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All’s fair in love and war(pt12 pg 18) (Page 4)

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Posted: 30 March 2006 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
hey drishti i read all 3 parts 2 gethr n i may say its awsomeeeeee Clap

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Posted: 30 March 2006 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
Part 4
Yuvi was on the way to his room and he met Sid on the way
S:Dude,congrats,tumne us wacko ko ek total loser dikha diya.aur woh apne aap ko safe karne ke lia kehti hai (he mimiicks ashi's voice)i'm sorry guys,main bahut important kaam mein busy thi,thanku u jine mujhe trust kia.Wow Yuvi tum jeet gaye
Yuvi looks at Sid upset up his behaviour
Y:Nahin,main sab kuch haar gaya
S:What????
Y:Baad mein Sid,abhi I have to go find Ashi
S:What????
Yuvi goes to her room .She's not there.
Y:Vrinda,Ashi kahan hai
V:pata nahin Yuvi meine use pure school mein dhoondne ki koshish ki par woh kahin nahin mili.
Y:OK thanks....i think i know woh kahan hai
He runs and goes to the shed.He was right .She was there....
"Ashi..."
Ashi looks up and sees Yuvi
A:Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho
Yuvi sits beside her
Y:Tumse sorry bolne aaya hoon.Please mujhe maaf kardo.Plz
A:kyun.
Y:I'm sorry.Let's stop fighting .Let's be friends again
A:No.i dont want to be friends with you.
Y:Please Ashi,I'm really sorry.Please mujhe maaf kar do
A:Theek hai,maine tumhe maaf kia.Ab tum mujhe akela chod do.I'm in a very bad mood.
Y:Ashiii.....plz.....yaar
A:kya
Y:Babes...
Ashi starts crying
Y:ashi ashi maine kuch galat keh dia.
A:nahin (still sobbing)...no1 likes me
Y:Yeh sach nahin hai every1 likes u.
Y:ashi please dont cry
He puts his arms around her and she puts her head on his shoulder.....
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Posted: 30 March 2006 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
Embarrassed Outta  the  universe!EmbarrassedDrish,I  just  LUVVVVVVVVVVVVVVV  YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUU  for  this!Embarrassed

Edited by dia5 - 30 March 2006 at 10:31pm
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Posted: 30 March 2006 at 10:40pm | IP Logged
thanx every1 who has been reading my fic......i am writing long parts rite
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Posted: 30 March 2006 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
Yup...Pretty  long!But  I  want  longer  ones!Wink 

Edited by dia5 - 30 March 2006 at 10:42pm
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Posted: 30 March 2006 at 10:43pm | IP Logged
wow drish it faboulous mind blowing Clap
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Posted: 31 March 2006 at 12:04am | IP Logged
drish your fics are fantabulous and dis one is just AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
what to say....its lovely...keep it up!!!! Smile
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Posted: 31 March 2006 at 12:16am | IP Logged
Drishti..u r just writing Long part

we r all waiting for longER parts...

it was amazing...

i can really imagine.. this Yuvi Ashi scene happening
Embarrassed

i luved this part (i wish i was in Ashi's place Embarrassed Embarrassed )

Y:Ashiii.....plz.....yaar
A:kya
Y:Babes...
Ashi starts crying
Y:ashi ashi maine kuch galat keh dia.
A:nahin (still sobbing)...no1 likes me
Y:Yeh sach nahin hai every1 likes u. (he should hv said every1 likes u but I Love You Sweetheart)Embarrassed
Y:ashi please dont cry
He puts his arms around her and she puts her head on his shoulder.....

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