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Preeto ff-woh saat din-Last part-completed

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
finally i have tried my hand on a ff...

but it wont have tooo many parts...

Preeto ff - Part 1




Day 1

"Kya zarurat thi in sabki??" ... "Biji, apki beti doctor banne wali he. Kitna mushkil ho gya he aajkal medical seat milna. Ek party to banti he na?? Aur sab ghar ke log hi to aye he." "Par kal ka bhi to bahut kaam para he." "biji. ap na araam se baetho yahan pe. Maine aur ishu ne sab sambhal lena he." "tum dono apne aapko aur apne bacho ko sambhalo" Biji smiled at her 4yr old grandson who was single handedly destroying all party arrangements. Meeta di followed her gaze & her face lit up. Not dat it cud brighten up any more. She already had d soon-2-b-mother glow on her face.

 

Preeto ran behind her nephew. But he was too fast. She looked down to search him & her eyes fed upon d sight of all her family...together...happy...each finally settled in dere own lives...dere own life?...where was her life den??...its them...in dem... She sighed...no use asking d same question again & again... "Was it right? Whatever she had done. Watever had happened." Everybody assembled burst into cheers as Sonu entered d dhillon house...she hugged, took blessings...and finally under more applause cut a cake... "Thank you di" "College jaane ke pehle hi manners seekh rahi he?" "Preeto di...maine bhi party main kisi ko invite kiya he" "ha to kya hua?..kaha he wo?".

 

Preeto walked towards d person Baani had pointed to. 'Some teacher might be"...she thought...he was just standing over the threshold...when preeto said... "bahar kyu khare he? Andar aaiye na." "Aa jau?...Pukka?" Rajbeer turned to face preeto... their eyes feasted themselves on each other...seven very long years had passed. Rb refreshed his often revised memory of d changing hues & contours of preeto's face...her shock...surprise...bliss...shyness...& finally...it took a moment more 2 read it...but he read her fidgeting fingers...2 uncover d emotion of fear... "kya hua? Bhoot dekh liya kya?"...before she could recover...every1 else had taken notice of him...& a series of greetings had followed...

 

"Calories ka dhyan rakhne lagi kya??" Rb had found her alone with 1 poori on her plate... "waise figure to kafi acchi maintain ki he!" preeto who had opened her mouth 2 retort d calories comment, simply gazed wide mouthed. Rb put a piece of d poori into it & caressing her cheek bones, slightly pushed close her mouth. Preeto, who had anyway till den been unable to say anything, felt all power of speech leave her. "Shagun ho gya...ab khud khao..." Her heart raced out to him...he still remembers...just like her...d way she had lived dese 7yrs...reliving their moments together...in a way dat everything...a glass, a stick, a bangle...reminded her of him... Had he done d same?


Baethe baethe kya kare...& started d age old game of antakshari...dhillons never get fed up of it!!..."abhi kuch dino se lag raha he...badle badle se hum hain..." an old video started playing in preeto's head...their early moments together...d teasing...d understanding...d friendship...and...d love... As if by cue, d singing stopped and it was Rb's turn. "Bin tere kya he jeena...Mere dil ki raani tum"...He had claimed her with his kiss one evening..."Meri khushiyo ka mausam"...d rains had wet their confession... "mere khwabo ki tabeez"... he had wanted to see her in his granmom's dupatta... "mere sapno ki tasveer"... wondering if she would look d way he had painted her... "Bin tere kaisi aar...wo jeet ho ya haar"... But she had told him to find his own happiness... "tere sang hain sab kuch"... away from her... "tu na ho to bekaar"... she separated them...their love.. "Bin tere kya hai jeena".... & he had died every day since then...for d last seven years...

 

His voice choked and he went 2 get some water. He didn't know wat had come over him. All dese years he had kept his calm. But today, in front of her, he was overcome with all his buried feelings. So long he had pined for her, dat now... Rajbeer's hand shook with d effort of getting a grip on his heart. Preeto held his shivering hand...Back in d hall dhruv was strumming his guitar... "dhaage tod laao chaanadni se noor ke"...she looked so heavenly in d white glow of d moonlight... "ghoonghat hi bana lo roshni se noor ke"... his arms went around her and he pulled her dupatta on her head... "sharmaa gayi toh aaghosh mein lo"... She had spent nights dreaming of him and as he scorched her with his gaze...she couldn't look at him anymore... "ho saanson se ulajhi rahein meri saansein"... his warm breath grazed her neck... "bol na halke halke"...his palms slid under her ears as he raised her face to him... and... in a moment like lightning...all the warmth vanished...& he shoved her away from him...anger firing up his face...




The following are d links of d songs i have quoted
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lp-oNXhyFd0
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oud2HCCOi5Q
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9n5oNAxdKec

Index:
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
part 8
part 9 & 10
Part 11
part 12
Last Part

Please let me know how it is...press d like button/comment/criticize/suggest...




Edited by sen_madhuban - 26 February 2012 at 12:00am

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Always love your writings Madhu dear and this is no exception..

Saat saal judai Hajam nahi hora yaar Cry...

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 3:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sen_madhuban

finally i have tried my hand on a ff...

but it wont have tooo many parts...

Preeto ff - woh saat din...Part 1


Day 1

"Kya zarurat thi in sabki??" ... "Biji, apki beti doctor banne wali he. Kitna mushkil ho gya he aajkal medical seat milna. Ek party to banti he na?? Aur sab ghar ke log hi to aye he." "Par kal ka bhi to bahut kaam para he." "biji. ap na araam se baetho yahan pe. Maine aur ishu ne sab sambhal lena he." "tum dono apne aapko aur apne bacho ko sambhalo" Biji smiled at her 4yr old grandson who was single handedly destroying all party arrangements. Meeta di followed her gaze & her face lit up. Not dat it cud brighten up any more. She already had d soon-2-b-mother glow on her face.

 

Preeto ran behind her nephew. But he was too fast. She looked down to search him & her eyes fed upon d sight of all her family...together...happy...each finally settled in dere own lives...dere own life?...where was her life den??...its them...in dem... She sighed...no use asking d same question again & again... "Was it right? Whatever she had done. Watever had happened." Everybody assembled burst into cheers as Sonu entered d dhillon house...she hugged, took blessings...and finally under more applause cut a cake... "Thank you di" "College jaane ke pehle hi manners seekh rahi he?" "Preeto di...maine bhi party main kisi ko invite kiya he" "ha to kya hua?..kaha he wo?".

 

Preeto walked towards d person Baani had pointed to. 'Some teacher might be"...she thought...he was just standing over the threshold...when preeto said... "bahar kyu khare he? Andar aaiye na." "Aa jau?...Pukka?" Rajbeer turned to face preeto... their eyes feasted themselves on each other...seven very long years had passed. Rb refreshed his often revised memory of d changing hues & contours of preeto's face...her shock...surprise...bliss...shyness...& finally...it took a moment more 2 read it...but he read her fidgeting fingers...2 uncover d emotion of fear... "kya hua? Bhoot dekh liya kya?"...before she could recover...every1 else had taken notice of him...& a series of greetings had followed...

 

"Calories ka dhyan rakhne lagi kya??" Rb had found her alone with 1 poori on her plate... "waise figure to kafi acchi maintain ki he!" preeto who had opened her mouth 2 retort d calories comment, simply gazed wide mouthed. Rb put a piece of d poori into it & caressing her cheek bones, slightly pushed close her mouth. Preeto, who had anyway till den been unable to say anything, felt all power of speech leave her. "Shagun ho gya...ab khud khao..." Her heart raced out to him...he still remembers...just like her...d way she had lived dese 7yrs...reliving their moments together...in a way dat everything...a glass, a stick, a bangle...reminded her of him... Had he done d same?


Baethe baethe kya kare...& started d age old game of antakshari...dhillons never get fed up of it!!..."abhi kuch dino se lag raha he...badle badle se hum hain..." an old video started playing in preeto's head...their early moments together...d teasing...d understanding...d friendship...and...d love... As if by cue, d singing stopped and it was Rb's turn. "Bin tere kya he jeena...Mere dil ki raani tum"...He had claimed her with his kiss one evening..."Meri khushiyo ka mausam"...d rains had wet their confession... "mere khwabo ki tabeez"... he had wanted to see her in his granmom's dupatta... "mere sapno ki tasveer"... wondering if she would look d way he had painted her... "Bin tere kaisi aar...wo jeet ho ya haar"... But she had told him to find his own happiness... "tere sang hain sab kuch"... away from her... "tu na ho to bekaar"... she separated them...their love.. "Bin tere kya hai jeena".... & he had died every day since then...for d last seven years...

 

His voice choked and he went 2 get some water. He didn't know wat had come over him. All dese years he had kept his calm. But today, in front of her, he was overcome with all his buried feelings. So long he had pined for her, dat now... Rajbeer's hand shook with d effort of getting a grip on his heart. Preeto held his shivering hand...Back in d hall dhruv was strumming his guitar... "dhaage tod laao chaanadni se noor ke"...she looked so heavenly in d white glow of d moonlight... "ghoonghat hi bana lo roshni se noor ke"... his arms went around her and he pulled her dupatta on her head... "sharmaa gayi toh aaghosh mein lo"... She had spent nights dreaming of him and as he scorched her with his gaze...she couldn't look at him anymore... "ho saanson se ulajhi rahein meri saansein"... his warm breath grazed her neck... "bol na halke halke"...his palms slid under her ears as he raised her face to him... and... in a moment like lightning...all the warmth vanished...& he shoved her away from him...anger firing up his face...




The following are d links of d songs i have quoted
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lp-oNXhyFd0
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oud2HCCOi5Q
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9n5oNAxdKec



Please let me know how it is...press d like button/comment/criticize/suggest...


Very good..but saat saal judai ..haye 

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 7:52pm | IP Logged
Amazinggg Madhu dear...Loved it very well written...Clap
saat saal judai which means can expect some more n more cuteee romantic scenes of Rajpreet...Wink
waiting for next part...Big smile

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Posted: 17 December 2011 at 9:59pm | IP Logged
 super post...but plz saath saal ki judai... no...saat day chalega.Smile

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 12:35am | IP Logged
Cry Madhu saat saal ki judaayi nahin hai bardaast hume. Aur waise bhi defence posting kisi ek jagah mein 3 saal se zyaada nahin hoti including Air Force. CryToh saat saal tak Amritsar me nahin ho sakte RB aur Dhruv aur koi alag posting ho gayi ho toh RB ko wapas laane me dikat ho jaayegi. Wink

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 5:32am | IP Logged
 lovely posttt

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Just V Lovely Post...sooo nice

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