All’s fair in love and war(pt12 pg 18) (Page 11)

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Posted: 15 April 2006 at 5:49am | IP Logged
gr8 part drishti
continueeeeeeeeeee asap

divya_92 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 15 April 2006 at 6:42am | IP Logged
very nice

plz continue

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plz continue drish Clap Clap Clap
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thanx a lot guys.i'll try to rite longer parts in both fics ok.btw its tuff ritin 2
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Posted: 15 April 2006 at 10:53am | IP Logged
but try............
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Posted: 16 April 2006 at 1:45am | IP Logged
gr8 part bt short LOL
plzzzzz continue sooonnnnnnnn
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Part 8
Y-yes mein ashi ke saath hi jaraha hoon
S-but y
Y-becoz I want to,no further discussion ok,sid

Next day in ashi's room she was getting ready for the party .
Vrinda-ashi tum itni jaldi kyun ready ho rahi ho
A-duhuh maate jaane ka time ho raha hai
V-par uv ki party to 8 o'clock start hoyegi.sab usi time par hi jayenge
A-not when u'r the host's date.
A-matlab yeh ki mein yuvi ke saath ja rahihoon so I'll go early wid him ,samjhi
V(teasingly)-haan mein saaaaaabbbbbbb kuccccccccch samaj gaye
Just then someone knocks on their door
A-hey bhaggu ,yuvi hoga,mein theek lag rahi hoon na
V-(laughing)haan ashi,ab darwaza kholo
Ashi opens the door
It was yuvi.
A-oh hi yuvi.,chalen
He was just standing there looking at her
A-kya hua?aise kyun stare kar rahe ho?
Y-nthn.tum bahut ho….i mean beautiful lag rahi ho.
Ashi blushes n stammers.."t…thanks"
Vrinda coughs teasingly
A-maate…….mein jati hoon ok.c u later
V-c u
A-chalen uv
They go to th venue of the party n ashi helps him get the decorations n food in place.finally the guests arrive

Later during the party…
Ashi is sitting in a corner looking at everybody dancing n suddenly she sees a hand in front of her.
"wanna dance"
she looks up n sees yuvi smiling at her
"c'mon ashi"
as soon as they step on the dance floor a slow song starts.they smile n dance.
Meanwhile someone's watching them was latika
L:shy,tum dekh rahi ho who ashi yuvi ke saath kaise dance kar rahi hai
S:hain babes,tumhe kuch karna chahiya
L:haan,shy,tum theek keh rahi ho.
S:babes go

Latika goes to them
L:hi yuvi,hi ashi
L:ashi tum thak gaye hoge,uv tum mere saath dance karoge
Ashi looks at yuvi questioningly
Y:sorry latika,aaj mein sirf ashi ke saath hoon ok
Y:no buts n thans foe nthn.i can't believe ki maine tumhari lies pe vishwas excuse us
And he takes ashi away frm latty
Y:nahin plz kuch mat kaho,waise ashi tell me tum kya mere saath co-president banna chahogi
Y:plz ashi plz
A(smiling)J hey bhaggu ,ok
Y:good n he rushes to the stage wid her
Y:hey guys,music off plz.i want to amake an important annoncement…..ashi ki koi galti nahin thi.she had a v. imp reason for not attending the debate n usne sahi kia kisi ko na batakar aur latika ne jo bhi ashi ke bare mein bola tha who sab jhoot tha aur ashi bekasoor hai aur hum sab ne use unfairly treat kia
The crowd is getting v. noisy,whispering,talking n even shouting
Y:plz guys meri baat suno,mein ashi ko apne saath maurya ka co-president banana chahta hoon n I hope u guys r wid me coz I think she deserves it
The crowd shrieks "YES"
Y:then that's done,now plz njoy urself
N he goes offstage to ashi
Y:c'mon ms.president,lets dance
A:oh yuvi
Y: u r more than welcome sweetie,lets dance now plz
A(laughing) ok chalo……….
N they hv a rocking time at the party
Wen the party's almost over ,the lights go out suddenly .
She clutches him
Y:haan ashi,don't worry ,koi power failure hoga,abhi thodi der mein light aa jayegi.mein dekh kar aata hoon
A:No.tum mujhe chod kar kahin nahin jaoge ok
Y:acha theek hai
He pulls her close to him n puts her head on his chest listening his heart beat
She looks up.
Y:tum aaj awesome lag rahi ho.
A:thanks yuvi
Y:I just want to tell u ki aaj mujhe tumhare saath bahut maza aaya.
A:mujhe bhi
Y:I wish aise times frequently aate
Y:I really like spending time wid u ashi
He was very close now.she cud feel his breath on her now
N he kissed her n the lights flickered on.
Everybody went "ooooohhhhhh"
They broke apart unwillingly n were surrounded by ppl .
A:uh mein abhi chalti hoon ok yuvi
Vrinda:chalo ashi

Latty looks sadly at shyla.
L-mein in dono ko ek saath hone hi nahin doongi
S:who-oh babes,tumhe jaldi kuch karna padega warna ashi yuvi ek saath ho jayenge.
L:haaaannn.mere paas ek plan hai
She tells shy the plan
S:who-oh,it's a simple n straight forward plan,I'm impressed
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Posted: 20 April 2006 at 9:41am | IP Logged
is this long enuf

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