Kahani Teri Meri~AK~Pg 50 10/3 ~The End~~ - Page 10

Posted: 17 years ago
so sweet.
the kiss part was fab
Posted: 17 years ago
awww the end part was soo cute!!!..when he ran out the house after he kissed her!!..haha...so swt!!..plzz cont!!
Posted: 17 years ago
thanks for the comments!!! I loved them all.
Posted: 17 years ago
~Kahani Teri Meri~

Recap:
A- so I guess this is the end to our "date" too.
K- Yeah, I guess. Thanks for everything
A- Kripa, you know what your and your brother's biggest problem is?
K- What?
A- U guys say thank you too much!
Kripa playfully hit Angad on the shoulder. Then she said: I had a great time
A- Me too, and lets do justice to our date and end this the right way
K-smiling- What's the right way?
A- Umm.....never mind
K-disappointed- okay
Angad turned around disappointed as well, but Kripa grabbed his hand. She quickly gave him a kiss on the cheek and and turned around blushing.
Angad knew she was blushing and smiled to himself. He then said: Bye
Kripa still turned around- Bye
Angad then closed the door. Kripa thought he left so she turned around. Unexpectedly, she found Angad there. He gave her a kiss on the lips and ran out of the hosue.
Kripa smiled to herself and said- Pagal! </color>

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Todays Update
The next morning at college Kripa was sitting down with Alliya talking.
Al- So do you feel better?
K-lying- Yeah, way better, sorry I had to leave like that. I hope you didnt feel uncomfortable with Josh
Al- Oh, no problem, actually to tell the truth, he's a good guy.
K- Yeah your right, did you have a good time with him?
Al- The best!!! I never thought I would have that much fun
Kripa smiled at Alliya.
K-thinking- The plan is working!!!
Al- Well I have to go to class. Bye
K- Yeah I should be going too, c ya.

Kripa was walking towards her classroom when someone bumped into her.
K- Sorry Prithvi
P- It was my fault, so why r u saying sorry?
K- .......I guess I said it on your behalf then
P- Thanks, but I dont think its either of our faults
K- huh?
P- Well whenever we meet we tend to bump into each other, so maybe its God who wants us to meet, and you know what they say: No one can go against God's will
K-.........I guess ?
P- Well are you coming to my birthday party?
K- Umm I dont think I can, I have to go somewhere with my dad.
P-.....Oh, I...umm understand
K- Sorry
P- No problem, theres always next year right
K- Yeah
P- Well c ya

Right then Angad tapped on her shoulder. Kripa turned around.
K- Hey!
A- Hey, so I heard your conversation with Prithvi
K- Oh
A- Nice excuse to get out of the party
K- It's not an excuse, I really have to go to the doctor with dad
A- Oh, well still....nice way to get out
K-smiling- If you say so
A- Could you believe his crap on "God's will." I hate that freakin loser, when I kick his *** he'll know what God's will is!
Kripa was shocked on Angad's behavior. She never saw him that mad before. She didn't know what to say or do, but she finally managed something.

K- R u okay?
A- huh, oh yeah
K- Angad, I trust you about Prithvi not being a good buy, but.....
A- Let me guess, you want to know why I don't like Prithvi
After saying that Angad walked away.
Kripa followed him to a bench. She sat beside him.
K- If you dont want to tell me then its okay
A- No..no, you should know. Two years ago, Josh and I went to college with a girl named Sneha, Sneha was our best friend. She was a nice sweet girl. One day we went to a party, Prithvi was also there, Sneha accidentally took the wrong drink from the waiter's tray. She got drunk, Prithvi took her to the room in the party and.....he took advantage of her.
K- Prithvi did, I would have never imagined he would do such a thing
A- Well he did, Sneha eventually got pregnant, she couldn't bear the pain anymore, so she.....she took the easy way out, she committed suicide.
K- I can't believe Prithvi.....Did she tell Prithvi she was pregnant, maybe he would have help--
A- Why dont you understand! She hated Prithvi after that, there was no way she could raise a child with him!
K- Im sorry.....sorry you had to lose a friend like Sneha and sorry for what happened to her.
A- Anyway.....I just wanted to warn you of Prithvi...he seems like a good guy..but he's not.
K- ......---------------
A- Sorry....I didnt mean to get so mad
K- Its ok

Angad saw Kripa was kind of scared and shocked. He tried to change the subject.
A- So.....um whats going on with our "plan"
K- Oh, It's in phase two. I talked to Alliya, she said she had a great time last night too. Even better, she said Josh is a great guy
A- That's good
K- Yeah, now we have to make them "date"
A- How do we do that?
K- We're doing a double date!
A- Isn't that what we did last night?
K- Well yeah...but it'll be different, this time they'll actually be on a date with each other, during the date Josh will ask Alliya out officialy
A- Okay, sounds good
K- Everything I say sounds good!
A-whisper-True
K- Did you say something
A- Oh, nothing
Kripa heard what Angad had said and smiled.

Josh came to where they were sitting. He had a basketball in his hand and was bouncing it up and down.
J- Hey Angad, u coming to practice?
A- O ****, I forget
J- I heard guys forget everything when they get a girl, today I've witnessed it
A- Shut up
K- Well if thats true Josh, then you'll start forgetting things pretty soon too
J- Hey your using my dialogues on me!
Kripa and Angad starting laughing.
K- Well you guys go to practice, I have to go anyways

Kripa got up and left. She was walking towards her class when someone grabbed her hand and turned her around. She was stunned to see who it was.

Preview: Kripa finds out something about Angad and is left shocked.


I think the next part will be way more exciting than this one. So hang in there with me, thanks! I loved all the comments!
Edited by amneetkaur_24 - 17 years ago
Posted: 17 years ago
omg omg omg!!!..its prithiv!!..and wht truth??,,,tht was fab!!..plzz continue soon!!!
Posted: 17 years ago
hey
GREAT PART
i really like it
cant wait untill u continue
so do it soon
unles u want me dead
😃

~~~Mahak~~~
Posted: 17 years ago
👏 what is is the story told by angad fake?
Posted: 17 years ago
omgsh!! what truth? who is that person...prithvi?..i hope not...continue soon
Posted: 17 years ago
iz hte guy prithvi????...wut does she find out??????...i wont know till u cont
Posted: 17 years ago
it was an awesome part but i have a request : can u write more often plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cause this fan fic totally rocks! but u hardly continue it 😭

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