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IPKKND SS: Holding On and Letting Go, Parts 1-5 :) (Page 38)

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 10:04am | IP Logged
OMG! I could feel their pain, i was in tears by the end of this..

So emotional!


You better give us some happy moments to read about too please!

and some romance too when they aren't sad Embarrassed

Anyways GREAT UPDATE! This story is beautiful

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 10:08am | IP Logged
Awww, I almost cried. This was so so soo beautifully written!

Hayley you are a perfectionist, you always manage to bring out all the emotions in your writing and I love it! (: The way they both broke down for each other was so sad but extremely beautiful, I could imagine everything in my head. I can't wait for the next update! Continue soon! (:

--Garima

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 10:10am | IP Logged
That was heart wrenching CryCry. You are an AMAZING writer!Clap
Is she gonna be alright??

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 10:10am | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM. So sad. You wrote the scene so beautifully.

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 10:11am | IP Logged
really u r a  terrific writer... m feelng bad 4 khusi ... now arnav ll realise the importance of khusi in his lyf ... no more hide and seek thng !!!!!!!Heart

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Amazing update Hayley <3

The way you write is beautiful :)

I sort of expected Cancer with what the bleeding and stuff, but it was heartbreaking just the same :|

The interaction between Arnav and Khushi was so well written! Very subtle yet so intense :)

Great job <3

xoxo
Aanya

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 10:15am | IP Logged
itx really depressing but lovely update

hope arnav help her and she accept his help.

update soon plz

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Posted: 28 December 2011 at 10:19am | IP Logged
i had tears in my eyes reading this... god hayley... it was amazing... now i knw wat y mean by ore stories r almost similar ( reason i breathe) but this thing is wayy too heart breaking... awesome.. loved it

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