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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 6:44am | IP Logged
fabulous updates
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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Hi you write very wonderful .. no doubt in that
 but the font u use makes me difficult to read and also i cant read in my mobile wat u write clearly . i can only read it on PC but i mostly unse my Mobile  pleaseee can u pleasee change the font and that paragraph writing style. 


just said wat i feel if ur comfortable use this only Embarrassed
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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 6:48am | IP Logged
Chapters 8 & 9 Clap

The highlight for me is the clear depiction of Geet's POV
Geet missing Maan and realizing that she feels for him. Approve

However, I have one question for u Rose. 

Maan's feelings for G seems more like a physical desire though he has voiced out through his monologues that he likes Geet and this feeling is unlike what he felt for his previous women. Is he gonna explicitly state that he 'loves' Geet in the following chapter, considering the next one is the concluding chapter? Embarrassed Correct me if Im wrong

It would be interesting to see how this story is gonna culminate into a 'happily ever after' saga! Embarrassed





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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 7:11am | IP Logged
omg...the welcome maan has got from geet...no wonder he would want to be away longer now...hehe...i loved both parts...they were just great n awesome...continue soon...i guess am being addicted to this n the sweetest part is that he brought her a puppy...so sweet of him... :)))

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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 7:13am | IP Logged
loved the update..
oh my puppy thats a sweet gift to give...
so maan did let her to enjoy herself n didnt spoil it either by taking advantage...
waiting for the pool party
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great updates dear...their relationship id moving steadily forward

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