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All’s fair in love and war(pt12 pg 18) (Page 3)

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Hey, I read both the parts together...It is very very good Clap Clap Clap .Pls continue

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Posted: 30 March 2006 at 12:30am | IP Logged
hey your fic is too goooooooooooooood.but plz bring some conversation btw tia-ranvir.
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Drishti..ur fic ROCKZ! Clap Clap Clap
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thanx guys
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Part 3

Ashi hurries to the hall and bangs into Yuvi
Y:Ashi.....r u ok
A:haan ..haan
Y:tum kahan thi..
A:baad mein....tumhe kya farak padta hai
they both go onstage n Jambo declares the winner
J:And is election ka winner aur maurya ka new president hai.......Yuvraj Dev.congratulations yuvi
J:aur anvesha jo kal ke debate mein absent thi usko sirf 5 votes mile hai.
A:(whispering)Ya..ya..whatever
Y:Um guys ..thank u so much for trusting me n i promise ke main sab kuch karoonga is institurion ko aur bhi behtar banane ke liye
Ashi looks at yuvi disbelieving
A:Uh yuvi main kuch bol sakti hoon
Y:Haan sure
Ashi takes the mike frm him
A: ok guys..i'm really sorry main kal nahin aa saki.i'm sorry for letting my supporters down but mere absence ka ek reason tha....kisike lia woh bahut important tha.....so i'm really sorry n i'd like to thank those 5 ppl who believed in me even thoufh i wasnt here yesterday.thank you
she hands the mike back to yuvi.
there's no reaction shown by the students.they all just look at her and then leave ,leaving ashi n yuiv alone....

Ashi looks at him n then walks away.he runs after her
Y:Wacko,wait,plz.batao tumhe kaisa lag raha hai har kar.loser
A:Yuvi ,shut up ok.
Y:y shud i shut up,tum haar gaye,bahut kuch bol rahi thi na tum,ab tum haar gaye anvesha aur mein jeet gaya
A:i know yuvi...i mean yuvraj
Y:so.....how does it feel loser
A:Just leave me alone ok
Y:no.i wont.
A:Just go away..
She walks away
Yuvi holds her hand n stops her
A:plz mujhe chodo
Y:Pehle tum kaho ki u r a loser.
A:just shut up psycho,i am not a loser.tumhe pata hai maein kahan thi kya kal.mein ek dost ki help kar rahi thi bcoz i'm not selfish like u.
Y:ya right..thi kahan tum ,loser
A:(now angrily)main ranveer ko jail se bail out kar rahi thi
Y:What?
she tells him the whole story
A:..aur isiliye Yuvraj Dev main kal debate ke liye nahin aaye kyunki main thakur ki life ruin nahin hone de sakti thi..
Y:Oh...ashi....i..i'm .....i dont know what to say
A:then just keep quiet n leave me ALONE.
Y:but....but ashi mujhe latika ne bataya ki tum...
he tells her what latty had told him
A:and u believed her.tumhe sachmuch laga ki main itni giri hui harkat kar sakti hoon.i'm not u ,ok.i dont cheat
Y:ashi.....i am so sorry.i really thot ki tum.
A:sorry se kya hoga.how cud u think kii maine aisa kia yuvi,how cud u?
Y:i'm sorry ashi...really sorry...tum sachmein bahut acchi ho .....plz forgive me...plz
A:no .leave me alone.mujhe pata hai mere friends kon hai .mere friends mujh mein believe karte hain.so wat ki agar mere pas sirf 5 ache friends hain but i have true friends who know me,trust me n they thot ki agar main nahin aaye to iska bahut important reason hoga...and yuvi yeh jo maine tumhe ranveer ke baare mein bataya.....kisi ko kuch bhi mat kehna...maine vrinda ko bhi bataya tha n i told her not to tell any1 where i was taki log ranveer ke baare main bura na soche ok.so u keep shut too
Y:Haan ashi......u r..
A:Whatever.......tum se mujhe baat nahin karni hain.u thot ki main cheating karungi.....good bye
n she left running
Yuvi called after her..."ashiii"
but she didnt stop .she went on running n then she entered the shed n wiped her tears.....
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Posted: 30 March 2006 at 1:02am | IP Logged
hope u like this part
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Posted: 30 March 2006 at 1:03am | IP Logged
its damn nice... Clap
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Posted: 30 March 2006 at 1:18am | IP Logged
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