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All’s fair in love and war(pt12 pg 18) (Page 14)

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tahnks guys

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Part 9
Ashi went to her room after the party,still not able to believe what had happened that night……yuvi had kissed her…..maybe now they'd patch up n maybe they'd date again…..she wud forgive him…..she couldn't make d same mistake again cud she …ya..he deserved another chance after all this was true love….wasn't it?
Hmmmm…we'll see tomorrow, she thought n went to sleep happily

In Yuvi's room
Sid: dude ,yeh pary mein,u n ashi …tum dono ne kiss kia na
Yuvi: haan…..i jus couldn't stop myself….who kitni achi lag rahi thi n .n I think its abt time v patched up…..i love her….par who samajti hi nahin hai….main karoon kya?/
S: dude..abhi so jao..kal subah tum us freak se..
Yuvi shows his fist to sid
S: I mean tum us us ashi se kal baat karna..
Y: ya…………..
Next day
In ashi's room
A:maate aaj agar yuvi mujhse second chance maangta hai na to main usepakka de dungi
V: (teasingly)Haan of course,kal ke baad toh…..
A:maate …..plz
V:acha baba
A:anyway,mein kaisi lag rahi hoon?
V:Hmm ….jaisi bhi lag rahi ho yuvi ko toh achi hi lago gi
Saying this she giggles
A:maateeeeeeeee

Yuvi's walking down the hall ,determined…..today he'd tell Ashi his feelings …..today she would have to admit that she loved him too…..she had to..
Pondering over this he bumped into latty ….
L:hey yuvi ,careful
Y:haan…kya….hmm
L:yuvi….tumhi hua kya?
Y:kya…mujhe …..nothing……nothing at all….kyun…kyun puch rahi ho?
L:just….aise hi..
She sees ashi coming
L:uh yuvi mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai
Y:what………bolo
L:um…..uh..yuvi
Y:jaldi bolo……I hv to go
L:1 sec yuvi…..i ….i
Y:whatttttttttttt
Latty just hugs him tightly
L:oh yuvi I like u a lot…..
Y:what….let go of me…..plz……get off me nowwwwwww
He pushes her away….
And hears a sob behind him…..he whirls around…it was Ashi
'oh no',he thought 'she'll think ki maiin aur latty….oh nooo'
Y:ashi ashi ruko
He runs to catch up with her….
Y:ashi plz ..
She turns, looking hurt
A:what
Y:ashi plz…..jo tum soch rahi ho….waise kuch nahin tha…ashi who latika …she jumped on me…….i …I couldn't stop her….ashi
A: listen mujhe kuh farak nahin padta ki tum kise hug karo,kiss karo ,date karo.I DO NOT CARE ….do u get that
Y:ashi…plz
A:I don't wanna talk to u …..now get lost
Saying this ….she stomped away……leaving a broken-hearted yuvi behind….

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hope u guys like it
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Clap awesum as usual
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its gr8!! Big smile
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its awesome.. Clap

but i jus wished Latty didnt bump in Cry

anyways, be regular n continue soon Wink Embarrassed

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hmm only 2 replies
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it isnt 2 its 3 Embarrassed

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