my dear,
Let there be no sadness, not even a tear,
I love you truly, but this you should already know,
I'll always, always hold on, and never, ever let you go...
I've kept my word, my dear... so you have to keep yours and write more and more and more beautiful FFs (I'm always hoping for a mini serial LOL) in 2012...

Edited by Chimpsy - 09 January 2012 at 7:33am

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FAYKHAN29 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 20 October 2011
Posts: 10774

Posted: 10 January 2012 at 7:16pm | IP Logged
Hayley it is sooo beautifully writtenl loved evry single word really touching  Emotional i actually cried chap 4 & last part hping khushi wil make it, loved it plz add mexxx

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