Rang Badalti Odhani

LOVE STORY ch 45 END pg 32 - Page 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
hellooo! :) have been reading your updates, but not commenting, so sorry abt that, but LOVING your FF! continue soon! :) loved this part.. i wonder what shaan will think/ behave with khanak now! :S 

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

finally he knows that she is married and waiting when he'll get to know the whole story

i guess he is attracted

and i think that guy ram may be he's not gud and unknowingly plays the role of cupid and shaan gets to know the actual truth

em thinking too much so leaving it here and lukin fwd to the next update

coz u've always stored something interesting

update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
heyy niki...just caught up with the last few updates...brilliant job👏
m loving this twist...so, Shaan knows that she is married but doesn't know the whole story...now, i wonder how he ll behave with her??😲

beach resort party sounds good...but, hope everything ll b fine😕
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi friends...


ch :25

khanak was wearing a maroon color saree with black beads work in it.she went to 

the office ..at the entrance shaan was waiting in the car..khanak got in to 

car..shaan drove the car fastly..shaan did not talk to her..khanak was worried a 

little she felt a unknown  fear inside her..shaan drove nearly out of mumbai and 

entered in to beach resort place called happy .(my own imagination)..it has lot of 

Casuarina tree (is called Savukku maram in Tamil, Sarugudu in Telugu, Surve mara 

in Kannada and Jangli saru in Hindi).there was a big building at front there are 

rooms and restarant in it and swimming pool ..it has a vast area around ..there 

are many cottages having two bedroom a hall and a kitchen ..every cottage is far 

from each other and also far from main building it takes nearly 15 minutes to go 

to either main or to other cottages..there were many small battery cars .. to 

reduce the walking distance and for going to beach or to restarant .

shaan and khanak went in that battery car to a 

cottage..it is isolated one if any help needed no one can hear..they entered in to 

the cottage..

khanak:it is beautifull sir..

shaan:yes it is beautifull..(looking at her ..with the different tone)

khanak:where r the others sir..when will others will come sir..

shaan:just relax khanak..everything will be okay..

after some time a phone call came to shaan.he talked and cut the call..

shaan:come on lets go..

khanak followed him.they again got in the battery car and after 15 minutes they 

reached beach...there were 6 to 5 men were there with women standing with them 

with low rated dress..khanak saw ram was also sitting  there...shaan went and sat 

with them...khanak heart was starting to beat fast..something is not right she 

felt...one of the girl came near her and asked her i have never seen u here.. r u 

new ...khanak does not understand anything ..meanwhile there everyone sitting 

including shaan put there battery cay key in a box..lets start guys ram said..

a man picked up a key ..everyone shouted oh..but shaan was sitting in silent..

that man picked up the car key and went with the girl that other man have brought 

her with him..khanak was confused why that mans PA going with this man..

khanak heart beat started beating fast..now khanak understood...oh no what does 

shantanu think ..with angry..she saw him ..he was also looking at her...(without any 

expression)shaan picked up a key and he went to that car with another girl and 

went fast..remaining one was her with that ram..ram called her come lets 

go..khanak was blinking she does not know wat to do..she went and sat..and was 

thinking...if she want to run away from here it will take nearly half an hour with 

that battery car to the main gate ..on thinking itself her mind and heart all went 

blur...they reached the cottage ..she doesnot know what to do..khanak thought 

god please help me...ram entered first in that time khanak pushed him in with force 

and locked from outside..when khanak pushed him he fall in the table and he was 

unconsious..khanak came to the battery car and then only came to know key was with 

ram..so she started run as fast as she could and while she was running she hit  in 

the tree and she felt down..a hand touched her..she screamed i am not that kind of 

girl..please leave me..and when she looked up shaan was standing there..khanak ran 

to him and clutched his collar and she started cry and scream.. shantanu i am not 

that kind of girl believe me..please belive  me ..i want to go..please. 

shaan: shh ...shh ..khanak..

but khanak was not in a mood to listen anything she was crying and screaming

shaan closed her mouth ..shh..khanak i am here..shaan took her to his car and made 

her sit in the seat and he drove the car..in the car she was sitting like a 

dead..there was no movement in her there was pindrop silence..car had entered the city..

khanak:sir... stop the car..(slowly and her was trembling)

shaan looked at her but does not stop the car...

shaan: i will drop u  at home..

khanak:shantanu ..stop the car...(her voice has raised and with a stress)
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Posted: 12 years ago
good one nikita..
khanak pushing ram n escaping from there..
finally she addressed him shantanu..
ok..waiting for the next part..
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Posted: 12 years ago
gud one

but wat was that

y did he went to such a place wid her

he knew whts goin to happen

em curious and lukin fwd

update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi friends...

ch :26

khanak: shantanu...stop the car...

shaan stoped the car.khanak got down from the car and she walked towards the 

busstop slowly ..shaan drove the car fastly and he went...khanak went to home by 

an auto. at night khanak didnot sleep...she was crying a lot...why 

shantanu...why...how can u do this to me..i thought u r a good person with all 

good habits..during college also u were very kind to others and i kept u high in 

my heart..why did u do this...i hate u shantanu..i realy hate u ...

next day early morning

mohan chacha: khanak beta..why r going ma...what happened

khanak:nothing chacha ...i want to see ma pappa and beautifull angel(bhaiyas 

daughter) so only i am going..

mohan chacha: then why this resigning letter..

khanak:...chacha...i want to be with my family for timebeing...dont think 

anything serious chacha...(small tear fell down from her eyes)

chacha:we r always with u beta..come here at anytime...

monika:i miss u di..

khanak:moni u should come to delhi...(they both hugged)

khanak:chachi take all medicnes daily..

chachi:takecare beta u can come here anytime..and anything u call us we r always there..

khanak took an early flight to delhi..

at delhi

khanak mom opened the door and she hugged her on seeing khanak..

vidhya: khanak beta what happened anything problem..

khanak:nothing mom i have come to see the little princess...

everyone hugged her and she went to her bhabis room..

khanak:hi bhabi...where is the princess(with joy)

anjali:hey khanak..(hugged her)..how r u ..

khanak:bhabi ...first little princess..

khanak saw the little one..she was happy on seeing her..

khanak:hey princess darling...so beautifull u r...

khanak:what is her name bhabi..

anjali:sathvika..

khanak:so nice bhabi...

anjali:what is the problem at work?

khanak was shocked on hearing it...but she composed herself and said nothing 

bhabi..i came to see my little princess..

anjali:now a days u r good in saying lies..

khanak:bhabi nothing bhabi ...trust me..

anjali:if anything tell me..i am always with u..

khanak spend her time with the littleone..

at the evening she went alone to temple.

at the temple..she was thinking of previous day incident..she could not forget 

it..her heart whisperd only one thing ...why shantanu why..

in the temple an old lady...like her mothers age she was giving swets to everyone 

in the temple..with a smile she gave sweet to khanak ..that time old lady 

fainted.before she fell down khanak got her made her to sit and got some water 

from near person and she sprayed some water on her and called aunty..aunty...old 

lady opened her eyes ...khanak gave her some water with a smile..old lady smiled 

at her ..thanks beta..mean while khanak phone rang and saw it was her mom she 

asked her to come home quickly...while she was talking in the a women and car 

driver came and they were talking to her...since her mom called her to come 

quick.she didnot wait there..so khanak went home...

a week later khanak bhai and bhabi said lets have  lunch together in a hotel..


Promo: lunch at hotel... khanak is sitting opposite to shaan and eating her favorite chocolate icecream cake ...
Edited by niki_rbo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg niki whts going on?????😕 m really confused...
first of all y hes doing all dat wid khanak...😡 first he took her to dat place...n nw she resigned.😲 n went back to her bhabhi...n dat promo shez sitting opp to shaan...😕
update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi friends... please tell me if u like it ...please hit like button  if u like it...story is mainly in the khanaks point of veiw ...later u will know about shaan...


ch :27

after a week ...it is sunday morning ...

khanak her dad and mom are sitting in the hall...

sanjay and anjali came to the hall

sanjay:mom.. dad shall we all go to hotel for lunch

vidhya: beta baby is there...how come...

anjali:we have planned to manage it mom...please dont worry..

sanjay:khanak is also here it is been such a long time since we all went together out.. 

khanak was not in a mood to go out..

khanak:no bhaiya i am not coming..

sanjay:come on khanak...

anjali:come on khanak ..ur bhaiya and me have arranged everything..

after that they got ready and they reached hotel.in the recepition they were 

waiting...a car came and from that car an old women and a 10 yr old boy came..old 

lady smiled at khanak and came near her..khanak remebered her and smiled at her...

khanak:how r u aunty..

old lady:i am fine beta..thanks for the help on that day beta..i was searching for 

u to thank u but u had gone quickly...what is ur name beta...

a male voice said "khanak"..

khanak:sir app..

rajiv:how r u beta..

khanak:fine sir..

rajiv :madhavi this is khanak she worked in our mumbai branch office..she is very talented...and 

khanak this is my wife madhavi...and this is my grandson aryan..

madhavi:rajiv she is the one who helped me at temple...

rajiv:oh...thanks beta...

khanak introduced her family members...

madhavi:khanak beta my son wanted to say thanks to u ...

khanak:its ok aunty...

madhavi:aryan beta what r  u thinking..

aryan: dadi i have seen her... where...

everyone is smiling at him..

khanak was thinking shantanu parents are realy good but him...

he will be in mumbai...

rajiv and sharma were talking ...they were friendly to each other..

madhavi and vidhya  were talking ..her anjali bhabi and bhai also talked with them

rajiv:  Mr sharma why cont we have lunch together...

sharma was liitle hesitated...

madhavi:sharma ji please we want to do something for khanak please ji..

sharma accepted and so they decided to have lunch together..

there  came a car ..

madhavi: finally they have come ...they r my son and daughter in law...

khanak was shocked...



Edited by niki_rbo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nikki...m a bit confused😕...why is Shaan doing all this???...has he bcum mad after knowing that she is married????
She resigned ... & i think that old lady has some connection with Shaan...
promo is very interesting😉...update soon

*edited*
u have posted the next part... off 2 read
Edited by shonai - 12 years ago