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LOVE STORY ch 45 END pg 32

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
 Hi Guys i am a silent reader. I love SHANAK i  thought of writing a small story on them.This is my first  attempt.some scenes may be filmy.some are original some from novels ...sorry for any of  mistakes .

           "LOVE STORY"



KHANAK SHARMA : A simple bubbly girl.Her world is around her  family  but She is Reserved when it comes to strangers.Her  father MR. sharma is a business man.Her mother MRS. Vidhya  Sharma a house wife loves her daughter khanak and their elder  son sanjay .her brother sanjay is working with his father  and  is married to anjali.  



SHANTANU KAPOOR: A  hot handsome guy he loves to be friendly  with everyone.He has lot of friends .he is mostly interested in  sports like basketball and swimming and car driving.His father  MR.rajiv kapoor a business man and his wife MRS. madavi kapoor  .his brother akshay kapoor has his own business and he also  looks after his father business and he is married to kusboo and  they have a son named aryan. 



Khanak and Shaan are studing in same college same class doing  their final year.they are in same class but they are known only  to be as class mates.she is with her friends and he is with his  gang in the starting years they were busy with their studies  there was tight work for all of them in final yr there main  thing was project compare to theory subjects.now story starts  from final yr only six months to end of college.


ch 1 - pg 1

ch 2 -pg 1

ch 3 -pg 1

ch 4- pg 2

ch 5- pg-2

ch 6- pg 3

ch 7- pg 4

ch 8- pg 4

ch 9- pg 5

ch 10- pg 5

ch 11- pg 6

ch 12- pg 6

ch 13- pg 7

ch 14- pg 8

ch 15- pg 8

ch 16- pg 9

ch 17-pg 9

ch 18 -pg 10

ch 19- pg 11

ch 20- pg 11

ch 21- pg 11

ch 22- pg 12

ch 23- pg 12

ch 24- pg 13

ch 25- pg 14

ch 26- pg 14

ch 27- pg 15

ch 28- pg 15

ch 29- pg 16

ch 30- pg 17

ch 31- pg 18

ch 32- pg 18

ch 33- pg 19

ch 34- pg 20

ch 35- pg 22

ch 36- pg 22

ch 37- pg 23

ch 38- pg 24

ch 39- pg 24

ch 40- pg 25

ch 41- pg 25

ch 42- pg 26

ch 43- pg 29

ch 44- pg 30

ch 45- pg 32


Edited by niki_rbo - 19 January 2012 at 9:35am

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nice

seems to be interesting in fact pretty gud

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 hi guys i am not that good at writing so googled for some sorry  for any mistakes

CH 1

Shaan and Khanak houses are in same area .Even they have cars  they go to college by bus with their friends.It was early sunday  morning , morning breeze hits khanak face. wearing a short  kurtha pink colour tops with white kurtha pants.since it was  early morning there were 5 to 6 people walking and  jogging.khanak also walking since it was daily routine one but  this time she was walking slowly thinking about yesterdays  night.

sanjay and his father came from office in the evening.khanak was  sitting and watching tv. anjali was in her room.father and her  brother went to their respective rooms to freshen up and her  mother went to make make coffe for them.Khanak father came and  joined with khanak and had is coffee.


in sanjay and anjalis room
sanjay sat in the chair and started removing shoes anjali came  there she placed a dried pea in his hand and said, "Want to hear  something amazing? This is how small your baby is right now."  His face went from confusion to joy and tears. he hugged his  wife in joy.sanjay told anjali lets tell our family.she was in  joy and shy.he took her hand with his walked towards hall.
 in the hall every one are seated and watching tv  sanjay and  anjali came there sanjay said "dad" every one looked them sanjay  face was with full of joy anjali was blushing .sanjay said  "Miracles and magic...
dreams come true...
we're in such a whirl!every one was confused then he said
"There's a new branch on the family tree".every one understood  MR and MRS sharma are very happy .sanjay and anjali took there  blushings.Khanak screamed in joy she hugged them amd teased  anjali.khanak was in happy mood she told her mather " mom i am  going to make a sweet for bhaiya and bhabi." she said and went  inside kitchen.vidhya was giving advice to her daughter in law  .while khanak was in kitchen others are in the hall and talking  .while she finished making sweet she was taking to them she was  stopped in the track .her father was telling to them about  khanak marriage many proposals  are coming we have to find a  proper one and finish her marriage after this six months when  her college ends.on hearing this she was shocked then she  composed herself and went and gave sweets to her brother and  bhabi.every one had sweets and talked about baby.

later in her room at night she could not able to sleep.she was  thinking about her father said.finally she concluded parents  will do only good still six months there khanak dont think of  it.
 

while thinking of this she was changed in her direction of walk  she did not know it.suddenly she was bumped into someone.



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Hey Niki ! :D Welcome to the RBO forum ! Or should I say thanks for speaking up :P. I'm SO glad more and more people are coming to the forum and opening up despite it being long since the show has ended :D Makes me even more prouder of RBO :D. I like the story. I can relate to it since I will be in their position next year (Woohoo the joy ! :/) Looking forward to how their relationship will start since they live in the same street and even study in the same class but still do not interact with each other much. Woah, a thought just struck me - is Khanak getting a rishta from Shaantanu's house ? Only you know that :P I'm eagerly looking forward to their first interaction ! ;D Do carry on ! I'm Ani by the way :)

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hi friends the story will be in the point of veiw of Khanak

ch 2:


while thinking of this she was changed in her direction of walk 

she did not know it.suddenly she was bumped into someone. 

 she was slipped about to fall pair of hands that made her to 

steady. his hands are in the shoulder of khanak making her to 

steady his face is very close to hers .she lifted her head to 

see ,she saw a pair of eyes which was staring at her she was 

mesmerized by those eyes  she was also starring back. it was a 

minute or two they came to realization when  a birds sound 

came.khanank suddenly moved from that person did not say 

anything she started walking from there very fast .her walking 

stopped when she went to her room.she breathed heavilly then 

closed here eyes remebered what happened.the person she bumped 

into was shantanu kapoor her classmate.when she closed her eyes 

she saw his mesmerizing eyes.khanak hit her head "oops I didnot 

say sorry to him "

remebering his face near hers that thought made her something 

then khanak shook her head   khanak "what am thinking"  "khanak 

khanak" her mom called her she then went to her mother


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hi friends

ch 3: 

khanak got ready for college

 she went to college there her friend jhanvi has come she is the

 best friend for khanak.

khanak: hi jhanu (smilied with joy her face shows that very 

clearly)
 
jhanvi: hey khanak whats the news u r looking show happy


khanak: jhanu  come on guess it.


jhanvi:uhh.. i think u might... lost some weight

 (laughing naughtly teasing her)

(*khanak gets tensed when they talk about structure  .she is  
chubby but not that fat she is beautifull)

khanak:urgh..(angrily)

khanak: i will not tell u


jhanvi:come on yar tell me  please iam ur best buddy know



khanak:ok i will tell but..

jhanavi: but what?

khanak: since u teased me u should get me a chocolate icecream 

during break


jhanvi:uff ok


khanak: i have become bhuwa jhanu( she hugged her with joy )


jhanvi: congrats man (joyfully).


jhanvi:(naughty face) waise khanak it is a happy news give me 

treat u should get me butterscotch milkshake


khanak: ok baba teek hai


jhanvi: nodded with a smiling face...khanak how is bhabi convey 
my regards to her.
 
khanak:umm..

tina:hey j and k goodmorning guys

khanak and jhanvi:hey t

(tina is one of their class mates to them she has lot boy 

friends she is jovial friendly frankly speaking person with her 

there are 2 to 3 girls always)


meera: hey guys


(meera is a friend to them she is in love with ranveer but 
jhanvi and khanak are more thick


ranveer is the close friend of shantanu he is also in love with 
meera).


behind meera their came ranveer 


ranveer:good morning meera

meera:hi

tina :ranveer we r all so here.

ranveer:um shake is head hi hi hi...

(even though khanak was there she will not think about others 

she will be watching things but mainly she shares with jhanvi 

she  only answers to questions that to short only if needed she 

talks to them)


khanak all of sudden little tensed...

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1st welcome to our forum.Smile

      ur story is really interesting . plz  continue soonSmile

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Nice story plz cont.n welcm to the forum

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