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Kahani Teri Meri~AK~Pg 50 10/3 ~The End~~ (Page 2)

amneetkaur_24 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 29 March 2006 at 8:00pm | IP Logged

Angad and Josh played basketball for hours that evening. Angad notices that Josh was upset. Angad had never seen Josh this upset. Though, what distracted Angad was Josh didnt want to talk about it. Angad had known Josh since they were kids. They had met on the first day of school. Both had been class clowns and the flirts together. At lunch they would always share their lunch, in fact, they even shared the same girlfriend in second grade. (lol)
Angad didnt understand how Josh had a sister. Angad had known Josh since childhood, so where did this "sister" come from he thought. Finally Angad thought to bring it up.

A-Hey Josh let's take a break I'm tired.
J-Yeah sure, tired from losing to me.
A-yeah, yeah, whatever
Angad and Josh both sat down on the bench drinking their water bottles.
A- Hey Josh what was ur dad talking about?
A-Come on Josh, At your house, your sister!
J-Oh that, its really nothing
A-Then why'd you get all mad, come on Josh, theres something your hiding from me!
J-I just hate her!
A-Your sister? But why, Even I have a sister, Priya, and no brother can ever hate his own sister.
J-Angad look, Your like my brother, so I'll tell you.
Her names Kripa. It's because of Kripa that my parents got seperated, that my mom...died.
J-Yeah, this was when I was like 2 years old. Kripa's mom Nandani, she met my dad at this party. They were both drunk or something I guess. They slept together. She disappeared after that night. My dad then married my mom. They were both happy together, but that ***** came back a year later. She had given birth to Kripa. She wanted my dad and mom to accept Kripa. My mom had a good heart Angad, so she accepted Kripa. I guess we were happy after that. But a couple of months later, her mom came back. One night my mom saw them hugging. She ignored it. But them she saw that they would secretly meet and all that crap! She commited suicide Angad!
Josh started to cry! My mom left me letters telling me she had no other choice. How she didnt want to leave me, but she couldn't bear the pain!

A-I'm sorry Josh, I had no idea.
J-Calming down- it's not your fault Angad, it was Kripa and her mother's!
A-Josh what happened after that?
J- I don't know. My dad and her lost contact I guess. Her mom took her away with her to America.
A-So did you ever see Kripa after that?
J-Well, I never wanted to. I never wanted to hear anything from my dad after that either. My dad goes to meet her on her birthday every year. He always wanted me to go with him, but who gives a crap. It was the day she came into this world that ruined everything!
A-Well, Josh u heard ur dad right?
A-She's coming here.

Moderator's Note:
Edited to completely remove inappropriate language.

Edited by shahidlover24 - 02 April 2006 at 6:53pm

nabz8888 Goldie

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Posted: 29 March 2006 at 8:20pm | IP Logged
wow!!! ur first part blew me away!!!!! plz do cont. soon,i am dying to read more!!
blah_blah IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 30 March 2006 at 1:57am | IP Logged
kya likte hoon....seriously this is a great fanfic Clap Clap
annapurna Senior Member

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Posted: 30 March 2006 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
ur fanfic rocks two parts were amazing
amneetkaur_24 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 March 2006 at 2:55pm | IP Logged
Thanks for all the wonderful comments! I'm about to write the next part so I wil be updating today!!!
amneetkaur_24 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 March 2006 at 3:24pm | IP Logged
Recap: You found out the reason for Josh's hatred towards Kripa.

Today's Update:

Later that night Angad and Josh went to the club. As they were walking in Josh bumps into someone.
J- Oh I'm sorry
Alliyah-Oh, it was my fault, I'm sorry
J-No, I'm sorry
Alliyah-I insist, I'm sorry
As Angad was watching this he was about to burst out laughing, so he cut in:
A-Hey guys, are you planning on saying sorry all night or somethin?
J-Shut up Angad, by the way I'm Josh, and this is my best friend Angad
Alliyah-Oh, hi, I'm Alliyah, Nice meeting you two.
J-Yeah, same here.
Josh was about to ask Alliyah for a dance, but before he could someone colled her:
Someone: Hey baby, come here!
Alliyah: Yeah I'm coming Karan!
Alliyah: Well, that was my boyfriend.
The color on Josh's face changed on hearing that.
Josh-c ya
Alliyah left.
A-Hey man, you don't have the hots for her do ya?
J-Hey Josh doesnt have the hots for girls...
A-I know, I know, girls have the hots for Josh
Somewhere inside, Josh liked Alliyah. He never felt like this for anyone else.
A-Let's party now!
Angad and Josh me up with their friends:Mishty, Manik, Shabbir, and Simone.
AJ-Hey guys
Everyone: Hey
The rest of the night they partied. Then they all went home.

Next morning Angad went over to Josh's place.
He went inside:
A-Hey Josh, lets go play some basketball!
J-Yeah, I cant wait till college starts!
A-Wait did you just say what I thought u said?
J-Whad I say?
A-U cant wait for college to start?
J-Yeah so u and me could rock the basketball team like every year and win the finals again! Duh!
A-Oh yeah me too!
Then Surbhan enters the room.
S: Good morning Angad
A-Hi uncle
Right then Surbhan's phone started ringing:
He picked up the phone
S-What? No theres no way I could go!...Cant u do without me for a couple of days? Fine, I'm coming!
Surbhan put the phone off.
J-What happened dad? Everything alright?
S-No son, I have to go to Pune for a deal tonight.
J-So, whats the problem?
S-I'm supposed to pick up Kripa at the airport tomorrow.
S-Josh, could you do it for me?
J-Hey dad me and Angad are running late so bye.
S-Hey come on Josh, theres not much I ever ask from you. Just this, then I'll by back in two days.
A-It's okay uncle, Josh and me can pick her up tomorrow. You go to Pune with no worries.
Josh left the room
Angad was about to go before Surbhan stopped him.
S-Thanks Angad, now can you do me one more favor?
A-Yeah, sure.
S-Kripa hasnt came to India since she was a kid, so do oyu think you could help her around. I would tell Josh but you know...
A-YEah sure. I'll show Kripa around. And I'm sure Josh wont mind picking her up tomorrow.

PReview: Angad and Josh go pick up Kripa. How will everything be?
Supernatural_10 IF-Addictz

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Posted: 30 March 2006 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
continue soon its great
nabz8888 Goldie

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Posted: 30 March 2006 at 6:52pm | IP Logged
hmmm, a very nice part, as i rly like to see josh falling for aliyah!!!! hmmm, i wonder r u aware of my status as the local astrologer??? if not, i will make u aware, by making a prediction rite now: when kripa arrives, josh isn't nice to her, however, angad will fall for her!!!!!!!!! prove my predicting abilities strong or weak by soon!!!!!!!!!!

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