Rang Badalti Odhani

LOVE STORY ch 45 END pg 32 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi friends

Ch : 17



khanak went and sat in a chair and she was in deep thought..why i am getting 

nervous when he is near and my cheeks are turning red am i attrackted to him..

while she was thinking it her thought was disturbed by ranveers voice .Ranveer was 

calling everyone in the mike ..


hey friends this is our last day of our college life.Lets finish it with only 

happiness. so lets play a game guys.we all play this game. please be sportive and 

positive and enjoy this game..ok guys let me tell u the game..in front of aman a 

glass bowl is kept with papers written numbers .each number is written twice ok 

guys.each one should come and pick of one then go to ur place ..no cheating here 

by exchanging ok guys. then aman will call out the number for instant if he calls 

3 there will be 2 person having same those have to come forward and one of them 

should pick of a paper that is kept in another bowl and u have to do what is 

written in it ..

khanak was shocked on hearing this.

khanak:jhanu i am not coming for this game yar.

jhanvi:  why man r u afraid

khanak: no yar( even though she is feared inside)

jhanvi:it is just a game yar.

khanak: but jhanu..

jhanvi:this our last day we have to be happy dont worry i am with u..

khanak:ok.

ranveer :ok guys i will start this game by picking it.

then every one started to go there and picked a paper.

khanak went and while she was going to pick up her hand brushed with other hand 

she slowly lifted her head to see and it was shantanu.they were starring at each 

other and they slowly picked a paper and went their place..

Aman :lets start the game..

aman :number 5 

anveer: what 5 ..i am having five so i am the first one to start.

ranveer came to the center and he saw meera with a smile and showed his paper she 

nodded her head no that her no is not 5..from back of meera anant came and he came 

and stood in front of ranveer..

ranveer:oh no what a luck i am having..(acting with a frowned face)

anant:come dude chill yar..

ranveer went and picked up the paper from other bowl and it was written sing and 

dance for the song..ranveer and anant sang and danced for Why this kolaveri di 

song..every one enjoyed with them by clapping .

aman: ok guys now no 10

Jhanvi and meera had the no 10 and jhanvi picked the paper and it was dance for 

shiela ki jhawani song..song was put and they both started dancing..ranveer was 

clapping and whistling for meera and they finished..

aman: now no 2.

khanak no was 2 she slowly stepped to center of the hall and she looked around who 

is having no 2 .at one point she was shocked shaan was coming to her..inher mind 

why this always happens to me..ok khanak dont be tensed it will be okay..she said 

to herself.

shaan went to pick of paper and gave to aman .aman said u both have to dance 

whatever song we play..lights were dimed a light was on khanak and another light 

was on shaan 


.he slowly walked towards her with a smile she was standing there 

with a smile..the song played KHUCH KHAS HAI song.

shaan slowly held her waist with one hand and hold the other hand of her with 

his.at the touch of his khanak shivered a little.their eyes met they were dancing 

without leaving the eye contact.he made her spin(imagine ball room dance 

guys...)in one move he was so close to her.their lips were inch away..in some 

steps his hand traced her bare back(her blouse is to low ).both were deeply got 

into dance..at the end khanak back resting at shaans chest..

they were in the same 

position and both were breathing heavily..there was a pindrop silence..suddenly 

everyone clapped and there was lot of noise..they both moved away from each 

other..jhanvi came and hugged her .ranveer went and hugged shaan..shaan and khanak 

were starring eachother with a smile..everyone was wishing them...

suddenly a girl voice called shaan...





hey friends do u like it ..dance part im not that good sorry guys.









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snigdhanagar thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow niki...really liked dis part...shanak dancing on kuch khas hai... hayeee😍
 wanna knw whos dat girl who screamed shaan s name his gf?????/😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
hei nikita,
u keep it simple..dont worry a lot abt details..as u keep on writing u'll start including every detail..
loved their dance..
who is that girl who called shaan..
do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nikita its was too gud👍🏼awww i loved the way u described their chemistry wow...wish i was there to see it😃...oh no girly interruption,was that kamini?😔...i wonder what went wrong b/w the two of them...thnx niki for updating...waiting to find out what exactly happened in their life😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi friend ...flashback is not what u have expected ..please tell me if u like it 

Ch : 18



A girl voice called shaan.shaan turned around and saw .he smiled on looking at her 

and he said Kamini..and he went and hugged her.he was very happy on seeing 

her.ranveer went there.

Ranveer:Hi beautiful..

kamini:hi

shaan:hey dude this is kamini.my friend.she is my fathers friend daughter yar.

kamini is wearing a shirt with mini skirt it is only up to her thighs.

shaan:kamini this is my best friend ranveer.this is anant,aman raj they all shook 

hands.kamini this is jhanvi meera and this is khanak.when he was introducing 

khanak his face is full of joy and his eyes were sparkling.kamini did not shook 

hands with khanak.

kamini:hey u danced nice with the prince charming

khanak:thanks.

kamini was standing close with shaan holding his hand.on seeing that khanak face 

frowned a little.then there was music played and everyone went to dance.kamini 

asked shaan to dance with her.

khanak was sitting in the chair and thinking.i hate this kamini .how close she is 

standing near shaan..wait..am i jealous..no.no...she saw shaan.he was dancing 

happily with kamini..am i attrackted to him ..it is just infactuation she concluded..

Her phone rangand it was her mom.

khanak:mom..

vidhya:beta did the party over..

khanak:s mom it is over(on seeing at the direction of shaan)

vidhya:khanak beta can u come home now..

khanak:why mom?anything problem..

vidhya:nothing beta come home we can talk..

khanak:ok mom i will be there in ten min..

jhanvi:whats up man

khanak:mom called i have to go

jhanvi:any problem ?

khanak:no jhanvi nothing yar..i will call u later takecare..

when she entered her home there were people sitting..something struck her..those 

people where in lobby when she entered hotel.she went and said  namastey to 

everyone..her father introduced them this is amarnath singhania,her wife gayathri singhani 

and this is suraj singhani..

in khanak room

sharma:uncle nareen told about them a week before and we gave ur photo to 

them.yesterday they called us and told they will come and see u beta.when u went 

to the fairwell party at the hotel they saw u there and they liked u and they want 

u to be their daughter in law.

khanak was shocked on hearing it.

khanak:pappa i have finished my studies now only..

sharma:khanak beta ,suraj is a big doctor in mumbai at this young age..he has a 

foundation called Gods love..and his parents are very nice people.he has a sister 

in australia..they also said if u want to study higher or go for work anything u 

like u can do...beta if u like only i will accept this proposal

in the mind of khanak scenes flashed shaan and kamini dancing

khanak: ok pappa as your wish pappa

sharma:don't say this because of me..

khanak:no pappa i am ur daughter you will do only good for me..

khanak parents were happy..khanak and her parents came ...amarnath asked suraj to 

put the ring .khanak lifted her head and saw suraj when he was putting the ring..

he was smiling at her lovingly.he is simple matured guy he is 6 yrs older than 

khanak.

their marriage took place within a week and khanak was shifted to mumbai.suraj was 

a kind hearted loving man he loved khanak a lot when they reached mumbai he took 

her to gods love foundation ..he told everything and khanak was amused and she was 

happy to be his wife.he took khanak daily to foundation he made her to talk a lot 

to others since she is reserved type to strangers..it is been 6 days after 

marriage .they both were in foundation khanak was laughing and playing with the 

kids suraj came and stood there mesmerized..suraj said khanak u r upto ur 

name..khanak asked him what with a confused look ur name meaning is sound of 

joy..ur smiling face everything suits to khanak i love this name sirf khanak u r 

just khanak .so no more names added to ur name ok ..khanak was shy..meanwhile a phone 

came and suraj went to another hospital..while returning he 

died in the car accident..khanak marriage is over within a week..khanak was broken 

a lot she went to her moms house even there she was not able to overcome the 

loss..in delhi khanak parents changed their house..khanaks in laws went to 

australia to her daugters house leaving all the properties  to khanaks name

 a month later khanak came to mumbai and changed everything in to charity 

organisations appointing various trusties with a help of his dad and brother..and 

khanak stayed in her chacha chachis house(khanaks fathers brother).monica was 

there she made her cheerup...and every day she used to go to foundation ..and 

thought of suraj how he used to help others and make them happy that gave her 

strength..last month she joined in kapoors company ...



Promo:  present  day ..construction site..raining..khanak in shaans house...
























Edited by niki_rbo - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg😭That was really tragic...oh poor girl,at such a young age she already went through so much😭...That was so rude of Shaan if he was already going on with Kamini why dance so closely with Khanak😔...the update was really emotional Nikki,u wrote the flashback really well😊...im impatient for the next😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh no..marriage took place in a hurry within a week n over in a hurry within a week..its really tragic...as suraj said she'll be sirf khanak nothing added to it..
did their friends know of this marriage??do reply na..
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi friends..

ch :19

next morning khanak got up ..she saw monica was talking with someone in the phone..she 

smiled at her and she went to get ready..in the office while entering she saw anita..anita said 

hey khanak u go i will come to room yar. before shaan came she changed the flowers cleaned 

the table and she was taking letters that have come to the office  and she heard someone is 

opening the door she thought it was anita and she said..i miss u ..(while turning)..she was 

shocked...shaan was standing there..a inch away from each other...shaan said miss me..with

an eyebrow raised ..khanak was just starring at him ..shaan waved his hand in front of her.she 

came back to her senses.shaan was starring her from top to bottom.her cheeks turned to 

red..khanak moved a little from him ..sir i thought it was ani ..while she was saying this shaan 

went to his place as if she was not there.khanak was angry on seeing this.she went to her place 

she thought shantanu has changed a lot.later she was deep into her work.shaan gave her lot of 

works .. 

two to three days later 

shaan:khanak

khanak: s sir

shaan:come with me 

khanak:sir..with confused face..

shaan:i am going to constuction site u r my PA so come with me (in a teasing tone)

khanak;s sir ..she took her hand bag and went..

shaan was sitting in the car..and front door was opened for her... she slowly went to the car..if 

she went and sat in front somebody will think bad so she hesitated and waited..

shaan:look khanak first of all if i have to say anything to u i have to turn my head and i have to say 

and my neck will get sprained.

next before i could finish talking with u and turn there may be any accidents can occur. unknown 

people will think i am ur driver ..known people may think i am a egoist .. he is not taking his own 

staff equally...and he continued..

khanak was ah ..then she sat front with him .his hand brushed her knee while he changed 

gear..khanak felt a electric passing in her..and they went to constuction site .. 


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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update..
wat is awaiting in construction site??
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Nikki 

Just read all the parts ,,,,,,,,,,,Awesome dear 

LOved Shanak here, but last update was khatarnaak yaar ...Khanaks wedding & it ended in one week only 😭  LOved the way u discribed FB...Specially Kuch khaas hain sequance :)

Wow Shanak working in same office. shaan is Boss here & Khanak PA ...Wow Its Sounds Damn intrusting. 

Shaan Dont know abt Khanak marrage & all na???

Waiting for the next part ...conntinue Soon 

Love 
Pranjal