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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 2:05am | IP Logged
Hmm it was truly fantastic lyraa... very few posts abt lavanya's POV right now..
 
even she might be hurt as much as khushi during diwali night.., poor girl.. good for her atleast now she has realised the truth and decided to move on...
 
very good post!!!!

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 3:45am | IP Logged
it was grt...exactly portraying z emotions of lavanya :)
fnx 4 z pm

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 4:42am | IP Logged
That was beautiful. Lavanya's feelings described her heart-broken situation. And then the flicker of hope  in a pair of softest warmest brown eyes I had ever seen. It was that moment...
I really do hope that Lavanya finds her someone. Thanks for the PM.


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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 6:37am | IP Logged
this was beautiful:-)

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 7:19am | IP Logged
So heart touching. Beautifully written.
I so love the ending though wish saw the face with the warmest brown eyes...

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 7:39am | IP Logged
Awww superb
 
Just fabulous =)
 
Really liked the way you have wriiten la's emotions and all =)
 
Brilliant =)
 
 

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Posted: 18 December 2011 at 7:49am | IP Logged
very well written

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Posted: 19 December 2011 at 4:45pm | IP Logged
Lyraa.
A beautiful OS hun.
You've penned Lavanya's thoughts and feelings perfectly.
I love the way she looks at Arnav and Khushi, as if with a fresh pair of eyes.
I'm glad she fell in the arms of someone she would love forever, and hopefully be loved in return.
Nicely done sweety.
Thanks for the PM.
Star

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