Os virat jeevi visit and virat jealous

Posted: 12 years ago
Jeevika viren and virat entered the house and were greeted by maanvi

Diii maanvi screamed
Mannu jeevika hugged her sister and they stayed like that for who knows how long.
Arrey maanvi apni do ko hee milogi yaan apne jiju ko bhi

Arrey jiju app to Meri list mein no. 1 ho
The two shared a sweet jiju Salli hug

Mannu bhaki Sab kahan hain

Woh di San logh pooja mein Gaye hue hain mandir mein

Oh to tu nahi gayi
Arrey agar main chali jaati to appko welcum kaun Kerta

The foursome shared a good laugh and were talking until

Maanvi didi bhago the puntos had run inside the house

Kyun maanvi yelled as everyone got up and looked at the kids

But before the kids could answer maanvi jeevika spoke

Maanvi tu phir SE apni shettaniyo mein agayi

Arrey di chill maro is umer mein nahi Karenge to tab Karenge jab she pretended to pose like chachi

Meri kamar mein ajj Bari dhard hai tu ajj Meri halp kerde main kal Teri halp ker dungi

Maanvi jeevika slapped her sister on the head

Arrey didi ofho dr. Mannan ah rahe hain bhagooo

Kiaaa maanvi yelled

She started running all over the place.

Virat jeevika and viren looked everywhere maanvi ran

Baghooo maanvi yelled

Mannu but before jeevika can continue

Manvi rukho dr. Mannan was standing at the door.

Jeevika looked at him getting a little awkward.

Dr.maanan maanvi said sweetly

Yea dr. Mannan, maanvi Tumne jhoot kyun bola agar dabbu nahi batata

Dabbu ke bachey maanvi screamed

Maanvi betho he looked at jeevika and viren and virat and smiled

Kia maanvi yeh kia ho raha hai

Di kuch nahi

Maanvi he took out a blood taking syringe.

Betho

Nahiii maamvi ran and bid behind jeevika

Di Bachao

Dr. Mannan yeh Sab

Actually jeevika Ji maanvi ki tabet theek nahi hai uska blood test

Kia Teri tabet theek nahi thi aur tune mujhe Bataya bhi nahi Itna paraya ker diya

Oh god Jiju app di ko Kia kilate ho vadhera house mein

Manvi jeevika mouthed

Saali saheba app ki di...

Oh god hey Bhagwan log sach kehte hain pyaar mein log har waqt ek dusre ki hi sunte hain

Mannan cleared his throat

Maanvi

No dr. Mannan

She ran and hid behind her jiju but he moved away too. Then she found virat who pulled her in front of him and the two stared at eachother.

He was jealous, maanvi smiled.

Scene shift
After the blood test had been taken after maanvi had stopped running around the house everyone went to sleep and it was dark when virats room door opened and maamvi appeared

Tum yahan
Main yahan aur kahan
Virat got up and just kissed her.

Hey Guys jut another idea and I
Kno it was a waste of time but I was dying to write an os on this so just wrote what ever entered my head

Extremely sorry guys



Also check out my other torturous but a little better than this os maanvi kidnapped
Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing like always; though I wanted to know what would happen next :/
Oh well.
And how can you say this was a waste of time?
None of your OSs are a waste of time!!!Edited by shehroon_riaz - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
aww it's cute ðŸ˜Š love virman pm me hun
Posted: 12 years ago
It is never a waste of time, I totally enjoyed reading your OS. Please PM me when you write more. 
Posted: 12 years ago

vry nice a bit confusing as to who is saying da dialogue but overall vry nic

Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update soon n pm me
Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing :)) PM me when u continue pls :))

Posted: 12 years ago
don't be sorry it was great please PM me when u update.
Posted: 12 years ago
hey very nice update... PM me when you update...
Posted: 12 years ago
hey, nice dear. Awaiting for Virman scenes eagerly:)

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