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IPKKND SS: Holding On and Letting Go, Parts 1-5 :) (Page 35)

bhavnah IF-Dazzler

Joined: 17 November 2010
Posts: 3340

Posted: 24 December 2011 at 6:31am | IP Logged
lovely   update...n wat is wrong wiz khushi??...
niwez happy b'day dr...njoy urself

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Divya1503 IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 14 November 2011
Posts: 11962

Posted: 24 December 2011 at 7:36am | IP Logged
nice depressing update!!Unhappy and a very very happy birthday!!!!PartyPartyhope this year be filled with loads and loads of fanfics for us!Tongue

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uniquebluerose IF-Dazzler

Joined: 12 August 2010
Posts: 3692

Posted: 24 December 2011 at 9:05am | IP Logged
Hey what a fabulous update it was
On birthday we are supposed to give you a gift and you well being different girl cute and sweet angel you are giving us an update!!!!!

And man what touching update it was i loved so many aspects of your update the best was the last part it just broke my heart while reading...

Why was it that when everything was perfect, she always found an excuse to get in the way. And now, when it was all falling apart, like a puzzle with a thousand missing pieces, she realised she would give anything in the world to go back to before, back to those little imperfections that had made the world feel so safe. It was all gone, ripped out from under her.

She wanted him, and she knew she could never have him, but at the same time, she felt another feeling clawing away at her insides, the feeling of wanting to share her life with him, and she didn't know which side would win

I just broke down to tears in these line...Hey is Khushi issue really life threatening and can't anything be done baout it...It killing my insides and chewing away like anything!!!!!!!

I feel like just going into you SS and telling Arnav that I want to see if he can do anything to help!!!!!                                                                                                                                                                                

Your description of ARnav's thoughts on seeing Khushi and the way she was sitting by the poolside...and well her feelings of vulnerability...reminded me so much of Arnav and how he became angry when he felt himself becoming weak during the diwali missed kiss

These two really made for each other and I am praying to Khushi's Devi Maiyaa to make things all right soon!!!!

But I must say I finding her quiteness endearing and unbearable at the same time!!!!

Now Star...Dear Hayley...

Wishing you lots of happiness and praying that your creative brain just overflow with stories and fictions with which you can keep us busy and happy...

Also hoping you become a great writer one day and i proudly boast to my friends..."You know i knew this girl before hand and I have read so many works of her!!!!!"

Hmmm so girl buck up and write totally impressed with you 

Wishing you a fun filled joy filled day!!!! Why day...a joy filled year!!!!! Oh why only a year wishes for joy filled life ahead of you my dear!!!!

Edited by uniquebluerose - 24 December 2011 at 9:05am

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..Apz.. IF-Rockerz

Joined: 03 December 2010
Posts: 6858

Posted: 24 December 2011 at 9:22am | IP Logged
such a beautiful was depressing yet so emotionally touching...HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR!!!!

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tinsel IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 02 February 2010
Posts: 13531

Posted: 24 December 2011 at 11:42am | IP Logged
 That was really depressing...Cry
Flame. IF-Rockerz

Joined: 17 February 2011
Posts: 5201

Posted: 24 December 2011 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
Happy Birthday Hayley Hug 
Ahh the update was so sad. What's exactly wrong with her? I can't see her like this man. Its so upsetting. She's so helpless and seeing her like this makes me feel helpless. Poor soul. I hope everything fall's in place soon and we get our bubbly Khushi back. 

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Miss-Riz Goldie

Joined: 25 July 2010
Posts: 1033

Posted: 24 December 2011 at 6:14pm | IP Logged
hey awesome part and hope u had a fab bday :)

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sparklystarstud IF-Dazzler

Joined: 21 September 2011
Posts: 2970

Posted: 25 December 2011 at 3:19am | IP Logged
awesome update hayley!!!!!!!! Icon Monkey Yoyo
wats wrong with kushi...Monkey Icons
hope she gets well soon...Monkey Icon
arnav will be devastated if somethings seriously wrong with herMonkey Icon
pls pls pls make her well...

and i hope u had a blasting b'day yesterday...Monkey Icons
sorry for the belated wishes hayley...Monkey Icons Monkey Emoticon
have a happy joy filled lovely year ahead getting all ur dreamz n wishes fulfilled... Monkey Icon CiciMonkey Emoticons

~sam Monkey Emoticons

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